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Jungle Runartise1 run through the Jungle as fast as you can and defeat the Evil King Hotdog. lol my first full level that is just pure platforming fun. check it out

2010-08-14 23:25:00 Author: artise Posts: 353

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i searched Jungle Run & thousands popped up so I searched artise & nothin pop up so i come on here 2 see wat nm you had it under artise with a 1 -_- lol ill go find it again & comebac with feedback

2010-08-15 01:42:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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Since there are so many "Jungle Runs" you might add a tip to search for @Artise1. That will narrow it down to your levels and thus we can find it. Alright, on to playing your level. I make a commentary as I go: Well, first of all, I might move the race's starting pad so the players can start when they're ready. I felt rushed as it were. I immediately got stuck on your sticker trigger, couldn't figure it out, stuck a beaver on (which might be dangerous, assuming some players don't have that sticker), and promptly got stuck under the giant exploding rock. I had to go to the "Try Again" option, which, IMO, should never have to be used. I'm not a fan of the potty humor, but I suppose there's an audience for that. Also, there was visible dark matter/dissolve by your lift. I'm not even sure what it was there for. Actually, there was visible dark matter everywhere. Be sure you hide that stuff. On the leap of faith, I landed on top of a cloud and had to die. Also, the bridge didn't appear for me for like... half a minute, and I got confused and ran around trying to figure out what to do. I couldn't pull the lever under the hot dog because he ran over it and wouldn't get off. Drove me nuts before he squished me. Didn't finish the race in time because of that dude. The visual style wasn't bad, but all in all... it really needs work. I gave it :star::star:. Do some stuff with the things I commented on. Give your players some direction, tell them where to go (even a little arrow helps), show what happens when you pull a switch, and don't make it impossible to pull levers under giant hot dogs. If you'd review my level, I'd appreciate it: Commander Keen: Goodbye Galaxy - Part II (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=33062-Commander-Keen-Goodbye-Galaxy-Part-II)

2010-08-15 03:41:00 Author: Ryhas Posts: 179

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Good Things - The sandwich attacking the little people was pretty funny. - At least you made your own enemies. Not-so-Good Things - Sticker thing at the beginning confused me. - After placing the sticker, I got stuck under the lumpy rock thing... - I don't really like toilet humor. Just saying. - You should always hide dark matter. - random gas cloud? - oh so much dark matter..... - I couldn't even find the switch at the end because it was under the hotdog. Things That Need Improvement - Scenery. There are quite a few levels out there that help teach you how to make your level look nice. - Guidance/direction. Players need to know what they are doing. I didn't know what to do when I faced the boss at the end. - HIDE DARK MATTER. This level needs some work. Hope some of this advice helps.

2010-08-15 20:06:00 Author: ShamgarBlade Posts: 1010

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