Archive: 13 posts

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Monster of the full Moonnana997 On each and every full moon, a hideous monster ravages a defenseless village. Are you a brave enough hero to defeat the beast and save all the citizens? This is my first real adventure (I had another, but it was terrible ands I got rid of it). I worked on it for a while, took a brake, and then got back to it. It's pretty short, but cut me a brake! Give me any advice, suggestions, or point out any problems you find please!!!

2010-09-12 19:26:00 Author: Nana997 Posts: 197

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Really... nothun?

2010-09-13 01:41:00 Author: Nana997 Posts: 197

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I will defineatly play this when I get the chance! This sounds really,really fun!

2010-09-13 01:47:00 Author: grayspence Posts: 1990

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Thanks! Come back when you're done and tell me what you think

2010-09-13 23:45:00 Author: Nana997 Posts: 197

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Sure ill try this level looks intresting Feed back for feeedback?? besides its original and ill coimment when i play it tommrow !

2010-09-14 00:01:00 Author: Joka232 Posts: 68

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Thanks for playing!

2010-09-14 02:52:00 Author: Nana997 Posts: 197

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I just played your level and heres my feedback Positive: +Storyline Negatives: -built the level on the ground (not good for creators but I understand its your second level) -Rocket Cow? that really threw me off -After you pass the caves the whole right side is nothing but empty space that could of been used or blocked off so the player wont go running off that way thinking it was something down there because honestly I went down there thinking it was a scoreboard at the end but notice I had to climb to the top of the cave.. -Grab switch is showing on the NO dissolve in the caves -Basic wood for the Mayors house also didnt look to good -The ground material you had didnt go well with the theme of the level also Sugguestions -Maybe you should color or change ground material to something that matches the theme -Building the level off the ground shows the creator is creative and that you have plenty of space to do things but also if you build on the ground it cant have empty spaces or hardly no gameplay at least build from the ground and work your way up (make sense?). This level has a good story to it but it wasn't as expected but everyone starts to get better as they build and get critism so hope you take this feedback as me trying to help and not me being harsh to you or anything Overall keep up the good work, the level just need alot of fix-ups::star::star:

2010-09-14 11:26:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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Okay, I'll try and respond to that... 1.Rocket Cow was just a fun little thought I had, just to make people chuckle. 2. I'm confused on what you mean by "past the caves, the right side is empty" please elaborate. 3. Will fix Grab switch 4. Will color wood 5. Can you give me some suggestions on what kind of ground there should be? Really it was just the floor of the background, but what should I change it to? Lastly, thanks for playing, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. When you answer a few of my questios I'll try and make the changes. Oh, and, did you like the Pancakes???

2010-09-15 00:01:00 Author: Nana997 Posts: 197

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lol yes the pancakes was delicious but for the question: 2. When you get to the cave if you continue to go right its a big open space of empty area and you could make the cave block that off. 5. Umm its kind of hard for me to think of a material to go with your level when its built on ground.. probably any material thats not sponge or got all those designs on it.. i might have to re-look at it again sorry..

2010-09-15 00:35:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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I'll need to take another look at it. Oh, and you owe me $3.50 for the Pancakes

2010-09-15 01:09:00 Author: Nana997 Posts: 197

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Okay first off, I wouldn't suggest double posting/bumping at the risk of getting the wet noodle (consequences) But Ill try to play the level when I have a chance

2010-09-15 01:37:00 Author: Unknown User

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Thanks for that!

2010-09-15 02:15:00 Author: Nana997 Posts: 197

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I know I shouldn't double post, but I just updated the level with some of Sabre's suggestions.

2010-09-15 03:50:00 Author: Nana997 Posts: 197

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