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Hey guys! Made a new sig and I sort of wanted some C&C on it

I've been hooked on Fight Club (and Brad Pitt) for a while, and while I was searching through some Render Forums I was inspired to make a Tyler Durden signature, so, what do you think? (Banner was also made by me xD)
Also, I was thinking about giving this to rtm, because of this (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=35923-Insomnia&p=622440#post622440) post

Anyway, thanks for stopping by!

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"I Am Jack's Smirking Revenge."
2010-10-08 05:09:00

Author:
Unknown User


This is why I started learning about philosophy and psychology:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=98LeLZ2crZE&feature=related
2010-10-08 18:59:00

Author:
Bremnen
Posts: 1800


Nice, I like how Tyler Durden is in the back that represents the subliminal Messaging found in the movie.
(Or at least that is what I assume its from)
2010-10-08 23:58:00

Author:
Unknown User


Some cnc:

When placing elements in a sig try to follow the rule of thirds (http://photoinf.com/Golden_Mean/Michael_Fodor/Photo_School_-_Rule_of_Thirds/ruleofthirds.jpg). Basically the idea is to get the main focal point where any of the lines intersect. (You don't have to follow it but sometimes it works better)

I like the concept of the sig and the small effects work well. The lighting and depth is also pretty good but could be improved with a bit of burning and dodging.

Overall good job m8 KIU
2010-10-09 00:52:00

Author:
rseah
Posts: 2701


THANK YOU. Finally SOMEONE gives me pointers >>'

I love you <3
2010-10-09 00:54:00

Author:
Unknown User


Pointers? Remove the green lines on the left.
Or was that already said?
2010-10-09 01:00:00

Author:
Unknown User


Surprised you even saw those, that's not really a pointer xD it's more of an opinion cuz I like those lines....2010-10-09 01:12:00

Author:
Unknown User


Is there very faint letters to the left of Jack?2010-10-09 02:40:00

Author:
Unknown User


Nope, only text is the one that says Tyler Durden2010-10-09 02:49:00

Author:
Unknown User


what do you think?

The first rule of project mayhem is you do not ask questions.

I just thought I'd come by and drop that in there I don't really do sigs, so I don't have much advice to give here, but it is pretty cool, and I'm digging the Tyler face on the side - it's just subtle enough that you don't see it straight away, but you also can't miss it Nice
2010-10-09 11:49:00

Author:
rtm223
Posts: 6497


A few things of note...

The border is a nice touch - mimicing the faded text tones.

The positioning of the text is odd - you've chosen a busy area to put it and there isn't much contrast between the text and the background. In addition, you've overlaid the Durden (not wrong in itself) so that the D is almost lost.

I only know of one artist on this forum that manages to pull off a central focal point and it ain't you or me... Personally, I would have offset the main FP and put just one faded image to one side, rather than duplicate it to either side.

Just opinions...

Rhy
2010-10-09 12:39:00

Author:
Rhyfelwr
Posts: 606


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