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Noi WorldDangItsTY
*UPDATED!!! VERSION 1.3 IS OUT!!!*
This is a level I created for my girlfriend, and I literally asked her what she would ever want in a game... and the result is.... well see for yourself . Enjoy!!! I hope you like it! F4F!

Btw, she said she likes floating cubes, elephants, bunnies, town houses, the colors white (because she likes fresh simple things), green, and pink, sharks, races, and lots and lots of bubbles .


Floating Cubes: 22991
Save Elephants!: 22987
Race!: 22986
Ride Bunnies!: 22988
Safely run away from sharks...: 22993
...and return home: 22985		2010-08-29 05:13:00

Author:
Unknown User

I played your level and heres my feedback

Positives:
+Races made you wanna complete the challenges specially against the sharks (annoying).
+Gameplay was okay
+Puzzle were very original

Negatives:
-Sharks were okay at one point but they kinda made it difficult to move on because of the sponge material was blocking the way..
-Didnt like the part with the rabbit or whatever animal that was with the rocket and you had to ride his back across the gas..maybe could make that into obstacle area.
-The puzzle were you gotta find the 3 carrots you should change those to dissolve so when you grab them the message still displays and disappear showing you got it..

Overall it was worth playing::star::star::star:		2010-08-29 17:31:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653

I actually liked the level. especially the art style, the white theme and the music gave it a magical feeling.
The puzzles were nice although the carrots should dissolve, as said above, when grabbed.
Very nice job! :star::star::star::star::star:<3

F4F:Ancient Treasure of the Aztec (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=34014-Ancient-Treasure-of-the-Aztec-*UPDATED-PICS*)		2010-08-29 19:41:00

Author:
saarraz1
Posts: 86

Some screenshots would be helpful in this thread.

I'll check this out soon. 		2010-08-29 19:44:00

Author:
ShamgarBlade
Posts: 1010

Thank you for the replies! I'm actually a new member of this website, and I will try to get pictures asap!
Thank you saarraz1, that was exactly what I was going for! I'll try making the carrots dissolve, but the material I had to use on them were sponges and not dissolve material to give it that carrot feel. If I switched it to dissolve, it would look blocky and nasty, but I will try my very best to make them vanish!
Thank you Sabre_ for the feedback! I honestly did not have any idea how my level would turn out, but your review helped out a lot!
- Sorry about the shark part. My girlfriend likes sharks a lot so I made the best one I could make. I do know that it blocks the way but it's still possible to get in because it floats away at some point. If you have any idea on how to make a better shark then please let me know and I'll be glad to fix it .
- The bunny mobiles (the things with the rockets) I forgot to include directions on how to use them, but basically you hold R1 until you're about to land, then you quickly let go and press R1 again to hop back up. It's really fun when you get the hang of it! Thank you to point that out though, I'll include directions right away when I get the chance to!

Thank you again for all of the feedback! Also, how does F4F work again? Do all of you guys have a F4F level? Or do I only do F4F if people send me a link?

EDIT------

I see the F4F links to your levels... Hehe, I'm so blind xD.		2010-08-29 20:39:00

Author:
Unknown User

Thank you for the replies! I'm actually a new member of this website, and I will try to get pictures asap!
Thank you saarraz1, that was exactly what I was going for! I'll try making the carrots dissolve, but the material I had to use on them were sponges and not dissolve material to give it that carrot feel. If I switched it to dissolve, it would look blocky and nasty, but I will try my very best to make them vanish!
Thank you Sabre_ for the feedback! I honestly did not have any idea how my level would turn out, but your review helped out a lot!
- Sorry about the shark part. My girlfriend likes sharks a lot so I made the best one I could make. I do know that it blocks the way but it's still possible to get in because it floats away at some point. If you have any idea on how to make a better shark then please let me know and I'll be glad to fix it .
- The bunny mobiles (the things with the rockets) I forgot to include directions on how to use them, but basically you hold R1 until you're about to land, then you quickly let go and press R1 again to hop back up. It's really fun when you get the hang of it! Thank you to point that out though, I'll include directions right away when I get the chance to!

Thank you again for all of the feedback! Also, how does F4F work again? Do all of you guys have a F4F level? Or do I only do F4F if people send me a link?
if someone reviews your level here, they will send you a link to a F4F level either in their sig or in the post, and you need to play the level and review it.		2010-08-29 21:04:00

Author:
saarraz1
Posts: 86

if someone reviews your level here, they will send you a link to a F4F level either in their sig or in the post, and you need to play the level and review it.

Thank you saarraz1 for clearing that up for me! . I'll get to it right now actually.		2010-08-29 21:20:00

Author:
Unknown User

Alright here I go!

-First off, I like the simplicity of the level at the beginning. The floating blocks would be tough for some people, but I like it.
-I love the elephant! It's great! Nice work on the legs, I would have hated it if you just left those peg legs uncovered.
-OOooOO nice effect with the rows of floating blocks! I like it!
- I got to the end of the cool floating blocks and jumped onto the platform... I didn't really know what to do. So I grabbed and BAM I flew up in the sky. I think you should put an R1 sticker there or something to let people know what they are supposed to do.
- I think the blocks dashing back and forth is a little difficult to get past... When something is too difficult, it could lower your ratings by a lot.
- Lol. Funky carrots. I think I agree with the others on making the carrots disappear one grabbed.
- The sharks got on my nerves...

Overall, I like the environment of the level. Very relaxing and fun. I'm giving this :star::star::star::star:

If you would be so kind to take a look at my level I have in my sig below, I would appreciate it. Thanks. 		2010-08-29 21:30:00

Author:
ShamgarBlade
Posts: 1010

Alright here I go!

-First off, I like the simplicity of the level at the beginning. The floating blocks would be tough for some people, but I like it.
-I love the elephant! It's great! Nice work on the legs, I would have hated it if you just left those peg legs uncovered.
-OOooOO nice effect with the rows of floating blocks! I like it!
- I got to the end of the cool floating blocks and jumped onto the platform... I didn't really know what to do. So I grabbed and BAM I flew up in the sky. I think you should put an R1 sticker there or something to let people know what they are supposed to do.
- I think the blocks dashing back and forth is a little difficult to get past... When something is too difficult, it could lower your ratings by a lot.
- Lol. Funky carrots. I think I agree with the others on making the carrots disappear one grabbed.
- The sharks got on my nerves...

Overall, I like the environment of the level. Very relaxing and fun. I'm giving this :star::star::star::star:

If you would be so kind to take a look at my level I have in my sig below, I would appreciate it. Thanks.

Thank you ShamgarBlade for your feedback, and I will be glad to take a look at your level! But unfortunately, I have to do some summer homework, but I will get to it afterwards!
Thanks for the compliments I really like it when people say they like my atmosphere or design or elephants lol. It makes me feel good knowing others feel the same art as I do (and my girlfriend of course because this level was inspired by her).
If I put a grab sticker or R1 on it, I think it would kill the simplicity of the level so I tried to stray away from it. I like it when people get surprised when they fling into the air lol.
I agree, the dashing block part is very difficult, but without the speed you wouldn't be able to enjoy the joy of flying xD. I may edit it, but right now I really would like to keep my dashing blocks >.<...
As of now, the carrots have changed .
Sorry about the sharks but she really likes them lol.

Thank you for your feedback once again, and I will check out your level soon .		2010-08-29 23:29:00

Author:
Unknown User

I just played it, now I'm going to play it again and leave my thoughts.

- I really like the all white look, it looks very clean and simple which is a good thing, especially with the music you've chosen
- I like the elephant, I was especially pleased with the fact that it moved fast enough to give you a score multiplier
- I agree with the above post that there should be an R1 sticker on the block after the wave effect blocks (I jumped in the gas the first time hoping for invisible dark matter)
- First time I did the race I flew over the finish line and died without triggering it, this time I flew over the starting line and had to swing back over it
- The floating blocks over gas gave me a really hard time last time, this time it only cost me one life
- Both times playing, the rabbit just fell over in the gas and I respawned and was dropped in it again 2 more times, not sure if I'm doing this right
- The shark part was much easier this time, and I didn't feel blocked at the end, but then I got curious about the next water area and gassed myself...

It's a pretty fun stage which is strange to me because it has elements of stages that I won't play (Jumps/ Sharks). It wasn't as annoying as most of those stages are though and I appreciate that. If there was a part that was particularly difficult, it didn't repeat, so I knew if I got past it there would be something new to do. Overall it's a pretty good stage, it got :star::star::star::star: from me both times.		2010-08-31 20:25:00

Author:
Rottinghouse
Posts: 143

Wow, I was pleasantly surprised at how well the all white concept came across. It was nice and simple, very easy to enjoy.

Just some feedback:

+Music fit very well
+Challenges/Obstacles were decent
+Variety of events
+Platforming was good, took me forever to find out that there was no hidden walkway at the bounce block though, so maybe a clue would help (You put help after you jump using the block, should put it on the block itself)

-My friend and I might have died 20 times trying to jump across the cubes that sink just far enough to get you killed, maybe set it up so they move in a wave (would make it so you could get across in one go, no stopping)
-Shark pit was rather difficult to traverse.
-It was a very simple level, nice, but not enough in it to make it amazing		2010-08-31 20:38:00

Author:
SSTAGG1
Posts: 1136

Thanks for the review Rottinghouse! Ahh, you're the third or so player to tell me to put an R1 sticker on it lol. I guess i'll do it >.> I really wanted to refrain from sticker use though to keep the simple use but whatever's needed will be needed! Yeah, flying over the start / finish lines can be a nuisance, and I can add some invisible dark matter I guess as well. As a matter of fact, I think I'll add a secret path with dark matter!

To use the rabbit, you have to time its hops by letting go of r1 and holding onto it again quickly before landing again, but it's no biggie. It's just there for lolz, and I couldn't make the checkpoint move instantly to the other side for some reason (probably because I used multiple blocks to move it) I'll improve on it when I get the chance.

Lol @ your curiosity, and thanks for the 4 stars!		2010-08-31 20:39:00

Author:
Unknown User

Hey there. I played your level yesterday but was unable to leave any feedback. But I'm back now and here's what I thought:

Pros
- I loved the whole visual appeal to this level. The white rounded corner blocks really made me smile as I've never seen it before quite honestly.
- The platforming was fun and pretty creative (I especially liked the rabbit hop race. However, I could see how this wouldn't work in some cases when the rabbits get stuck in the gas. No big deal though)

Cons
- The only real issue I had with this level was that the elephant and rabbits didn't have much...detail I guess. They seemed hastily made in some cases.
- Also, there's one section in the platforming that caused death after death after death. The only way to pass was to memorize when to jump. I'm sure you know which area I'm talking about. xD

Overall I think it was a pretty good level. It was really quite original! (And had a sense of random appeal.) I just wish it were a bit more interesting and longer.
:star::star::star::star:		2010-08-31 20:43:00

Author:
AeroForce22
Posts: 392

SSTAGG1, thanks for the review! Yeah I was surprised how well the white turned out myself lol. Since many people are having trouble, I will be sure to move the speech bubble or put an R1 sticker on the bouncing pad!
Sorry about your 20 deaths lol but i don't think i'm going to change it because i like thinking of new puzzles and platforms for people to pass (even though they may be difficult).
Yeah the shark pit is rather difficult, but I don't know how to make it better. Any suggestions would be nice!		2010-08-31 20:45:00

Author:
Unknown User

AeroForce22, Thanks for the review! Yeah I was pretty happy to have discovered the nice, white and round surface lol. And my artistic skills are at a very low level, so I literally took the elephant sticker and made it a robot lol (while adding some "pop up" effects with the legs, ears, and trunk). The bunny and shark was made blindly (blindly meaning I have no idea how to draw them lol). Sorry for the lack of artistic skill but I tried my best xD.

I'm actually not sure which part you were talking about lol. Is it the floating cubes with the gas that kills you? If so, it's just a simple jump before it reaches the gas because your air time is long enough for the cubes to rise back up out of the gas. Anyways thanks again and yeah this level was totally random lol. I don't know if you read the description, but this level was basically designed by a list of random things my girlfriend likes .		2010-08-31 20:51:00

Author:
Unknown User

Hey dude I couldn't finish the level because the sharks destroyed the platforms and one got stuck in the exit.

Well from what I've seen, I rated it 3 stars. It's mostly empty space but I like the nice clean looks (and the elephant).
I hope you fix this soon enough so I can finish it.		2010-09-01 14:32:00

Author:
blizzard_cool
Posts: 752

Lol, you should be able to pass the sharks... even if one gets stuck on it because it's only a front layer object. (look at my shark screen shot, it's passable). As for the platforms, I hope the platforms you are talking are the floating cubes at the end (which how could they break? the sharks never reach that far) but if you're referring to the floating sponges... then yes. they are meant to be broken. have you never played a shark level?

Anyways I feel that this was an unfair rate (unless there were other issues but you didn't mention) but I will make the shark portion easier sometime when i get the chance on my ps3.		2010-09-01 15:41:00

Author:
Unknown User

I'm really sorry that I have made you feel that this was a unfair rating (I really not being sarcastic here) but to me this ain't a 4 star level, it's a 3 star.
But keep creating, get better and one day I may even give you a 5 star rating.

EDIT: Finished it!
Forgot about the bunney, that was really cool but my rating still stays the same. But it's a level worth playing

Lots of love, blizzard_cool <3		2010-09-01 16:55:00

Author:
blizzard_cool
Posts: 752

Sorry lol I just got a little annoyed when you told me about the breakable platforms because they are meant to be broken =. You're still talking about the sponges that float on the water right? Or did something else break?

Anyways, I'm taking your advice so no worries . I added a little ledge on the farthest layer, that way you can walk safely to the other side . It'll be up in a few minutes, just gotta test run.

Again i apologize for flipping out. And I lied about the shark never making it to the other side. I don't know what I was thinking when I said that, but yes sometimes sharks can go to the other side and yes it's intentional.		2010-09-01 17:00:00

Author:
Unknown User

Alright! Just published an updated version 1.2!
- if you die riding the bunny mobile, you will die at the most once when falling down
- shark is now easier to get through!
- R1 sticker is on the bumper!

Going to make a version 1.3 where the background is of infinite blocks (but i need to learn how to use the infinite layer glitch first)


EDIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
VERSION 1.3 IS OUT!
Okay, attempted but failed. I am just going to keep the plain and simple look. But I have fixed some other issues
- the checkpoint at the bunny mobile will now go to the other side! yay no more deaths!
- water sinks back down after you cross the shark pit		2010-09-01 17:13:00

Author:
Unknown User


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