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Dragon Quest

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Dragon QuestDevinOde
Chapter one : Released
It's not much... but it's supposed to just be kind of a starter to a story which I don't know how long it will be. If someone could provide a screenshot or 2 that might be nice. Just search my name for the level.
2010-10-07 22:35:00

Author:
ode1234
Posts: 59


k i'll try it when i get home...2010-10-07 23:38:00

Author:
sackboy7789
Posts: 280


Really? no feedback... no helpful tips.. nothin.2010-10-08 22:11:00

Author:
ode1234
Posts: 59


Do not panic!!! Hero Bal is on the way!!!!2010-10-08 22:44:00

Author:
Balgarino
Posts: 377


Really? no feedback... no helpful tips.. nothin.

Be patient, I'll download it in my next batch and give a little

EDIT:

A short level, but looks good. There is only a tiny gripe I don't like, but doesnt detract from the level. When you grab an object to put into into what I'm guessing is some sort of inventory, the magic mouth only activates for a fraction of a second, meaning I have to push the button agian to see what it said; like I said, nothing major but if it did it for everything it could get a litte pesky.

The only thing I would add is to make use of the layers a little more, even though you used corner editor well, it was all using a 2 layer thick. Try using single thick layers to add separate paths and hills to give the player the feeling they have a choice in which route they can take.

Gave it :star::star::star::star:

-Pete
2010-10-08 22:45:00

Author:
Pete1991
Posts: 225


lol sorry for the impatience. I just wanted to know if I should continue. my second level I should edit a bit and add some alternate paths. I already finished the basis of it. I just need some enemies. So.. I don't mean to sound pathetic but could someone who's good with characters possibly make me a bandit enemy. Im not the best at human characters. and as far as the mouth... I think the activation area isnt all the way to the ground so you fall out of it once you grab the log. or something. I'm not sure.

Edit: Also, I just made a boosfight/minigame but it only fits after the 2nd chapter. sooo... I won't release it til that's done.
2010-10-08 23:43:00

Author:
ode1234
Posts: 59


Really? no feedback... no helpful tips.. nothin.

Your old pal Questor will help. I'll download it today and give feedback either today or tomorrow.
2010-10-09 00:09:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Thanks buddy2010-10-09 00:17:00

Author:
ode1234
Posts: 59


No problem chum!2010-10-09 00:20:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Thanks a ton, chief2010-10-09 00:22:00

Author:
ode1234
Posts: 59


Off-Topic post
You Sexy Ginger (Lols)

On-Topic post
What am I doing posting when I should be downloading then playing!?
2010-10-09 00:28:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


haha im not even a ginger bro
duh hell? xD
2010-10-09 00:39:00

Author:
ode1234
Posts: 59


Ohmigod i upgraded from lint to thread [ :,'2010-10-09 00:43:00

Author:
ode1234
Posts: 59


Ohmigod i upgraded from lint to thread [ :,'

Carefull with the double posting my friend or you'll be a lint again quickly
2010-10-09 01:21:00

Author:
Pete1991
Posts: 225


Haha yea, sorry. I haven't been on a forum in a long time..2010-10-09 01:23:00

Author:
ode1234
Posts: 59


Haha yea, sorry. I haven't been on a forum in a long time..

Not to worry, it wasn't a warning, just a friendly reminder

I'm starting to feel like my mother now
2010-10-09 01:30:00

Author:
Pete1991
Posts: 225


I'm just really nice...Well that's what it says about me if you roll your mouse cursor over my green bars.
I just realised your PSN is DevinOde not DivineOde. I was searching for @DevineOde for your level.
2010-10-09 02:57:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Haha. nice.2010-10-09 03:02:00

Author:
ode1234
Posts: 59


I'm going to download it RIGHT NOW and give you feed back tonight or tomorrow morning.

EDIT: It's tomorrow morning,

So, I started off noticing nice corner edit. The scenery throughout the level was nice, the only flaw about this level is how short it is. You could've easily made the entire series in this level. Also, every time a picked up an item the speech bubble quickly popped on but before I can read anything it popped off. Just increase the radius for the magic mouth Ode.
2010-10-09 03:04:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Yea well. I just wanted to make some chapters.. transitioning into different scenery would be awkward. plus. I have a boss minigame which couldn't have fit into the same as a platformer level. would you like to see this?

Edit: P.s. I'm fixing the mouths as we speak.. then I'll continue fixing the 2nd level. making it a bit more interesting..

Edit: again.. haha. Well, the radius was already very large. and you could well fit in the area. So, I'm not entirely sure how to fix it. I have it wired so when you grab the log, the mouth activates. is this wrong?
2010-10-09 17:11:00

Author:
ode1234
Posts: 59


I'm back! (finally).

You have some good corner editing skills,but you lacked stickers.You could've used more stickers in many areas (I noticed some good stickering places).The trees were cool,not sure how you wanted them to look like,so I can't say they need some work,but if you're not happy with the look...then they need some work and the house needed some work too,cause it was just a grid painted rectangle and that made it feel plain and boring.Try not to copy paste so much next time,the tree trunk felt very repetitive.I can see you wanted your material selection to look original,right? Well,it does look original and I liked it,but it could've been better if you added a background.You left the background blue,did you want to make it look like the sky? The Tinsel town background has some nice clouds,if you go way up in create mode you can see them.
The music isn't really fitting,that song would've fit well in a cave level or something,but not in here (that's my opinion).
The level wasn't fun at all for me,I just found my self walking a lot and that's not fun,try some obstacles next time.

This level had nice things,but try to work more on them next time and never rush your levels if you get impatient or if you think you can't make something work well,just ask for help, work hard,be patient and you got yourself a good level.

EDIT:Forgot to mention the character was cool.
2010-10-09 17:51:00

Author:
Balgarino
Posts: 377


Ok so. the house. I admit was lacking indeed. I couldn't decide on a good shape.. or a good roof. the sky. indeed was intended to be blue i didnt figure clouds would be fitting so low.. I'm not much of a sticker person but I suppose I could work on it. Yes, the tree was repetetive, I apologize. As for the length of the level and the gameplay. this level was just sort of a preview. I didn't intend on it being a full blown level.
P.S. I'm glad you guys enjoy the corner editing. As I've mentioned before, linerider gave me a lot of practice with rounding edges and such. At least I have the patience for that..
2010-10-09 18:01:00

Author:
ode1234
Posts: 59


hi there ode!

i was just wandering around the new levels section of the community moon and for any reason i downloaded your level, and i played it (ofc) and here is what i got from the level:

IT WAS TOO SMALL!
, i mean, it was good, the corner editing was great and the grass was awsome, and i bet if it was bigger, it whould make an awsome RPG, with dragons, knights, and bunnies , seriously, even the dragon egg was well designed... but there was this little thing that prevented me from hearting it (the "small'ity" )

update it, make it bigger and create an awsome level, at least as awsome as its intro, and i'll heart it for sure

BTW, i gave it 5 stars
2010-10-09 22:29:00

Author:
nosemomkey
Posts: 414


Oh, I gave it 3 Stars. Sorry if that's not what you wanted but that's what I felt appropriate to give.2010-10-10 01:16:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Nono it's quite appropriate i suppose for someone who was expecting a full level. but i cant stress this enough guys, this isn't a full level. It's a previw of what's to come

By the way questor, I need your help... I cannot think of any good enemies to place on my 2nd chapter.. i would perhaps like some help.
2010-10-11 00:53:00

Author:
ode1234
Posts: 59


Okay, I'll make some enemies for you, and give them to you via LittleBigLock. What kind of enemies do you want?2010-10-11 01:10:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


Good level, but short. I think that Anti Back-story technology i invented would be needed there. Want me to teach you to do it?2010-10-11 08:31:00

Author:
EdwardTen
Posts: 43


Please PM us about it. We'll SPAM if we continue this conversation.2010-10-11 15:40:00

Author:
The-Questor
Posts: 1328


idk medieval knights would be nice. maybe a sorcerer or an archer..

I apologize in advance if i reject your characters so maybe you want to send me one so i can check it out before you do a bunch...
2010-10-12 03:05:00

Author:
ode1234
Posts: 59


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