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I've been to insanity and back =/

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Hey guys i deleted all my levels =D.....err.......Sorta smiley time i guess......uhhh.......Anyway i DID delete all my published levels(this is when i went to insanity) and then made a new one better then all of them combined(ok maybe not back from sanity but close enough) right now its just called "Jesters project... " since im not entirely sure about it but check it out and tell me what you think2010-10-04 20:30:00

Author:
Jester221
Posts: 10


should try adding pics but ill try it out2010-10-04 22:23:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


Okay I just played your level and heres my feedback:

Positives:
+Visuals looked good
+Gameplay went really smooth
+Ship at the end
+Building design with the purple and white

Now in the description you asked for opinion rather you should make it a level or race well.. in the beginning the level felt like a race but as you keep playing it starts to slow down causing it to feel like a level then a race because of how much movement and doing the puzzles in the upper rooms..

Sugguestions:
-I think you could turn that into a full level if you add more gameplay and puzzles and make the level more longer and that level should turn out great. But if you keep it a race I think you should stick to the pace like in the beginning jumping from block to block make it feel like you gotta hurry and make it to the end but after the block area its goes dead. So yea if you could make more obstacles and no puzzles then the race is perfect if you turn it into the level take race out and put some gameplay in, detail, maybe a story who knows

Overall the level was very good just take those sugguestions in mind::star::star::star::star:
Thanks for playing my level
2010-10-04 22:48:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


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