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ENCHANTED ADVENTURE Chapter 1: THE MISTERY OF THE CAVE

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ENCHANTED ADVENTURE Chapter 1: THE MISTERY OF THE CAVEPSYNTENS
I wait do you like it and enjoy it Sack?s
http://a.imageshack.us/img838/222/pergaminolbp.png (http://img838.imageshack.us/i/pergaminolbp.png/)		2010-08-15 21:30:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Great poster!2010-08-15 21:42:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385

Great poster!

Oh thank u, i wait u play my new level 		2010-08-15 22:06:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Yeah like the poster by the way...i played your level & heres my feedback

Positives:
+Caves well designed wasnt to choppy looking it was just right
+Blue lights to use power was pretty cool to
+Visuals looked great
+Gameplay ran smooth with no problems
+Spiders were well done looked just about real
+3D Usage looks very good also
+Platforming
+Boss fight
+Dialogue
+Character cut-outs

Negatives:
- When your doing the boss fight you can stand on the 3rd R1 grab switch & not be harmed by the spiders attacks..
-On the 1st rock that lifts up after you've through the 1st teleporter had rockets in it? you could see the smoke at top of rock & here the rocket boost.

Sugguestions:
-With the blue lights you have to stand on, you should show like some type of effect like the screen shaking maybe? when the rocks start to move..I saw you did it near the end but in beginning didnt have it.
-The cave in the beginning could use some hazards or those spider to keep the player from getting bored of just running & running.		2010-08-16 04:13:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653

ran out of room lol

Overall well done with the level::star::star::star::star:
F4F My level Comix Zone: Night of The Mutants		2010-08-16 04:15:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653

Yeah!! thank u so much its great ur opininion and exist a explication for this [On the 1st rock that lifts up after you've through the 1st teleporter had rockets in it? you could see the smoke at top of rock & here the rocket boost.] the original idea is was that the smoke will stay as if it was provoked by the break of the rock against the wall of the cave but actually it did not stay since me it wanted, i?m sorry but is good observation 2010-08-16 11:36:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Yeah!! thank u so much its great ur opininion and exist a explication for this [On the 1st rock that lifts up after you've through the 1st teleporter had rockets in it? you could see the smoke at top of rock & here the rocket boost.] the original idea is was that the smoke will stay as if it was provoked by the break of the rock against the wall of the cave but actually it did not stay since me it wanted, i?m sorry but is good observation

after the post I started to think that probably thats what it was for to show the rock sliding up againt the wall in the cave but I wasnt for sure so I pointed that out but thanks for clearing that up 		2010-08-16 13:35:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653

Wow!! this work is awesome and i like ur creation my love, i estimated ur work, ur time, and ur pawn for creating magic worlds where only our dreams can happen, it is impressive to see that with every level one more perfection exists, this time that you use in each of them means a total development of a history, thanks for joining to sharing this task, and thank you for doing a history so full of fantasy.

i love it <3 :star::star::star::star::star:		2010-08-16 21:49:00

Author:
Unknown User

Nice poster man!!!
You will totally get good feedback for this!!!		2010-08-16 21:52:00

Author:
shadow3596
Posts: 2442

Thank?s for ur comments i wait enjoy it my level
tomorrow give ur feedbacks 		2010-08-17 01:51:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Lol! The way you post is strangly amuzing to me Cant wait, loved that poster!2010-08-17 03:21:00

Author:
grayspence
Posts: 1990

Oh thank u for ur comment, i?ll wait do you like my level and enjoy it 2010-08-17 11:01:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Looks cool, I'll give it a try later today or tomorrow and tell ya what I think.

Okay, I played it and here's what I thought.

I think you did a great job making the characters although I thought the spiders weren't really that detailed. I really liked going through portals and going under the light to get your platforms. The spider boss was okay, but grabbed the left end of the grabbable piece closest to the left and didn't once get killed while still hoolding onto it. Some were really close but didn't kill me. Some were about to fall on me and kill me when I stayed there but then right before they got on me they dissapeared so it wasn't really challenging at all. Also, I thought ou should make it be less shots to kill the spider boss, it took a while and felt kinda boring. I thought you did a great job with scenery. Overall, I gave it :star::star::star::star: and a <3		2010-08-17 15:19:00

Author:
Dragonvarsity
Posts: 5208

Great level, looked brilliant! Your 3D work was fantastic! Everything you made looked really good, especially the fairy. The spiders were made out of eggs (I'm guessing) and it looked really good. I especially enjoyed the mine cart ride.

My only complaint was the constant running to the side. Perhaps an obstacle or two?

All in all, 5 stars and a heart from me!		2010-08-17 20:49:00

Author:
trip090
Posts: 1562

Hey dudes thanks for ur comments is a good observation the mistake on the right side i will to repair and thank so much for ur opinions, and 2nd comment, i?m sorry can?t put more accion or more obstacles in this level but mi intension was to made a scenic level very very detail, but in the near levels i promisse much action and hard fight.

Thanks for ur :star:?s and <3?s		2010-08-17 22:13:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

hey i really liked this level it was actually lots of fun! and the mine cart ride was loads of fun! the special effects were cool and the cave felt really big and deep!! Not much else to say, jus keep creating and keep improving
4stars for you!!!!		2010-08-18 09:07:00

Author:
Bombw87
Posts: 126

Heya, i'll check your level out and give u feedback here later... would u mind doing the same for my FIRESTARTER level ?

Btw that poster is amazing!		2010-08-18 09:18:00

Author:
ladylyn1
Posts: 836

Heya, i'll check your level out and give u feedback here later... would u mind doing the same for my FIRESTARTER level ?

Btw that poster is amazing!

HEY LADYlLYN THANK U FOR CHECK OUT MY LEVEL, AND I GIVE U MY COMMENT IN UR LEVEL LOL, HAVE NOT YOU SEEN IT? 		2010-08-18 11:34:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Thanks for the feedback of "The Hero Chronicles LV6 Sky Metropolis". This level seems to have major improvements over the prologue level because you added more obstacles and great visuals. The character designs are marvelous and the you had some neat ideas of creating those light powers that changes the environment of the level. The level still needs more addition to obstacles and visuals but overall, it's a very good level. 5 stars2010-08-18 19:08:00

Author:
JustinArt
Posts: 1314

cool :O
how 'd you make it ?		2010-08-18 20:09:00

Author:
TOXIC_KILLA_
Posts: 147

Hey thank u so much for ur comment, and i like ur observations my intension is good representated, this level that to be much better that Enchanted Adventure Prologue thanks for all 2010-08-18 20:09:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Thank you for your feedback on my level.

Your level has a nice introduction, both here and in the game.
You're obviously skilled with the corner-editing tool, I could see that not only in the characters, but in the design of the caves. However, I had the impression the first caves needed some extra decorating, like what you did with the fairy and the underwater caves, those were good. I also liked your 3D backgrounds and lighting effects, so no complaints there.
I loved the spiders, looking all round and shiny, but they were basically the only obstacle in the whole level. I spent too much time just running from one side to another in some areas. Perhaps some more obstacles would help in the next chapter.
The cart ride was fun, especially for the floating bubbles and the bats animation.
Finally, I found the story kind of average, but that's not something I'm looking for in a game like this anyway.

I give you :star::star::star::star: and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.		2010-08-18 21:02:00

Author:
Flynn
Posts: 17

cool :O
how 'd you make it ?

What that u refer??		2010-08-18 21:40:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

First I must say that it's a great level! I loved the design and all the ideas you had like the spiders and the light you have to use as switches. I was very impressed about the part where the light came up and you could walk over it! I never saw anyone using such an effect! Really great but there are a few things I noticed.
The first problem was when I walked to the right when the big gate at the biginning has opened and wanted to go left I died for some reason and could go on because after opening the gate there was an invisible wall.
Another problem was that the bubbles where to high in the air so I often had to jump. Wasn't very usefull at the cart part because I couldn't jump or I would have died.
I also noticed that the last of the vikings didn't make a sound like the others. Did you forgot that or was that on purpose?
The last thing was that there is no way to get the prize bubble because you are underwater and you can't change between layers.

However I really liked it and that's why I gave you 5 stars and a heart!		2010-08-19 20:08:00

Author:
Chrree
Posts: 554

First I must say that it's a great level! I loved the design and all the ideas you had like the spiders and the light you have to use as switches. I was very impressed about the part where the light came up and you could walk over it! I never saw anyone using such an effect! Really great but there are a few things I noticed.
The first problem was when I walked to the right when the big gate at the biginning has opened and wanted to go left I died for some reason and could go on because after opening the gate there was an invisible wall.
Another problem was that the bubbles where to high in the air so I often had to jump. Wasn't very usefull at the cart part because I couldn't jump or I would have died.
I also noticed that the last of the vikings didn't make a sound like the others. Did you forgot that or was that on purpose?
The last thing was that there is no way to get the prize bubble because you are underwater and you can't change between layers.

However I really liked it and that's why I gave you 5 stars and a heart!

Hey thank you very much for all your observations, and i have to clarify some and others obvious i will correct them, it of the entry to the cave already it is arranged and he had not thought it so graces, it of the bubbles where the car is yes that can catch only if you mount in the part where you can seize the car i know that it is difficult but it is the intenseness, the sound of the last dwarf i not realized and thank you very much for this notice either and finally the plunged bubble is a secret of the screen yes you try to catch of some place you will be able to achieve it, but to facilitate the things i have put a track.

Thank you for all the information that gave me it brings over of my level, for the stars and the heart		2010-08-20 00:44:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Nice level I thought it was pretty and the characters were nice. As it was said there was a lot of running, little more obstacles would be cool. First thing, when the dwarf says there is magic needed for the portal thing, the cam is looking the opposite way to the portal. I didn't know there even was one! I thought the crystals in the distance were being hinted at and ran around scratching my head for a bit lol. I suggest pointing cam to actual portal. Second, in the portal room there is a speech that says "put in the light to receive power" or something similar. Again I ran around thinking I had to put something so I got out the crystal decoration and went to town! I think you should change it to "stand in the light..." The spiders looked cool! The water chick I thought could have hinted at her power she gives a bit more, I'm guessing it was the scuba gear but there was no hint as to this. Good job though!

:star::star::star::star:		2010-08-20 18:08:00

Author:
OneEyedBanshee
Posts: 1370

thanks for the comment and for playing my lvl, and for ur suggestions, but i?m sorry i don't have thermometer. 2010-08-21 16:26:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Just played your level psyntens and really enjoyed it. The caves were very well done and I liked the mechanics of the lights and steps. The water at the bottom of the caves was a really good addition, liked that a lot. Overall very good visually and good, interesting gameplay. Well done.

Icey		2010-08-21 21:03:00

Author:
IceMaiden
Posts: 1057

Hey thank u so much IceMaiden, and i wait ansiously ur comment, im making the next chapter and i wait do u like it 2010-08-21 21:28:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Hello psyntens have checked your level and it has seemed to me to be extraordinary, already it had played to the previous history and the continuation is really surprising, has more game great, you face to enemies and enjoy a real landscape inside a perfect cave, i congratulate my done bundle a fantastic level wait with anxieties for Enchanted's continuation that i believe that we will surprise furthermore, the part where this the fairy is precious, really you make us live through a magic experience.

I have given you :star::star::star::star::star: and <3		2010-08-23 18:35:00

Author:
babydoll
Posts: 5

Oh thank u so much babydoll for ur comment and for ur :star:?s and the <3 LOL, i?m making the second part of the Enchanted Adventure and i hope that you like so much like chapter 1, since i am dedicating a lot of time to the construction of scenes and of the new prominent figures that apareceran in this saga.2010-08-24 10:52:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Really nice, I actually enjoyed it

I admired the aesthetics of the cave, and will most likely borrow ideas for a level I'm working on, if you don't mind?

The boss at the end was pretty clever, never thought of trying anything like that before. Pretty cool.

Just an all round great level, but I do think that a lot of it was running to one side, a few obstacles or traps would have been nice. I'm a sucker for a few traps every now and then.

And yes, I did heart it. 		2010-08-24 11:50:00

Author:
CrumpetColey
Posts: 41

hey thank u for ur comment, i like ur word, and i?m so happy for what you say of my level.

Comming soon: Enchanted Adventure Chapter 2		2010-08-24 19:18:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Hi, I played your level. In general the level has the same good/not-so-good things than the former one. I gave it 4 stars instead of 5 because of the lack of changeling gameplay . In more detail:

good:
- the visuals are awesome, in particular the aspect of the caves is great
- the creatures are really good
- the special effects regarding the lights are great
- the puzzles, where some rocks move and let you pass, are really nice, but rather trivial

The level is great, but I would like to do some constructive criticism , so

not so good:
- as in your former level, it lacks of real good gameplay. I mean, you spend long parts of the level just walking... that's little bit boring
- there is not a clear history. I mean, who did you saved? how did you do? You just go ahead and will some insects... that was my feeling
- the boss is nice visually, but the gameplay is rather unfair. I mean, is not easy to avoid it to will you. I had the feeling I had no other choice than shoot as much as possible until it kills you. Or maybe I'm too bad playing 		2010-08-25 20:49:00

Author:
onturenio
Posts: 138

This level was in a style that I like. I'd say it was minimalistic up until the underwater part, which actually made me think maybe you'll go back and add in some more details and variety to the rest of the level? I also like how the design of the spider contrasted with the rest of the level, it stuck out, and whatever lighting effect you did for the invisible bridge looked real cool. Also you used the extra layers and some other little glitch things, like those weird bubble things, to nice effect.

Some stuff to work on. Mistery is commonly spelled mystery. At one part it says "Put in the middle of the light to receive the power" which would make more sense if it was changed to "Stand in the middle of the light to receive the power".

I think your trails of point bubbles were too long and it would be nice to have little groups of three bubbles placed in the areas where there were none, but that might not fit with the levels current set up. The boss confused me a little but makes sense now that I've killed it.

Teleporters, I've used them before but I don't like them. Usually with some good planning, anything a teleporter does can be done with dissolve unless there used as a gameplay mechanic. Here I didn't feel like you did that.		2010-08-26 04:44:00

Author:
MofoSuperVillain
Posts: 88

What a pleasant level !
From the beginning to the end you have no time to be bored !
- Nice backgrounds (the chrystals, good use of the 3D tool).
- I loved the dimensional gates.
- Very well designed characters (all of them).
- Maybe the grass floor at the begining is too flat and the materials in the cave miss some details but all in one it's ok

Anyway a deserved :star::star::star::star::star: and a <3

Great job !		2010-08-26 09:08:00

Author:
onisdream
Posts: 80

Thank u so much for all comments, i wait they have enjoyed my level 2010-08-26 13:01:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

HELLO I HAVE PLAYED YOUR LEVEL AND IT HAS SEEMED TO ME TO BE EXCELLENT THE HISTORY ALREADY HAD FOLLOWED IT FROM ENCHANTED ADVENTURE 3D AND IT IS PHENOMENAL, I DELIGHT THE PROMINENT FIGURES THAT YOU BELIEVE AND MORE HERE THAT THERE IS SACK's FIGHT AGAINST THE SPIDERS, WHICH CERTAINLY ARE INCREDIBLE. THE ZONE WHERE THE FAIRY IS IS OMG, DO NOT BE SINCE YOU DID ALL THAT, I LIKED THE GAMEPLAY, CONGRATULATIONS YOU DID A GOOD WORK
I HAVE GIVEN YOU :star::star::star::star::star:		2010-08-28 15:22:00

Author:
juanis
Posts: 16

Thanks for the feedback on my level. I really liked the visuals in the caves, the stalactites and stalagmites were really cool looking. Also nice effect on the crystal with the lights floating around them; it added to the enchanted feel of the level. Good layer usage in the cave too, but I would've liked to see that also used outside at the very beginning of the level. Running across the blue light, which was acting as a bridge was very cool and added to the enchanted feel of the level. I don't know if you call standing in the blue lights and waiting for the environment to move a puzzle but if it is it's too easy, and if it isn't it's far too boring to be one of the main gameplay aspects in your level. Cool spider enemies. Nice use of 3d. fun boss fight. Overall I found your level to be enjoyable to play through.2010-08-28 16:02:00

Author:
zynax555
Posts: 170

Very lovely visuals and atmosphere. I have nothing I would change with the exception of maybe the boss taking too many hits to kill... It felt a little drawn out there. Other then that amazing work and detail 5 stars from me.2010-08-29 02:38:00

Author:
Unknown User

thank u for ur sugestions and for all comments 2010-08-30 14:20:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Psyntens sorry it took ages for me to discover that one of my favourite creators has brought out a new fancy level.. This also means look out for a play by play review in the near narly future2010-10-03 15:26:00

Author:
J_wulfke
Posts: 72

WooooooooooooooooaAaaaoooWWW!! this is a surprise for me thanks for ur words is aprecciated, and i wait u play my level and enjoy it. Thanks for be found me 2010-10-04 00:29:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

Because it took a while to make some spare time I have decided to make this the BIGGEST review I haven written yet.
I enter my funky pod and grab my huge controller to enter the levelname...
On second thought Psytens is shorter so I'm just going to enter that..
AHA BINGO... Woops there's a prelude oh well going to write one for that later as well.
Okay I press X and the level loads..
I leap out of this portal into an unknown world filled with a happy violin-tune.
Amazed by the lovely fence and picturesque landscape I walk towards the LBPC sign in the distance..(considering there's a invisible wall blocking my other way XD)
As I reach it the fence ends and I see a part of a tree.
This tree it's so so pretty !!http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=24936TREEHUG!
I continue my journey through the short forest..
And stumble upon an unexpected mountain terrain..
Time to gear up !
AAAH Moving tree and rocks 0.0
Say whaaa ? I aint no magician I'm a construction worker o.0
Nice cave atmosphere
Very mouldy
Love the roofrocks(a.k.a. stalactites)
I continue venturing into the scary cave and stumble upon strange pillars
The music changes to a rather exciting tune...
OMG SHINY !!!!!!


TO SHINY...MUST RESIST !
I eventually proceeded and found BUBBLES !!
YAy
MORE SHINY THINGIES
Mr.Viking asks for my help...
I'll help him I guess
OMG NICE PORTAL !
I leap into the portal and find myself in a strange realm where I ave powers =D
I jump and leap and whaam! Superhero rescue
I open the door and proceed
More lovely cave btw
Cavescribblings.. nice touch
OH yeah I got the power alright
Btw this part is very nicely done..
The light almost seems alive..
BUBBLES !! I feel like you've added those just for me That makes me happy
OOOh fancy surprise a dagger inside a rock
Another portal OKAY This time i'm prepared
(Btw no whispering at this portal ?)
I do my thing and survive the next dazzling puzzle with magic
Once again my way has been cleared
AAAGH SCAWY MONSTER
I dodged it's deadly spit and proceeded only to stumble upon the greatest and nicest cave opening eva
More scribbles
Did those cavemen use adobe illustrator for that cuz it's really good ?
WoHOO Magicpower workxs
And more bubblygoodness
(Sidenote: This is level has an incredible amount of detailing and feels great and yet.. It feels like I've been venturing forever I am amazed that you were able to fit this all in one level!)
WOW after all of this you have a superawesome cavecart ride 2 ? R U god ?
Bats, lavawalls truely anyone MUST play this it's freakin awesome!
Grrr another spiderbeing
Die spiderbeing
I cross the bridgerock and find smore scribbles
OOh a sturdy lil' wooden bridge
Half way
GOD ****IT I KNEW IT!
I totally had a vibe about that bridge and well weeee falling
o.O Underwatercave , glitchusage appreciated.. Man I feel so peacefully in that cave.
Lady Oona looks very extremely good..
HEY
I was still reading
Great, back in the scary cave -.-
Sure vikingboss dude
Another bridge it's gonna snap is it ?
Crossed it woot!
Ooh yeah an epic spiderbattle took place right here!
At last I have scubadived my way past a something rockish and reached the endportal
My arms are tired, my legs are worn out but it was worth it, I have a saved the Vikings !

Loved every inch of it, Mr. and Md. Psytens you have done it again !
:star::star::star::star::star:<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3:star::star::star::star::star::star: That's my rating !
(There were going to be more pictures ( a lot) but I accidentally deleted them all except this one =( )		2010-10-07 13:37:00

Author:
J_wulfke
Posts: 72

OMG!! o_O
This is a reply more biggest that i have received and is INCREDIBLE
Thanks for ur time, for ur words for was play my level and for to dedicated me a BIG REPLY
is very confortable to recibe this comments, but i made the level with very funny and emotion, and that the players remain so satisfied since me with the represented in the level it is fantastic.

i dont have more words, sincerely...

T H A N K Y O U SO MUCH FOR ALL!!!!!		2010-10-07 23:32:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562

OMG!! o_O
This is a reply more biggest that i have received and is INCREDIBLE
Thanks for ur time, for ur words for was play my level and for to dedicated me a BIG REPLY
is very confortable to recibe this comments, but i made the level with very funny and emotion, and that the players remain so satisfied since me with the represented in the level it is fantastic.

i dont have more words, sincerely...

T H A N K Y O U SO MUCH FOR ALL!!!!!

Your welcome =)		2010-10-08 14:35:00

Author:
J_wulfke
Posts: 72


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