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A journey through a mind...

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A journey through a mind...Keith-Midnight
Cartoon styled level inspired by tim burtons works. a funny and random level based on its style!
2010-08-14 07:54:00

Author:
Unknown User


You should put some screenshots to get more replies! However here is what I think:
Good:
+Colours: They were kind of neo/cartoon stylish in a black background.
+Visuals: Shapes were good. And that weird thing that had water(fall???) looked good as well.
+Gameplay: Nothing way too special but still satisfying.
Bad:
-Way too short. Did you use many materials or what? Shapes were not too complicated to overheat this level.
-Character: It wasn't bad but it could have been a bit more creative.
Overall good level that I gave 4 stars and a heart. Too short and simple for 5 stars.
BTW if you wanna have more plays you should try F4F. (feedback for feedback). Give feedback to other levels and earn some for yourself. My F4F level is The Cellar, for example.

PS: I don't know anything about beta and I'm not interested to join it by myself.
2010-08-14 09:26:00

Author:
FreeAim
Posts: 2462


You should put some screenshots to get more replies! However here is what I think:
Good:
+Colours: They were kind of neo/cartoon stylish in a black background.
+Visuals: Shapes were good. And that weird thing that had water(fall???) looked good as well.
+Gameplay: Nothing way too special but still satisfying.
Bad:
-Way too short. Did you use many materials or what? Shapes were not too complicated to overheat this level.
-Character: It wasn't bad but it could have been a bit more creative.
Overall good level that I gave 4 stars and a heart. Too short and simple for 5 stars.
BTW if you wanna have more plays you should try F4F. (feedback for feedback). Give feedback to other levels and earn some for yourself. My F4F level is The Cellar, for example.

PS: I don't know anything about beta and I'm not interested to join it by myself.

Like this guy said hehe
post up some pics and you'll get more good feedback
2010-08-14 09:29:00

Author:
shadow3596
Posts: 2442


This has been up for awhile hasn't it? I see the name and description and I'm sure I played it months ago.

It was really fantastic!
2010-08-14 10:25:00

Author:
SpeedyMcKnuckles
Posts: 331


First things first. Congrats on having both of your artistic levels making a spotlight. That was an fantastic level. The artistic visuals looks really cool and has a Tim Burton style too. Despite that this level is short, the platforming is great too. 5 stars and a heart.2010-08-23 23:49:00

Author:
JustinArt
Posts: 1314


I liked this level though the hand at the begining, which I don't thnk was designed to be an obstacle, became one for me as I kept trying to jump onto the moving platform and would get stuck on the hand. Maybe put some sort of thin invisble layer of stuff in front of it? Seems like it could clear up the problem. A few other spots where like that and it's one of the things that frustrates me the most in otherwise well designed levels.2010-08-24 05:52:00

Author:
MofoSuperVillain
Posts: 88


Fun to play! It had an interesting setting and the obstacles had awesome effects! (For example, the glowing mushroom)
originality: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: (i know i haven't seen one like yours!)
Visuals: :star: :star: :star: :star:
obstacles/problem solving: :star: :star: :star:
advice: add a little bit more game play in your levels. your obstacles were all the same, so a variety of challenges would make it less repeating.
music: :star: :star: :star: :star:

I can't wait to play the sequel! Keep up the good work!
2010-08-25 22:00:00

Author:
LWBear2
Posts: 332


I played the level and here's what I thought.

I thought the style of this level was brilliant with the skeleton like creatures and the many blues although there were parts where I get caught like in the beginning when your trying to get to the last platform before jumping to the land with the house, you go on the guy your going in the mind of's hand which is okay compared to the next problem. When jumping on the cubes with nothing on the inside and getting on the blue monster's tongue I go for points and make a little jump to the right to get trapped in the box making me re-try. I don't know if this was meant as a fun trap and if so that's fine but I just wanna make sure and I can't get out of the layer because the one I got caught in one is the front layer. I thought the scene with the water was great with the water falling and the lines on the water like little waves. I also thought the bridges and trees were well designed. I loved the winter feel and seeing the different houses and building plus meeting the characters throughout and hearing what they had to say was pretty fun although not much story but that's fine.

In a nut shell, it's a great level with a fantastic theme and I love how you designed the trees, houses, bridges....everything! Not too much on story but that's fine, the dialogue of the characters you pass by is fun and although there might be a couple minor problems, that's fine. The gameplay was awesome and there was plenty of it and yeah, looking forward to a sequel. I gave it :star::star::star::star::star: and a <3
2010-08-26 00:28:00

Author:
Dragonvarsity
Posts: 5208


more more more! i love wierdo levels with a artistic feeling! the houses, the characters, the river, the cubes (lol?)... wow... make a ghost house in the sequel! with a walking bathtub! and pipes! , i can't see anything that needs to be changed... it's perfect xD
five stars and heart,
2010-08-29 01:55:00

Author:
>er.
Posts: 785


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