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The Little Big ChallengeTheOshenator
Hi :-) I would like some reviews on my level as I put ALOT of time into it and I believe it is one of my best creations so far, yet I have very little plays so far for some reason. Anyway the reason I would like reviews is because I want to know why its not getting plays so I can improve future levels. Thanks :-)


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Author:
TheOshenator
Posts: 54

I will try this soon. 2010-08-15 05:02:00

Author:
ShamgarBlade
Posts: 1010

That was challenging; why o why is the spawn so far D:
It was fun though xD		2010-08-15 05:17:00

Author:
Count
Posts: 315

Hmm. This level was ok. Here's my list:

Good Things
- Has some nice gameplay.
- The train is pretty cool.
- I love jumping over fire logs...

Not-so-Good Things
- Checkpoints... There are not too many around and that doesn't allow room for any mistakes.
- One of the teleporters look like a random gas cloud with dark matter. I thought it was a trap at first.
- If you fall off the train... well.. you can't get back on.

The one thing I would suggest is that you put more effort into making your level look better. Instead of random textures, dark matter, and big gas clouds, try giving your level a theme. There are quite a few levels out there that will help teach you how to do this sort of thing. Hope this helps! 		2010-08-15 05:34:00

Author:
ShamgarBlade
Posts: 1010

I will try this soon.

Great! Thanks


That was challenging; why o why is the spawn so far D:
It was fun though xD

I think you must be talking about the second stage. That spawn is pretty far. I'll add a spawn point thats not so far then Thanks for replying


Hmm. This level was ok. Here's my list:

Good Things
- Has some nice gameplay.
- The train is pretty cool.
- I love jumping over fire logs...

Not-so-Good Things
- Checkpoints... There are not too many around and that doesn't allow room for any mistakes.
- One of the teleporters look like a random gas cloud with dark matter. I thought it was a trap at first.
- If you fall off the train... well.. you can't get back on.

The one thing I would suggest is that you put more effort into making your level look better. Instead of random textures, dark matter, and big gas clouds, try giving your level a theme. There are quite a few levels out there that will help teach you how to do this sort of thing. Hope this helps!

Thanks. That does help alot. Sorry about the train lol I spent days trying to make a door that would shut when you got in and didnt open until you needed to leave but to no avail . Also there is a mouth on the train that said "Hold R1 at all times while in the train" but apparently its not working so I'll go straight there and fix it.
The checkpoints were put far appart purposly but since there is another comment above yours about them I'll add more.
I'll see what I can do about the train as I have an idea and also I'll hide the gas louds which, sadly, are necessary to teleport.
Thanks for your comment :-)



Also, Thanks very much to whoever gave me a heart :-) And did anyone find the hidden stage?



*UPDATE*
I have added a new checkpoint to make the second stage easier.
I have made it so that the mouth on the train works and also now you can't fall out.
Gas clouds now better hidden.
Hidden area has now been modified.

Please keep the reviews coming :-)		2010-08-15 15:31:00

Author:
TheOshenator
Posts: 54

Friendly bump 2010-08-18 01:36:00

Author:
TheOshenator
Posts: 54

Maybe I'm going to play it later. However the name ''LittleBigChallenge'' Isn't very creative. There are already over 50 levels with that name.2010-08-18 15:00:00

Author:
VenemoX
Posts: 197

I couldn't think of anything better, I always find that naming a level is the hardest part.2010-08-27 11:07:00

Author:
TheOshenator
Posts: 54

I just played your level and here is my feedback:

Positives:
+Train Ride

Negatives:
-When you fall out the train theres no way back on it
-Materials used didnt like the random style you had going there maybe find a theme or style with 2 materials that will give off better look?
-Dont really find the challenges to challenging, maybe could of mixed it up a little bit to surprise us than us knowing whats coming already

Overall Keep up the good work::star::star:		2010-08-27 15:28:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653

Thanks for the review I thought I made it impossible to fall out of the train, I'll take a look and see if I can fix it . Thanks again.2010-08-31 13:17:00

Author:
TheOshenator
Posts: 54


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