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The mysterious creator kidnapping [with pic.]

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The mysterious creator kidnappingblizzard_cool
Someone has kidnapped all the best creators in LBP and you are on their trails. Are you sack enough to get the creators back?
Yes, I'm questioning YOUR sackinghood! Now you are challenged to play this level!

This is a very short but a bit challenging level. It manly suffer from "I want LBP2 now" syndrome so I lost the motivation to create it.(Somewhere in the middle of Summer)
I wanted to finish a level this summer but time is short on my hands, school is here. So I picked up my slack and polished up what ever needed polishing and... well... this is what came out of it. Hope you have some fun!

Look at Cog's second post for the screens, can't miss em! And a big BIG THANKS to Cog!
2010-08-30 22:33:00

Author:
blizzard_cool
Posts: 752


Did you show me this level before? If you did I'll be glad to snag you some screenshots. 2010-08-30 23:12:00

Author:
Kog
Posts: 2358


Did you show me this level before? If you did I'll be glad to snag you some screenshots.

Yup that's the one, thanks for trying to help
2010-08-30 23:13:00

Author:
blizzard_cool
Posts: 752


Well, that was short! But I can understand the motivational problem you are having with LBP2 SOOOO close! First of all, it was a very well polished level, and a lot of fun for what was there.

Notes and suggestions:
+great detailed level
+so he's kidnapped the best creators? Why hasnt he kidnapped me? (I jest, Im far too powerful for im to kidnapp )
+Spinning the wheel to charge the generator is brilliant. perhaps very could be a puff of smoke and a motor noise once its running? Like the smoke when you are spinning it
+So much fun!
+I like the way the mouth laughs during the "HAHAHA" bit
+maybe bring the lights back up so you can see the score board. Maybe have the player hidden with a silhouette of the evil guy? I dont know.

I am really clutching at straws to find any actual suggestions, appart from being really short, whats there is brilliant.

:star::star::star::star::star: <3

Would you mind trying my level (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=33317-The-Mystery-of-Mystery-Island&p=582899#post582899)
2010-08-31 02:12:00

Author:
Joburg87
Posts: 56


Thank you, I'll be sure to check out your level!
And I'll make it so that you can see the scoreboard when you finish!
2010-08-31 10:18:00

Author:
blizzard_cool
Posts: 752


ahahaha oh mannn i feel you when you say you can't wait for lbp2!!! i mean even that first puzzle (the jump pad with wheel and electric) was from lbp 2 (but with a grapple hook). the ending was also funny too . since this level was fun for me, i'm giving it :star::star::star::star::star:!

F4F:Noi World (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=34358-Noi-World)
2010-08-31 18:21:00

Author:
Unknown User


I'm of to play Noi World and leave you some feedback.

Update: Made the scoreboard visible!
2010-09-01 14:02:00

Author:
blizzard_cool
Posts: 752


I played your level and here is my feedback:

Positives:
+Gameplay was pretty good
+Dialogue was great
+Scenary look awesome
+Platforming was pretty good

Negatives:
-I didnt really like the dark matter near the end? Like why was it right there probably could of change it to something else and made the ending a little better instead of having the big square dark matter floating there with a speech bubble

Overall though the level was worth playing::star::star::star:
F4F-Umbra Valley: A lost soul (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=34670-Umbra-Valley-A-Lost-Soul) by L1ghtMare
F4F-Umbra Valley 2: Prepetual Escape by Me
2010-09-01 18:33:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


A nice teaser level
cant wait to see who exactly was kidnapped and why and who did that.
Makes me want more. Good Job
2010-09-01 22:05:00

Author:
TOBSn08
Posts: 143


Thanks guys!
I'll update the ending with a better cutscene or at least a better spot to end it!
I'll be doing the F4F first thing in the morning, just wait till I get some sleep.
2010-09-01 22:17:00

Author:
blizzard_cool
Posts: 752


This was a very nice level, short, but very nice. I loved the two wooden materials that you chose to use, they blend together very well. The gameplay was phenomenal, everything felt fresh. Like I mentioned above, the level was pretty short, but that didn't keep me from having a lot of fun! :star::star::star::star::star:, looking forward to the next part!

2010-09-01 22:48:00

Author:
X-FROGBOY-X
Posts: 1800


Hey sorry for the wait!

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/CogSpartan/lbp_mck1.png

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/CogSpartan/lbp_mck2.png

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/CogSpartan/lbp_mck3.png

http://i796.photobucket.com/albums/yy247/CogSpartan/lbp_mck4.png

Oh, and the level is still great!
2010-09-02 02:20:00

Author:
Kog
Posts: 2358


Very short, but a ver nice few minutes it was. The gameplay was fun, the visuals clean and lighthearted, and the dialog was refreshingly funny. Great little level, but would like to see more! 5 stars!

EDIT: The ending was good during my play if I remember right.
2010-09-02 03:39:00

Author:
piggabling
Posts: 2979


Thanks everyone! Especially Cog for the screens.
Update: Made the ending a bit better, it's not just dark matter anymore. And I put a LPBC sticker somewhere in the level.
2010-09-02 12:54:00

Author:
blizzard_cool
Posts: 752


I have played your level and the design of the gameplay has remembered to LBP2 his this one very well made, good parts, good obstacles, is entertained and in general i liked only that I believe that you might have done a great end, yes you have space in the thermometer this is something that would change since it is too simple for all the great work that you realized on having begun the level.

I have given you 4 :star:S

I hope that you play my new level WOOD WORLD https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=34593-Wood-world and give me ur opinion please.
2010-09-02 21:27:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562


Pretty cool.
I especially liked the folded gameplay and the jetpack tunnel.
Since half the level is folded, that means you could fit more in right? How much thermo you have left?
It's great, but it's too short. So only 4 stars. :/

EDIT: Suffering from "I want LBP2 now" syndrome?
2010-09-02 23:43:00

Author:
midnight_heist
Posts: 2513


Pretty cool.
I especially liked the folded gameplay and the jetpack tunnel.
Since half the level is folded, that means you could fit more in right? How much thermo you have left?
It's great, but it's too short. So only 4 stars. :/

I explained why it's so short in the first post. Thanks anyways for plying!
I'll be doing the F4F as soon as I can get to my PS3.
2010-09-03 11:27:00

Author:
blizzard_cool
Posts: 752


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