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The Monkeys PlatformerWCF7__ Make your way through the vast jungle with the company of a cute lil monkey but be careful hes a bit of a hot head. also climb the great red wood tree that drives you striaght to the Monkeys house...( He doesnt like that very much ) Well i hope you enjoy my platformer! By the way if anyone could play my level and give me some feed back on what needs to improve i'd be very appreciative Thanks I just Re did the whole level, making it much more detailed Please if you could check it out again to see the changes id be very happy thanks

2010-09-19 06:44:00 Author: WCF7__ Posts: 63

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I shall write a play by play review soon ;p check later today for the edit.

2010-09-25 10:43:00 Author: J_wulfke Posts: 72

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What a remarkable level this is. I love the simplicity design of it all, has a nice appeal and charm to it is well. Wonderful gameplay, I loved the whole tree turning wheels and climbing up the other big tree. Visuals are nice and colourful with a good amount of mixed materials. I'd think you would benefit more if you use the corner edit tool for a more smoother look and resize decorations for more depth and shape rather then having the default shape. I gave this 4 stars and tagged fun plus heart.

2010-09-25 11:12:00 Author: LordMagicPants Posts: 187

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The review is in and Oh boy will you be happy, never written this detailed yet so brace yourself ! I arrive in a mystic very green place with a cliff on my left and a failed tree on my right. Oh well even god makes failures ( Ain't that right cats? Yes your failures, all of you lame cats) As I explore further to my right I discover more failish trees. Suddenly I hear a screeching ape, I gaze up and I see a funky monkey. I continue and find a very nice tree all of a sudden, being used as a bridge to cross the waterfall. I liked the idea but it needs more detailing.(I like my own waterfall be sure to check that one out) I cross it and notice all the trees in this area look nice...I hug one... I am slightly getting bugged bout the glitching music, music that you made is good because it separates your level from others but in most lvl's it glitches and sounds wrong. So my advice replace the music with something swinging like the africa theme song. I find more monkays and this one has left me a basket (YAY picnic for all) I'm slightly feeling the need for more bubbles. I run along and stumble upon a rockgarden all of a sudden. Seems well as a spacefiller. Oh well it doesn't even matter any more because I have found a huge mushroom that launches me XD It surprised me to be honest. I accidentally grabbed the mushroom and was launched in the air. WEEEEE But then I had to find more failed trees, seems they dominate this forest =/. A nice cliff awaited me as I ran towards mouldy nicely done cave. (I must say you have a done a great job sticking with your materials) As I enter the cave I find magically marvellous flying stones. Here's a tip thou but pistons on the lights so they 2 move I see a danger sign all of a sudden. In the middle of a jungle I find a cave( miraculously enough) and then I notice civilisation placed a sign here ? And this made it only worse when I grabbed the chain and was lowered into a pit of fire with more old construction material... You might want to rework that part into something more junglish you know stick with ya theme. Oh well I leave the cave and find another monkey standing next 2 a badly made sign. Another waterfall awaited me with a challenge built into a log (nice thinking!) Once again the waterfall needs detailing I was surprised like hell when that branch moved and lifted me ! The huge tree was an example of great potential, especially the roots were a good addition. Lot's of platforming all of a sudden (jumpy jumpy yay) OOOOOH FANCY MONKEY FAAAAACE!! Jump Jump up and wee there we are. *stops moving* Okay seriously this railing looks like cwap =/ Oooh a visible switch near the chainride thing Okay this is the monkey's hangout and this squirl made a ride in it ? Fine by me ^^ LIFT OFF ! AAAAAAAAAAAAH CRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASH ... ... ... ... I'm still alive...I'M STILL ALIVE YAAAAAAY Waait where am I ? A camp of some sort ? Is that a monkey in a tent ? OOh Funky puzzlejumper, great play-variation I run towards a huge tree who stand alone...Might wanna add some smaller trees surrounding that one like your in a thick forest. And Then WHAMM A scoreboard 0.0 Okay that was unexpected... Really unexpected... OKAy summary Doubting for 4 or 3 stars but eh what the heck I had a good time 4 Stars and rated cute( I like monkeys) Don't forget to give feedback on my level. Zen Garden

2010-09-26 13:56:00 Author: J_wulfke Posts: 72

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