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Super Mario PSP

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Super Mario PSPgamerguy5000
A level based off the original Super Mario game.
2010-08-23 21:17:00

Author:
gamerguy5000
Posts: 4


Just finished it.

Positives:
+ Good balance as far as the challenge
+ Nice enemy designs
+ You got both the first and second level in there

Negatives:
- Uses both layers when it really only needs one
- Goombas and Koopas are all the same and don't offer any challenge (since you can lane switch around them)

Suggestions would be to make the Goombas and Koopas smaller, so that you can jump on them from the side (without having to be in front of/behind them) and if possible you could make them move to add a bit more challenge and spread them out more so that they won't bump into each other (maybe you could make them different by changing the speed at which they move. Slow Goombas, Medium speed Green Koopas, Fast Red Koopas).

Change everything to only the front layer (It's important that it's the front layer and not the back layer). Having two layers is a waste on this level and it really doesn't need it.


Also a personal suggestion, I wouldn't mind if you took the brain off of the Chain-Chomp so that it was invincible.

And you might make the Mushroom and Fireflower flat, and glue them in front of an empty Prize Bubble so that they give extra points when you get them.

Otherwise it's actually a pretty good Mario level with some nice variety.
2010-08-23 21:49:00

Author:
SirPaper
Posts: 150


Thank you very much for the feedback. you have some great ideas that i will seriously take into consideration. I'll steal your ideas and make a sequel to the level.
I actually tried to make the enemies smaller but in order to do so i would have had to compromise some of the details of the enemies. this was my first level and my next will be much better.
Thanks again.
2010-08-24 01:11:00

Author:
gamerguy5000
Posts: 4


Hi, gamerguy5000! I love you level! Nice reincarnation of Mario style game! Nice environments, good enemies and fun gameplay. Maybe level with more mobile enemies could be a little better, but it is your version and it looks good as it is right now. Also level has good length! So I gave you 5 stars and heart for this level and heart as creator for you.2010-08-24 13:41:00

Author:
Domik12
Posts: 838


Thanks Domik! I really appreciate the compliments! I'll try to improve enemy mobility in my next level.2010-08-25 20:14:00

Author:
gamerguy5000
Posts: 4


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