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So, What was your first car? (If you have one. Optional question is what will be your first?) Did you/will you name your first car? Be honest! What are you currently driving? What is your dream car? My first and still current car is a 1 litre, X registered Vauxhall Corsa. She's Blue and she's named Cassie, after Cassandra Cain. She's a brilliant runner, and though the other half wants to upgrade, I'm not ready to yet as I'm emotionally attached, I've had her for two years, and she doesn't cost much to run or repair. My dream car is a Dodge Viper in blue with the two white stipes across from front to back. I've wanted one ever since playing Gran Turismo! Real world dream car would probably be a Honda Civic. Those things are pretty.

2008-10-19 08:34:00 Author: flakmagnet Posts: 1084

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1)What was your first car? (If you have one, optional question is what will be your first?) 2)Did you/will you name your first car? Be honest! 3)What are you currently driving? 4)What is your dream car? 1orsh 911 lol my dad gave it to me 2: Sexy bum bum nah lol i didn't name it 3: My bike / Legs 4: Evo 9

2008-10-19 08:36:00 Author: Thee-Flash Posts: 3154

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Check your OP. The second line doesn't read correctly. I think you should either change the comma after the 'one' to a period and capitalize the 'o' in 'optional', or add the word 'don't' after 'you'.

2008-10-19 08:39:00 Author: Unknown User

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Check your OP. The second line doesn't read correctly. I think you should either change the comma after the 'one' to a period and capitalize the 'o' in 'optional', or add the word 'don't' after 'you'. Clank / English teacher

2008-10-19 08:40:00 Author: Thee-Flash Posts: 3154

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Clank / English teacher Fragment (consider revising)

2008-10-19 08:43:00 Author: Unknown User

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Fragment (consider revising) you really don't under stand me do you let me say this (EASY) for you I HATE GRAMMER!

2008-10-19 08:46:00 Author: Thee-Flash Posts: 3154

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you really don't under stand me do you let me say this (EASY) for you I HATE GRAMMER! Capitalize the 'y' in 'you' at the beginning of the sentence. Combine 'under' and 'stand'. Add a '?' after the second 'you'. Capitalize the 'l' in 'let'. Remove the parenthesis from 'EASY'. Uncapitalize all letters in 'EASY'. Change the suffix of 'Y' in 'EASY' to 'ier' Add a ':' after the third 'you'. Uncapitalize all letters in 'HATE'. Uncapitalize all letters in 'GRAMMER'. Change the 'E' in 'GRAMMER' to an 'a'.

2008-10-19 09:25:00 Author: Unknown User

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OP has been edited. Enough with the grammar, on with the cars!

2008-10-19 09:29:00 Author: flakmagnet Posts: 1084

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You really don't understand me, do you? Let me say this easily for you. I hate grammar! Thar, saved you the trouble

2008-10-19 09:31:00 Author: Stix489 Posts: 2080

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Thar, saved you the trouble The suffix 'Y' should have been changed to 'ier' not 'ily'. Sorry. :o I have yet to own a car. I do not know what car will be my first. I will not be naming my first car. I am currently driving my mother's car, a white Honda Accord. My dream car is the Camaro as seen in Transformers with a different paint job.

2008-10-19 09:35:00 Author: Unknown User

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Capitalize the 'y' in 'you' at the beginning of the sentence. Combine 'under' and 'stand'. Add a '?' after the second 'you'. Capitalize the 'l' in 'let'. Remove the parenthesis from 'EASY'. Uncapitalize all letters in 'EASY'. Change the suffix of 'Y' in 'EASY' to 'ier' Add a ':' after the third 'you'. Uncapitalize all letters in 'HATE'. Uncapitalize all letters in 'GRAMMER'. Change the 'E' in 'GRAMMER' to an 'a'. are you trying to annoy me because please stop im not in the mood i could give you bad rep because in a way that insults me Thar, saved you the trouble i was never going to change it any way... you wasted ur time sorry now get back to cars!!

2008-10-19 12:06:00 Author: Thee-Flash Posts: 3154

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