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A Bad Apple Headed Down Underlego12 Welcome to my newest level a bad apple headed down under this is a level about sackboy going back down under because a new problem has just arisen. Welcome to my newest level a bad apple headed down under this is a level about sackboy going back down under because a new problem has just arisen. This level is a bit short sorry for that I will probably make another level asap Feed back very welcome Thank You :star::star::star::star::star:

2010-09-11 00:15:00 Author: lego12 Posts: 77

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Hey Hobo! I saw there was no response to your thread, and we can't have that. Everyone deserves at least one feedback. Maybe next time make it a fedback for feedback thread, as your chances are better that way. Anyhoo, the level was pretty good! At first, I was like hmm...because you used a bit of the premade story characters in the level, but it made sense when I found out it's a sequel of sorts. Once I got to the original parts made by you, things picked up for the better. There's some pretty good ideas in there obstacle wise, and the challenge is high. I see you did a behind the wall thing like Amazing Poo's level. Not sure if that was coincidence, but it was fun but difficult. As amatter of fact the whole level is challenging, but never annoying. The story was kinda choppy, but it was funny at the end. I gave the level 4 stars. Next level, I hope you make it all 100% original content, you show alot of promise.

2010-09-13 00:44:00 Author: kaiju_kid Posts: 329

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Thanks for the feedback Maybe next time I will try to do just that. And yes I did what amazingflyingpoo did on that wall part.

2010-09-13 01:08:00 Author: lego12 Posts: 77

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Hey there The_Hobo, The intro was already a bit random. 0.o Well, the platforming was normal. I ran to some useless prizes too. Such as a fire ball. (Which is not really worth since it's not much special.) The obstacle with cooperation of the fireball was new. I never seen it done before. It's hard to do, but very unique. Your stickerwork is AWESOME. It reminded me of Down Under and played along with the obstacles. Dialog was ehh. Those apples, ouch. The music fit okay. Kind of unfitted, but it works. Your race was awesome. It was like Poo's race in Greenie Go Home, but a bit challenging. I felt this race was kind of off. Though, it was fun and challenging. I think you could've done better for showing a oath. The stickers were hard to follow along. It doesn't matter, I beat the race. XP Then the level kind of ended. You used many materials and stickers. Honestly, I do not have much to say about your level. I didn't come across an error or something alike. Nice creation. Other than that, I'll give you your rating. Length: 5/5 (Very Decent length and fun playthrough.) Material Usage: 4/5 (Reminded me of Down Under, but a bit random.) Sticker Work: 5/5 (It fits well in the level and is clear.) Corner Editing: 3/5 (Could be improved, but your using it.) Terrain/Mechanics: 4/5 (I think you used a template, but then again, it changes a lot.) Story: N/A (I don't understand what's happening.) Total: 21/25 That's okay. The level was different, and a bit random. Though, you're getting there. I gave you 5 stars :star::star::star::star::star: I hope we meet again, -Spark

2010-09-14 23:17:00 Author: Spark151 Posts: 801

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Thank you for playing my level maybe next time i wont be so random on the story, lol. I did use the down under template to help me at the start because i had now idea what to do. Thanks for 5 stars and now i will begin creating my new level

2010-09-15 00:11:00 Author: lego12 Posts: 77

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