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Are You A Ninja?persistent Travel through the rooftops as the ultimate sack ninja! Or is he..? Are you ninja enough to beat this level? "Only a ninja can do it.." Not really sure what to say about this level.. It's really big. It's extremely difficult. I think everything works fine. I've been through it countless times. Only problem isn't I havent been able to get any criticism on any of my levels so I'm not really sure what to work on. I've only gotten six people to play it and one just said "bad." Not really sure what that's supposed to tell me.. I think it's my best level yet and I have to say I've come pretty far from a couple of my first ones. Anyways it'd be awesome if somebody could give it a try! Thanks! XD Also the name is Are you a Ninja. The guidelines said I was supposed to put up a link, but I'm not really sure how.

2010-10-02 04:59:00 Author: WhoaPanda Posts: 1

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I have to say I tried to beat this level. I may another few times. First off your level has very common name, there are tons of "Are you a Ninja?" levels with the exact same icon. You may really want to do something unique there. The roller at the start was ok, a nice little joke there. The camera view right above that part where you have to move forward two space to jump up was bad, you can't see your lower half. Also jumping up I randomly would move back instead of up. The Next part started with a bad camera view for the fist and next few jumps. And those jumps really bugged me...especially when I had to redo them if I died in the next part. The ninjas were good, but the anti grav material took away from that area. Those paths were easy to fall off...but that was the point. The next area with the moving floor to knock you up was done weirdly, if the plaform is in the middle layer and goes below the other tow, you have to waitin until it goes up, jump on it while it still up and wait for it to cycle up again to jump...just seemed slow. The wall you jump through was cool, but it might confuse (or not). Oh and thanks for the first check point. That is as far as I got, with a single check point there...it was a bit evil. The thing that you grab to take you up is a bit far from the thing in the center, so if you try and swing to make it over and you even tap the wall you instantly die? Possibly because it is a corner it makes you double touch fire instantly and kill you. The anti grav in this area also took away form the level. I should say there are a few things I really hate in LBP, it is sackboy ceiling climbs and sackboy going through fire obsticles hanging on a chain grabbable...and that was the next part. This may have made me finally decide to give your level a rest. Because there is very little room to move, you are on a chain, and the camera is a side view...it is so easy to touch the wall and instantly die. I almost made it to the top several times...but I would always touch my foot on the last middle peice or wall trying to avoid the middle and die...or many times I would die on the first lower part which seemed very cheap when you are first exploring and only have 4 lives before you have to redo the level. If you want more plays you should think of a more unique name, a better level icon, and the level needs more refining from the blocky angles and the anti grav. It ia a double edged knife, if you make it to difficult, people will rate it low and not play, if you make it too easy you are selling out. I will try again, but I really don't like the jumping wall and I really hate the fire obsticles.

2010-10-02 06:35:00 Author: celsus Posts: 822

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dam it jim... i'm a ninja, not a miracle worker

2010-10-03 02:25:00 Author: Unknown User

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I just played your level and heres my feedback: Positives: +Gameplay was okay nothing went wrong +Little ninja guys were okay Negatives: -Same material kind of gives off a bore you should try mixing up the materials a little bit not alot but at least 2 materials -The level could use more scenary -Obstacles are little simple same used in many ninja levels Sugguestions -As Celcus stated you might wanna change it into a different name because also not only is there alot of names alike but also the level name make people interested in wanting to play "Are you a Ninja" give off a -_- look like oh no another ninja level because its hard to come across decent ninja levels so try thinking of a another name, Right now im not of any help of a name lol sorry just aint got any at the moment but if I ever think of any ill let you know. Overall the level looked okay just needs some touch ups..:star::star::star: F4F-My level SSBB- Battleship Harlberd Interior

2010-10-03 04:14:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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