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The Factory

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The FactoryG_GEORGE_N
A Good Detailed Platformer, with some original ideas!
Explore, a working factory, conqour obstacles and have fun!
My first "Official Level" I am a good creator, but i've failed to finish any major level so i made this small project
The level is set in a factory (obvious) with some good detail, and obstacles,
The levels a little short but the thermo maxed out and the thermo cheat was making it unplayable
However an enjoyable level, which will please even the "hardcore gamers"

http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=25833

http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=25832

Feed back is of the UPMOST importance!
Thank you for playing!
:star::star::star::star::star: <3
2010-10-12 16:16:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hi GEORGE!!! i was play ur level it has seemed to me to be funny, gives me taste to see your finished work and has seemed to me to be interesting, enterteining and especially clean, there is a good managing of switches and is splendid to be walked for them mesh and to do bent with the bubbles, i congratulate you it is a fantastic level.

I have given you 5 :star:'S

I wait could play to my new level and say your opinion to me thank you: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=37548-Sacktastic-Ptts-Pipe-Dreams-(LBP2)
2010-10-12 18:15:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562


I just played your level and heres my feedback:

Positives:
+Design looked really good for the level
+VIsuals looked great
+Platforming was fun
+Puzzle you had was pretty original

Negatives:
-The hints in the beginning kind of killed the mood of even trying to figure out how to find the switch lol.

Sugguestions:
-When you cut on the power you should show the building at least lighting up through the 4 windows you have in the beginning or had the lights on the power switch come on to indicate something has came on.

Overall the level was very good::star::star::star::star: I aced and got #1
2010-10-13 12:03:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


Thank you for feedback i'll surley update and 2010-10-16 07:32:00

Author:
Unknown User


Nice industrial level! Everything played nicely and the game play flowed well.

My only criticism is maybe some extra detail added? Such as lighting effects? Only my preference though, the level looked great!

Overall I rated :star::star::star::star: (I loved the level, but I didn't feel it deserved a 'Must Play' rating) and hearted <3


Keep creating!
2010-10-27 03:57:00

Author:
Mr_T-Shirt
Posts: 1477


Thank You For Feedback!2010-10-27 19:04:00

Author:
Unknown User


I finished your level just now.

Rating: Overall I give you a 8/10 (:star: X4 and a <3)

• Design was nice 8/10
- I liked the puzzles and the cart jumping sequence.

• Visuals were okay 6/10
- I really think you could do a bit more with decoration and lighting. (show some contrast to help lead people around)

• There was some good plat forming 9/10
- Nothing bad really just in some parts it could have had more obstacles.

Suggestions:
1. Add some lighting changes. It is really important, it can show people what you have and also can lead them to the goal.

2. Fill in some of the walls. There was one point i noticed a wall that was mainly undecorated, while that wasn't bad it wasn't great.

I really enjoyed playing it. Keep up the good work.
2010-10-28 02:19:00

Author:
TheAffected
Posts: 626


I played this a the weekend.
The different challenges were fun and interesting!
The level was really like a factory which was good and i didnt get bored at any point.
5 stars from me
2010-11-02 16:38:00

Author:
Fenderjt
Posts: 1969


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