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Dawn Metropolis

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This is a HUGE project im making for lbp2. I dont care if it takes up my whole moon as long as i make it awesome and that i complete it.Its basically be an RPG game expect that it will have other elements of other type of game-play. Such as racing, RTS, etc.

STORY Your are enrolled in THE LARGEST school in LBP history. An average high school size is just a section of this school. You play the character named Donald J. Noble (sorry girls had to make it a boy).i finally got the story and title, but i had to make a few changes. So your a new student in Dawn
Metropolis Tec. after a couple of the days in the school, the gang leaders need a some help to pull a prank to get revenge(im not going to spoil too much) on the principal, however things go bad, and your left alone to be caught and take the blame. Close to getting expelled,the principal however, makes a deal, capture all the people who were involved and he will forget everything that happened.

So far i got these 2 screen shots

Apparently the school is so big it has a trains to take you to parts of the school
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_62.jpg

You dorm room, or should i say loft
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_6-2.jpg

Donald J. Noble (Note his appearance may change)
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_52.jpg
His girl friend (insert name)
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_42.jpg

more pictues guys ill explain more about the characters later on
Nerd gang leader
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_7-1.jpg
Skater gang leader
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_28.jpg
Jock gang leader
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_9-2.jpg
Thespian gang leader
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_14.jpg		2010-10-10 21:10:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

So it's 1 level or series?2010-10-10 21:29:00

Author:
Shadowriver
Posts: 3991

its going to be a series2010-10-10 21:51:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

Would I be correct to assume you got inspired by the story of the characters in your sig somewhat? 2010-10-10 22:09:00

Author:
Silverleon
Posts: 6707

But there 7 Evil-Ex'es, not 6 2010-10-10 22:23:00

Author:
Shadowriver
Posts: 3991

if it were my school you'd also have the farm kids/ vocational clique.

also religious fanatics but that one could be touchy.		2010-10-10 22:43:00

Author:
Deftmute
Posts: 730

Well there lot of sub-cultures you could include in game it would be the best if @wait wtf flood the level in his school experience2010-10-10 22:55:00

Author:
Shadowriver
Posts: 3991

no it would be best if he flooded his levels with MY school experiences 2010-10-10 23:32:00

Author:
Deftmute
Posts: 730

Well everybody have different experience from the school, o you could use general (and most likely national) social mythology about school2010-10-11 00:12:00

Author:
Shadowriver
Posts: 3991

awesome you picked my first name to be the main character also it sounds pretty awesome hopefully it wont go down the tube.2010-10-11 00:15:00

Author:
Lgjoka2002
Posts: 538

Well everybody have different experience from the school, o you could use general (and most likely national) social mythology about school

that last comment was a joke. sorry if that wasnt clear.		2010-10-11 00:19:00

Author:
Deftmute
Posts: 730

wait wtf flood the level in his school experience
i would flood it half of my experiences, myths about high school and so on. And if you guys want to hear more info just let me know in the comments,

and oh yeah i have 2 pictures of the school, well not really just parts of the school
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_62.jpg
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_6-2.jpg		2010-10-11 02:50:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

My OCD is overcoming me... b... but... how come the girl has a uniform but the boy doesn't D:

Oh no! I said it! Nuuuuuu!

But this does sound neat. Nice idea.		2010-10-11 03:22:00

Author:
Kog
Posts: 2358

My OCD is overcoming me... b... but... how come the girl has a uniform but the boy doesn't D:

Oh no! I said it! Nuuuuuu!

But this does sound neat. Nice idea.

its just what he normally wears after school, since this is an RPG whatever he wears, it may effect his stats		2010-10-11 03:56:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

First I thought "Sounds OK, as long as it's not like that awful one that floods the Cool Pages every now and then".

Then I heard "Clothes" and "Stats". Now I want it. Gimme gimme!

Also, I have to say, the skull's mouth on the train just doesn't seem 'right', if you see what I mean. I'm picturing the London Underground here though, so maybe it is OK

EDIt: Voted 'yes' in the poll, taking it from 0% to 100%. Go me 		2010-10-11 18:37:00

Author:
kirbyman62
Posts: 1893

more pictues guys ill explain more about the characters later on
Nerd gang leader
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_7-1.jpg
Skater gang leader
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_28.jpg
Jock gang leader
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_9-2.jpg
Thespian gang leader
http://i676.photobucket.com/albums/vv125/rvbfan/APhoto_14.jpg		2010-10-13 05:44:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

Heh heh, I was searching "social mythology about high school" to try to find something useful to add here, and on the first page, one of the options was a link to this topic. : D2010-10-14 22:15:00

Author:
Prince Pixelton
Posts: 286

Heh heh, I was searching "social mythology about high school" to try to find something useful to add here, and on the first page, one of the options was a link to this topic. : D

so any suggestions since you looked it up?		2010-10-14 23:57:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

Actually I didn't find any yet. Probably because I suck at research. Just one thing; if this becomes Scott Pilgrim-hilarious, I will love you. Forever.


Definately make one the bosses sing like Mathew Patel. :3 That's all I got.		2010-10-15 02:22:00

Author:
Prince Pixelton
Posts: 286

Actually I didn't find any yet. Probably because I suck at research. Just one thing; if this becomes Scott Pilgrim-hilarious, I will love you. Forever.


Definately make one the bosses sing like Mathew Patel. :3 That's all I got.

Ill tell you one thing im planning to make the boss battle of the band geeks like the twins fight in the movie 		2010-10-15 03:00:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

Very Nice level. First i'll give you the +. The icon is great it really grabs attention, the quick paced for of story telling is very nice change from slow paced levels, the title is great and a you used the 3d glitch well. the thing that you might want to fix are when you make a sack person always make them flat, some were a layer thick, study real building layout and building specs so you can get stairs and stuff right. your stairs should be 2x,1x not 1x,1x. Also try looking up "Letters" in community to get so better text for your level. besides that all is good. ^-^2010-11-19 03:53:00

Author:
jowife1993
Posts: 80

Sorry i posted my last comment on the right page2010-11-19 03:59:00

Author:
jowife1993
Posts: 80

band-geeks
You are my hero.

If this turns out good, I'll definitely play it, as long as it doesn't turn out as one of those "Survive High School part 52!!!1one!9!!" levels.		2010-11-19 23:23:00

Author:
kodymcq
Posts: 281

i made a thread (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=38259-A-Exaggerating-Story-%28update%29) that has most of the character descriptions (im still working on them)2010-11-20 00:32:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

okay i finally got the name of the game and the story,but i had to make a few changes. So your a new student in Dawn Metropolis Tec. after a couple of the days in the school, the gang leaders need a some help to pull a prank to get revenge(im not going to spoil too much) on the principal, however things go bad, and your left alone to be caught and take the blame. Close to getting expelled,the principal however, makes a deal, capture all the people who were involved and he will forget everything that happened.

I also add some new things.
-An R.O.T.C Base for people in R.O.T.C
-A bicycle highway
-a prison that is kinda like detention hall but worse
-underground weapon shops (paint guns, etc.)
-The game will be kinda like gta, free-roaming and doing some missions that will help you defeat a gang leader.
-a weapon that will help make the game easier but you will have to find the parts for it.		2011-01-17 04:38:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

That sounds awsome i wish i could help with that project.
but out of curiosity will it be a platformed or a or a 3-person type deal or mixed?		2011-01-17 05:19:00

Author:
Lgjoka2002
Posts: 538

im sorry that last post made wasnt pacific, it will be like side scrolling. ill build each are are in different parts so it isnt like one long area, and when you reach you a certain area like, a curve in the road or an alley way, a button will appear saying that pressing X for example will move you to a different part of the area. Each level will be on one specific area of the school, but the area where all the dorm apartments is the main area and will always be in each level.2011-01-17 20:10:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

Well good news people, the combat a.i for donald is done! i also plan to release a demo for the game, it just give the run down on the controls and combat and an introduction the the school its self. If the series is really successful i might make some "add-ons" for the game2011-02-08 03:10:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

Your gang leader images/characters are great. 2011-02-08 04:49:00

Author:
midnight_heist
Posts: 2513

This sounds cool ^^ I like the fact that the designs for the characters aren't typical, like the main character He definitely doesnt appear to be the coolest guy in school, but it seems that he is the guy that is overlooked that will change the world (...*cough *cough Bill Gates lol jk) but yh, sounding and looking good. Wanna see more.2011-02-08 21:41:00

Author:
lyrradXOX
Posts: 285

UPDATE TIME!!! So im releasing a demo, that covers half of the basics of the game, i say its about 40% done. The demo will cover on the basic concept of platforming, combat, 1 mission, roaming around 1 part of the school, and an intro to show how the school looks like. Note i do need help with this project, tho i will be accepting request after the demo is released. So if you are interested, message me. So far im looking for a person whos good at logic, a person whos good at detailing, and a music person2011-02-25 00:48:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=52814-Dawn-Metropolis-%28DEMO%29&p=804450 The demo is finally out guys!!2011-03-13 20:03:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

okay i know this is a HUGE bump and a third double post (should i call it triple post?) Anyway i've been writing the story and notice that there's so much dialogue and less missions. This got me thinking should instead turn this into a show for lbp2? Help me decide guys cause this has been in my mind for quite awhile2011-06-16 00:05:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

A story with a ton of dialougue means a lot of good voice acting. You could always use speech bubbles, but I think that if your planning on making a big production, the voice acting can bring in quite a few more players.
In my opinion, I would stick with the playable levels. Youve already got a gameplay demo, why would you completely change something when youve already got a good start on it?
The easy road isnt always the best road to travel down, m8 		2011-06-16 03:22:00

Author:
grayspence
Posts: 1990

hmm very inspiring words, yet the only problems is , I NEED HELP WITH THIS PROJECT!!!!!, at first i thought it can do it myself but things kinda got out of hand. I ask for some help but so far no one is responding, so if you want to be part of this awesome project SIGN UP KIDS!!!2011-06-16 03:56:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853

now forgive this double post but i have finally decide to make this game a turn based rpg, and if you guys have been wonder way this game hasnt been published yet, well its kinda hard to explain. Anyway i have decided to kinda parody some rpg elements such as magic, to make it fit in the game. Magic has been change to "prank items". To show some examples
Fire Cracker-Fire
Snowball-Ice
Bandages- Cure
ummm joybuzzer(still think about that)?-Thunder
Items will be called backpack, example of the items
Soda-Potion
Resupply-Ether

Anyway i still need help with this project so if your good with turn based rpg logic, or making music fill free to reply!		2011-08-14 01:45:00

Author:
wait wtf
Posts: 853


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