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The Last Sack: Introduction
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| The Last Sack: IntroductionJYADS http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=21828&d=1281751662The introduction to my upcoming level series, "The Last Sack". Quite short, but a long time in the making. I tryed really hard to make this, I hope you all enjoy.  | 2010-09-26 00:21:00 Author: AA_BATTERY  Posts: 1117 |
| Not too bad, I like where the story is headed. I look forward to playing the series. Feedback: 1. It's definitely a bit too short, you need a bit more dialog also. I'd like to see more of a progression towards the level it's introducing. 2. I didn't like the bridge section. You might want to have a non-visible string attached to the bottom of the planks to keep them from moving as much. | 2010-09-26 03:26:00 Author: Unknown User  |
| Not too bad, I like where the story is headed. I look forward to playing the series. Feedback: 1. It's definitely a bit too short, you need a bit more dialog also. I'd like to see more of a progression towards the level it's introducing. 2. I didn't like the bridge section. You might want to have a non-visible string attached to the bottom of the planks to keep them from moving as much. Ok, ill try fix some of those things. I will add more dialog but i cant make it much longer due to thermo constrictions...... | 2010-10-06 21:06:00 Author: AA_BATTERY Posts: 1117 |
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