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The BlackeningWith_Blood_Skyshttp://i56.tinypic.com/21r6s0.jpg Much like "The Untenated" which is how I got inspired. (Carmack awakes to a growing Thunder Storm and quickly realizes he isn't alone. As he wonders whats wrong with his house, carmack tries to understand why this is happening. *Part 1 of 2* http://i53.tinypic.com/i229dt.jpg http://i52.tinypic.com/177cpv.jpg

2010-09-03 06:18:00 Author: Unknown User

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Good idea for a scary story. Like the door rattleing and the other effects. You may want to design some of the corpses a bit more to make it even better. The stairs and a few of the areas I could see rough edges. If you went over them you could make it look even better and gain some more space on the thermo. Nice over all play, the carpet on grabbable floor may not be the best choice. Loveed some of the things that appeared, the camera for one of the speech bubbles was at a big skew at one point (one of the bedroom ones part wat through). Good horror idea, the house was nice, wished some things jumped out at me a bit more like a face in the window with a loud screech would have hit me pretty good...I was waiting for it to happen.

2010-09-03 09:35:00 Author: celsus Posts: 822

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Believe me I wanted more scares, I fixed ---- 1) Carpet in room, now wood. 2) More frights, more scares and heartpounding. 3) Most edges fixed, might be a few more. 4) More details, camera fixed. 5) Currently working on a different scare* Thank you.

2010-09-04 15:38:00 Author: Unknown User

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