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A walk outsideunXpectiD Sackboy takes a short walk outside This level is just a bit of a senic walkabout. Please tell me what you think and enjoy. Ps It really is short.

2010-10-02 11:17:00 Author: unXpectiD Posts: 1132

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I just played it! I really enjoyed it. Well I found it really interesting. The best bit was the worm! Soo cool How to improve: maybe add some more stickers to places so it doesn't look so empty in places? Also in the undurground bit try and vary the materials or sticker them to make them look unique-ish. I gave it :star::star::star::star::star: and <3

2010-10-02 11:44:00 Author: CheezeBo Posts: 832

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Thankyou I will try and do more with stickers in future.

2010-10-02 11:54:00 Author: unXpectiD Posts: 1132

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Pretty good so far. I enjoyed your logo. you have some potiential in artwork. Two things, to make it even better. try stretching your environments so you dont see the edges everywhere. and, once I dropped off by the lighthouse, if i tried to go left to the wall, I could see an empty space. try to check these things :] I enjoyed the worm also, it was creative.

2010-10-02 16:24:00 Author: ode1234 Posts: 59

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Sorry about that I missed that space. And Im glad you like the logo.

2010-10-02 17:00:00 Author: unXpectiD Posts: 1132

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Judge Bal coming through! Thank you,thank you no need to applause. I need my hammer! nah,I got it.What's the hammer for? well,I think you already know...To open peanuts. Ok,the house at the beggining could've used a lot of more detail,I wasn't sure if it was a house or not and that's something you should avoid. If you're going to do a level that's mainly based on walking and looking at the visuals,then you should try to vary it some more,a lot of it was grass,clouds,sheeps,more grass and sheeps,underground thing (yay! something interesting!).The underground part was my favorite.I liked the creatures,epecially the worm...cause it was used with originalitation.That part could've used more stickers and materials. I liked the sun you made it was also original.The carrots and the lighthouse and the awesome logo were my favorite object.You should work more on your corner editing and sticker work,it looked plain in some places.Hopefully,I helped. CASE CLOSED!!! I mean,THREAD CLOSED!!!! (not really). -Judge Bal

2010-10-02 17:01:00 Author: Balgarino Posts: 377

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Thanks. So you know I have neve used that many stickers before in a level (im a minimalist) And i will tell you a little secret it is that this is actually just a test level. (dont tell anyone about that though) I totaly agree with you that the house was fail.

2010-10-02 17:19:00 Author: unXpectiD Posts: 1132

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while i was working on an update i realised that i dont know how to make it more original. also i am struggling with the stickers because, i dont actually like stickers! in the past i have avoided them but, now i dont really know how to use them effectively. ps just about to publish v1.5

2010-10-03 00:11:00 Author: unXpectiD Posts: 1132

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Hahahaha...yeah,I know how you feel.I struggle with stickers a lot too,but who said evreything was easy? You'll find a way to make them work.Just start placing random stickers that you think fits the theme and maybe,just maybe...you'll find something that works. One more thing,don't publish your level if you're not happy with the results,you may regret it in the future.Try to look for some images of what you're trying to do,everything will fit and look cool,just be patient and work hard. I'm so mature

2010-10-03 00:48:00 Author: Balgarino Posts: 377

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i have added more stickers and stuff and published v1.8 enjoy

2010-10-03 23:01:00 Author: unXpectiD Posts: 1132

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