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The Great Cave 2MirkoQuarck Sackboy discovers a great cave. Enjoy this setting in a beautiful cave with some waterfilled tunnels and some nice effects. Tell me what you think and how i can improve certain things. Comments are very welcome.

2010-10-04 05:07:00 Author: MirkoQuarck Posts: 66

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I had a lot of fun playing this tonight, great looking cave!

2010-10-04 05:43:00 Author: ApeCheese Posts: 369

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thanks ApeCheese

2010-10-04 05:54:00 Author: MirkoQuarck Posts: 66

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I set up a different lighting

2010-10-04 10:47:00 Author: MirkoQuarck Posts: 66

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I just played your level last night and heres my feedback: In the beginning I as little confused where you go but I finally figured it out. When you get to the 1st speech bubble and it says keep jumping to shake the cave? I think you should remove that speech bubble just because I think that area doesn't need it. Also when you get to the swimming part and you press the button and the speech says "you destroyed the rock" instead of that just put a blank speech bubble on the wall so when the person pulls the switch it shows directly what has opened. Scenary looked good though and visuals. Second Puzzle you should do less speeches it feels as if someone is holding your hand through the puzzles and helping you out to much, point of the puzzle is for someone to try and figure them out then be helped out through it. So basicly to some this up: Positives +Gameplay went very smooth +Scenary looked good +Visuals looked okay +Puzzles were pretty original Negatives -Speech bubbles could be worked on.("Jump to shake the cave", and "The rock has been destroyed") Sugguestions -Remove the Jump to shake the cave speech and change the The rock has been destroyed into a blank speech -When you arrive at second puzzle remove the speeches and allow the player to figure it out. Overall the level was satisfying so I gave it :star::star::star::star: Thanks for playing my SSBB- Battleship Harlberd Interior

2010-10-04 18:22:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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Thanks a lot for that feedback. You are right about the speech bubbles. I always think that my levels tend to become too easy and as a result boring. I'm gonna change that as soon as I'm on again which is in about 2 hours ^^ (since this feedback comes from an excelent creator) Thanks and Greetz

2010-10-04 18:40:00 Author: MirkoQuarck Posts: 66

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Pretty sweet level, loved the visuals nice details! I thought it was a but short but that may be cause I got really into it. As the other guys said the speech bubbles were maybe not the best and I didn't get the "Jump to make the cave shake" one bit just spent ages jumping around like a pleb I give it :star::star::star::star::star:

2010-10-04 18:40:00 Author: Jordanmcc Posts: 94

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Pretty sweet level, loved the visuals nice details! I thought it was a but short but that may be cause I got really into it. As the other guys said the speech bubbles were maybe not the best and I didn't get the "Jump to make the cave shake" one bit just spent ages jumping around like a pleb I give it :star::star::star::star::star: To that "jump around" thing I originally had the wall dissapear after 30 secs. The camera was put exactly on the hidden tunnel which then was in sight of course. You should have seen this after 30 secs of jumping around (not knowing what you are actually doing) and then you would see the tunnel zoomed in. I changed the time for the wall and forgot to change the speech bubble and the whole thing became nonsense......well....gotta change it

2010-10-04 18:47:00 Author: MirkoQuarck Posts: 66

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Thanks a lot for that feedback. You are right about the speech bubbles. I always think that my levels tend to become too easy and as a result boring. I'm gonna change that as soon as I'm on again which is in about 2 hours ^^ (since this feedback comes from an excelent creator) Thanks and Greetz Thanks I appreciate that, and if you need someone to test your levels beforehand i'd love to test them out for you and give you feedback so you can have the some fixes done before publishing

2010-10-04 20:04:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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I'm definitely coming back to that . Thanks a lot

2010-10-05 00:18:00 Author: MirkoQuarck Posts: 66

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Level was very nice, gameplay was fun, scenery was very good. Loved the jumping fish 5 stars and a heart

2010-10-05 00:45:00 Author: emoguy Posts: 26

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thanks for that emoguy

2010-10-05 14:38:00 Author: MirkoQuarck Posts: 66

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too bad it's overheated already

2010-10-06 04:10:00 Author: MirkoQuarck Posts: 66

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