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Well, I noticed lots of users interested in making their own stories combined with other users, so I decide to open this thread so all the story-makers could have a place to let their creativity and need for plot progression go off! The rules are really simple: I will start posting the beggining of a story. Then, the users will write suggestions on how to progress the story! Here's an example: You find an abandoned house. There's nothing around except for emptyness. Get inside the house! Dig a hole and see if you can find water! Try to eat the house! RULES ABOUT SUGGESTIONS: - You can have as many suggestions as you want per round, and you can edit your suggestions; - The suggestion must allow the story to progress. Things like "kill yourself" won't be considerated; - The suggestion must fill with the last part of the story. - The suggestion must be a protagonist's actions only. INVENTORY: Is a list of the objects sackboy collected in the story. You can add (almost) anything into it, and can use stuff from it at anytime. Damm, you can even combine objects from the inventory, or just drop them. Please bear in mind that the inventory DOES have a limit, it depends of what you store in it! IMPORTANT: - I will check the topic sometimes. When I feel like continuing the story, I will read ALL the suggestions, and pick the one that I think it's the most creative. Then the story goes on based on that suggestion and leaves you to make other suggestions again. I will try to have suggestions from different players, though. ONTO THE STORY: Since his childhood, sackboy wanted to be an astronaut. Go to space, pilot spaceships and stuff. When he grew up, he got a job at the Little Big Planet Space Station. His duty was to clean the outside of the station. "It isn't the best job to get in space, but it's something..." He thought. On his first day, he already had a task: some space junk was floating next to the station, and his duty was to clean all that junk. He went outside, and talked to the main command: - Starting operation "Space Vacuum"! He turned the vacuum on, but then a meteor passed next to him. Another one hit the station. He saw like 25 meteors coming towards him and the station...

2010-09-03 00:13:00 Author: gdn001 Posts: 5891

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When Sackboy squinted really hard, he could see his nemesis riding one of the meteors while dressed in a cowboy costume.

2010-09-03 00:16:00 Author: Testudini Posts: 3262

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Ok, only one entry, that will be! Sackboy took a closer look at the meteors and saw his childhood enemy dressed in a cowboy costume. The first thing that came to his mind was: "WAAT?", but then another meteor came and threw him away from the station. He could then only watch the destruction of the station, strangely the meteors looked like they were being controlled. He then looked behind him, and he could see an giant spaceship coming. His enemy-in-cowboy-costume entered the ship throught a small door on the side. So sackboy followed. He got in the ship. Infront of him are 3 doors with unknown alien wirtings, on his left are some pipes and to his right is a vent entrance. Next update will be tomorrow, you'll have the whole night to post suggestions!

2010-09-03 01:14:00 Author: gdn001 Posts: 5891

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go down the air vent, cuz they might be wating to ambush behind the doors, and that tube might be the poo tube.

2010-09-03 01:21:00 Author: Merc Posts: 2135

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Press your ear against the wall to each door to guess what is behind them then choose whatever the safest option seems like.

2010-09-03 02:45:00 Author: Unknown User

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he Grabs one of the pipes as a weapon (in case he's faced with fighting aliens) then enters the vent, and runs into purple yellow spotted space slugs (that appear to be infesting the ship, causing the aliens who own it to have closed off several sections of the ship) he then has to fight his way through..

2010-09-03 02:55:00 Author: Ninjaferret22 Posts: 1403

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he Grabs one of the pipes as a weapon (in case he's faced with fighting aliens) then enters the vent, and runs into purple yellow spotted space slugs (that appear to be infesting the ship, causing the aliens who own it to have closed off several sections of the ship) he then has to fight his way through.. Sackboy manages to take one of the pipes off, and then he gets inside the vents and meets aliens that seem to have some kind of disease. He charges like a bull into the aliens with his pipe and starts hitting them with it. The alliens seem to ignore him, as they neither move nor try to attack back. When sackboy is tired of doing that, he looks at the pipe and sees yellow goo all over it. He sees a door, and there's the vent he used to get here. There's another door, but it's blocked by the aliens. did you believe that I had to put white text to post this?

2010-09-03 12:24:00 Author: gdn001 Posts: 5891

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Sackboy uses his magical powers sweeping the aliens off their feet and shrinking them to then put in his pocket. He continues through the door to battle the evil, cowboy guy. Let the games begin

2010-09-03 13:44:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208

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Sackboy decides to use his greatest weapon, a taco from Taco Bell. He unleashes a fart that only comes once per century, causing the aliens to black out and letting him dance through, like a ballerina.

2010-09-03 15:27:00 Author: Testudini Posts: 3262

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Sackboy decides to use his greatest weapon, a taco from Taco Bell. He unleashes a fart that only comes once per century, causing the aliens to black out and letting him dance through, like a ballerina. That works too xD

2010-09-03 16:31:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208

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Sackboy decides to Fire His LAzor CANNOOON!!! At the aliens http://i53.tinypic.com/sebt35.jpg

2010-09-03 16:42:00 Author: Unknown User

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Sackboy decides to use his greatest weapon, a taco from Taco Bell. He unleashes a fart that only comes once per century, causing the aliens to black out and letting him dance through, like a ballerina. Sackboy takes an old taco from his pocket and eats it. Then he starts to act strangely, his face starts to sweat, and he releases a fart that it's so strong, it makes all the doors in the room explode. And the aliens too. So he dances through a rug of alien goo towards the door. He then enters it. It's an elevator. There are 3 buttons in the elevator. Two in the side with arrows pointing up and down, and another one with a red symbol. NEW RULE: You can still post whatever you like, but it must be only sackboy's actions. Nothing like "the roof explodes", things like "sackboy shoots at the roof which explodes". To make it more RPGish, leave the karma and stuff to me.

2010-09-03 22:37:00 Author: gdn001 Posts: 5891

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Sackboy presses the red button, a self destruct noise intiates. Sackboy moves a roof tile to get ontop of the elevator. The elevator is not moved by stiffined pistons but by telekniesis. Sackboy sees no way out of the Elevator shaft. What will he do?

2010-09-03 22:41:00 Author: Unknown User

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Only one suggestion...? As sackboy presses the red button, an alarm is heard. Sackboy opens a tile on the ceilling of the elevator. The elevator is being moved by some kind of magnetism. He sees a vent to his side, so he jumps to it and the elevator explodes. He then gets in what lloks like an engine room. There are some mechanisms and buttons in front of him. There's also a door next to him.

2010-09-04 13:43:00 Author: gdn001 Posts: 5891

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Suddenly, a mean looking alien appears as Sackboy sets his feet onto the ground. The alien notices Sackboy, but it guarding the door. Boss fight!

2010-09-04 13:58:00 Author: Testudini Posts: 3262

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The advanced Logic confuses him so he decides to open the door. There he sees Rocket Cheetas in a launching Pad

2010-09-04 16:01:00 Author: Unknown User

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Sackboy walks in and goes into the door, it seems he has reached the armoury, and a giant stash of lasers, he grabs one and then walks out too find that there are 3 big buff aliens guarding the other door.

2010-09-04 19:58:00 Author: Merc Posts: 2135

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Merging two suggestions into one: Sackboy walks in and goes into the door, it seems he has reached the armoury, and a giant stash of lasers, he grabs one and then walks out too find that there are 3 big buff aliens guarding the other door. Suddenly, a mean looking alien appears as Sackboy sets his feet onto the ground. The alien notices Sackboy, but it guarding the door. Boss fight! Sackboy gets inside the door, and finds a big stash, with laser guns, normal guns, some eletric swords and a portal gun. Then a big alien appears. He shouts something at sackboy, and then charges at him! What should he do to stop him?

2010-09-04 21:58:00 Author: gdn001 Posts: 5891

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he should fire a portal at the wall where the alien is charging, then a portal in the other room and lock the door, this should buy him enough time to escape.

2010-09-05 00:14:00 Author: Merc Posts: 2135

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Sackboy yells some random gibberish which makes the alien stop in its track, then shake sackboy's hand in peace.

2010-09-05 02:09:00 Author: Testudini Posts: 3262

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Sackboy yells some random gibberish which makes the alien stop in its track, then shake sackboy's hand in peace. The alien is charging towards sackboy, and he shouts some random stuff. The alien then stops, seems to be sorry, and then gives sackboy his keycard, his LAZOR gun and goes away. Neat! There's the door he used to get inside the room and another where the other alien just went. Where to go? INVENTORY(NEW): - The pipe with alien goo; - A keycard; - A LAZOR gun. INVENTORY(NEW): Is a list of the objects sackboy collected in the story. You can add (almost) anything into it, and can use stuff from it at anytime. Damm, you can even combine objects from the inventory, or just drop them. Please bear in mind that the inventory DOES have a limit, it depends of what you store in it!

2010-09-05 02:22:00 Author: gdn001 Posts: 5891

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