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Little Big HorrorHistoryBoy Set in a stereotypical "classic horror" gothic castle Sackboy is asked to reanimate Frankenstien's Monster and then escort him from the castle from the angry villagers. It's only my second attempt at making a level and is filled with the usual; swinging, racing and jumping which Sackboy does so well! Hope you enjoy! http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a375/barba007/APhoto.jpg http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a375/barba007/APhoto_4.jpg http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a375/barba007/APhoto_3.jpg http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a375/barba007/APhoto_2.jpg http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a375/barba007/APhoto_1.jpg

2010-10-06 17:32:00 Author: HistoryBoy Posts: 5

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Ill take a look but pics would help.

2010-10-07 01:10:00 Author: Delirium Posts: 349

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Hey! Just played your level. I thought it was ok but shows you have alot of potential. You have some good character and lighting design skills. Something you need to work on is layer management. On some parts of your level the lights got in the way when you jump. I think you also had some things in 3 layers when they coulve been in 1 layer. Its kinda annoying when the light hits you causing you to fall into the spikes. Also alot of your emitters were showing. They felt out of place. You could also do some corner editing. Some of the places look too flat and dull. Even slight curves will do wonders. I gave you 4 stars. In return could you play my newest level Foulmouth Grotto. The link is in my signature

2010-10-07 02:23:00 Author: L1GhTmArE Posts: 519

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I just played your level and heres my feedback: Positives: +Creatures looked good +Characters looked good also Negatives: -Emitters are showing on everything you put them on -Ghost near the end don't kill you? -Pistons are showing on all your creatures Sugguestions: -Make emitters invisible -Make Pistons invisble -Think you should have ghost kill you but take away 1 or 2 if you do that and space them Overall the level needs some work::star::star: keep up the work just need alot of touch ups F4F My level: SSBB-Battleship Harlberd Interior

2010-10-07 02:26:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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I have to agree with Lightmare...you show some series potential. The level would be greatly benefited by adding some music...all the rest that i noticed Light already covered. Keep creating...i'd like to see where you take us in the future... Shawn

2010-10-07 21:38:00 Author: shawneboi Posts: 221

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Hi, thanks for all the feedback, both positives and negatives. I've tried to implement all suggestions. The corner editing tool really worked wonders, thanks for the tip! I accidentally deleted the music while changing the layers early, but have rectified that, thanks for pointing it out. I've made all the emitters and pistons invisible, however I haven't changed that the ghosts can't kill Sackboy. Mainly due to the fact that I don't know how to implement it without them also damaging the monster/frankenstein trolley-thing. Therefore thought it better to leave it out, it's a great idea though - I'll keep trying - . As I say, I've tried to used as much of the feedback as I can to make the level better and I feel it has improved massively thanks to you guys! so much thanks! if you get another second to spare try to play it again to see the upgrades.

2010-10-08 12:39:00 Author: HistoryBoy Posts: 5

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Ok I've fully implemented all suggestion now, I think... Ghosts can kill you anyways! I think they look a bit better too

2010-10-11 09:33:00 Author: HistoryBoy Posts: 5

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Judging by the pictures.. this level really needs some work. The character design looks very poor. And the level itself looks really square and boxish... I can't give a fair score however until I play it myself. Try working on it a little more, and submit screenshots that make your level look more polished. Some of them arent bad, but that picture of frankenstein looks aweful.

2010-10-11 19:28:00 Author: Nick930930 Posts: 878

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I have played your level and it has seemed to me to be enterteining, you told a typical history of a graceful form, besides which i like the histories of halloween, made bundle a few difficult obstacles and an attentive game-play. I have given you 4 :star:'S I wait could play to my new level and say your opinion to me thank you: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=37548-Sacktastic-Ptts-Pipe-Dreams-(LBP2)

2010-10-12 15:21:00 Author: psyntens Posts: 562

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