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This thread is for requesting reviews for your levels. The reviews I can do are:
1. Long Detailed review
2. Long Detailed Review With Step by Step Reactions
3. Short Sweet (things I liked, things I didn't, rating)
4. All Rating [short] (Just rating of level)
5. All Rating [long] (look below for things I rate on)
6. The Three Judges*,** (three people rate level, not always leaving advice. Also all in the level at once)
7. Tour

*=Not always available
**=Not available for 1-player only levels

More details of these

1. Long Detailed Review
These are all the things I rate with suggestions and comments

Story (If Present)
Gameplay
Scenery/Visuals
Originality
Novelty Value (doesn't affect total rating)
Difficulty (Again doesn't affect rating)
Total Rating

[/LIST]

2.Long Detailed Review With Step by Step Reactions
Same as #1 with a paragraph or two with a walthrough.

3. Short Sweet
The best type of quick advice!

4. All Rating [short]***
Not really helpful but lets you know if you need to improve.
***=Only PM'ed

5. All Rating [long]
Rates on the things listed in 1 with no description.

6. The Three Judges
A different kind of rating. Three people (including me) will play a level and give feedback. Our choice of feedback though (sorry it just takes too long to write 3 long detailed reviews for one level)

7. Tour****
This is also kind of new to rating. Instead of rating, you invite me into your game and play your level (not edit). I will point out things that need to be fixed and things that you shouldn't touch with a keyboard.
****=Requires Keyboard or Mic

Well that's all the reviews I can do! Just start asking! Don't forget to include which way you want your review shown***** (new thread, reply or PM).
If below a 2.5/10 I will only PM you so you don't get :blush:

ALL REVIEWS DONE ON A 10 STAR RATING SYSTEM AND A 5 STAR ONE
Also my 10 star to 5 star is a little different. In order to separate levels more clearly I follow this scale
9.3+/10 = 5/5
7.0+/10 = 4/5
5.4+/10 = 3/5
2.6+/10 = 2/5
0+/10 = 1/5


Reviews already completed

1.'Pollen Maiden' by MGO_Count :star::star::star: (sorry for having it as 2 star ihad problems with editing it)
2.' No Laughing Matter lvl 1.1 The Genova Incident' :star::star::star:
2010-08-13 04:02:00

Author:
koltonaugust
Posts: 1382


My PSN: SpiffyMcCracken
My Level Name: No Laughing Matter lvl 1.1 The Genova Incident
Genre: War Story

It's a third of the first level, broken up because of the theromometer.
It's short, but there is more than one path to the end.

I've only tested it for one person but I put some fail safes in for a group playing.

I'd love to know what you think and how it worked with a group.

As far as what review you give and and how I get it--whatever you would like to do with it is fine with me.
2010-08-14 13:11:00

Author:
Spiffy McCracken
Posts: 9


My PSN: MGO_Count
My Level Name: Pollen Maiden (Survival)
Genre: Survival (Touhou-like) mini-game

Looking forward for the review!!
2010-08-14 16:38:00

Author:
Count
Posts: 315


Okay sorry for the really late review it shouldn't ever happen again! I was just away from PS3. Anyways on with the review for...
"My PSN: MGO_Count
My Level Name: Pollen Maiden (Survival)
Genre: Survival (Touhou-like) mini-game"


Pollen Maiden

1.Story -- N/A
No story is present

Gameplay -- 6/10
The gameplay was fun and simple but it did get repetitive and it sometimes glitched in certain places. One place was you could get squished when you were using another life. One cool little secret but it was overall pointless. I had no idea why the prizes were there. It wasn't really explained how to get them.

Scenery/Visuals -- 6/10
Some random visuals that weren't unappealing but didn't really fit in all the time. Mainly you sometimes used too many stickers.

Originality -- 8/10
I haven't seen a level with plasma dodging in a treehouseish theme.

Novelty Value -- 9/10
New but likely to be seen again soon

Difficulty -- 7/10
Its not that hard to dodge the balls but if you also want points...


Total rating -- 6/10
:star::star::star:
3 stars for you!
*note originality is only worth 10% of total star rating
2010-08-23 08:08:00

Author:
koltonaugust
Posts: 1382


Hiya can u review my FIRESTARTER level please.

PSN: Ladylyn1

Thanks in advance
2010-08-23 12:00:00

Author:
ladylyn1
Posts: 836


I don't know how it'll go with three people, but I'm curious to find out.

I'd very much like a solid (long, detailed) review of my level: Invasion of the Sack-Men From Space!

psn: SpeedyMcKnuckles
2010-08-23 13:33:00

Author:
SpeedyMcKnuckles
Posts: 331


Reviews on the way (sorry spiffyMcCracken i didnt see your post!)


No Laughing Matter lvl 1.1 The Genova Incident
By SpiffyMcCracken

Story -- 3/10
I was very confused with the story. I had absolutely no idea what had happened by the end of the level. My guess is i had to escape from the clowns??? It needed a little more explanation.

Gameplay -- 6/10
I was actually impressed with the gameplay as it was actually fun. The enemies were funny and not too hard but also not too easy. The cranes were a little hard to get to at times but other than that it was fun. The reason its not rated 9/10 is the fact that it is very short, make it longer and it would be a very enjoyable level!

Scenery/Visuals -- 8/10
It fit very well for the level although at the very beginning i thought that the sound could of come in a little earlier, it made me think there was no sound in the level at all besides wind. Other than that i thought the visuals got better towards the middle and stayed constant until the end. Nice work here.

Originality -- 9/10
Not every day that you see a clown army take control of a city

Novelty Value -- 6/10
On top of rooftops and in a city not that uncommon but it was done a little differently.

Difficulty -- 4/10
I found it really easy actually plus i played with two players and i didn't see any bugs, although i didnt get what was supposed to happen with the clown holding the bomb on the roof.

Total rating

6.8/10
:star::star::star:
(just read thats its a sequel in your post but i dont know what the prequels are called)
2010-08-23 22:44:00

Author:
koltonaugust
Posts: 1382


Hey, a review like this would be nice. Could you review my level?

Name: Onion Gale
PSN: NiKfY

It is a jumping challenge divided into 8 stages. It gets harder the more you progress, so try to get as far as you can.

One question: how good a player would you say you are? I mean, are you good at getting past hard levels?
2010-08-23 23:24:00

Author:
figuer39
Posts: 108


Yeah I'll be able to complete with a few tries and I might be a while as i have to get the other reviews done first.2010-08-24 01:45:00

Author:
koltonaugust
Posts: 1382


Could review my level please?

Level: Color Gardens
PSN: Shhabbazz

Thank youuu
2010-08-24 02:53:00

Author:
Shhabbazz
Posts: 746


Yeah, it's okay, chill.

I was thinking of asking you to review a harder level than Onion Gale, but that on is fine.
2010-08-24 15:03:00

Author:
figuer39
Posts: 108


Okay for the time being I wont be able accept reviews until i review Onion Gale, so please wait. (Wont be able to do ANY reviews tomorrow but the next few days i will)2010-08-26 02:09:00

Author:
koltonaugust
Posts: 1382


Hey, if you're not busy doing other reviews, could you play my level, Space Mini Level by jrichards16, and here's the LBP.me link: http://lbp.me/v/26yy09

Thanks!

Cheers, flyinhawaiian
2011-08-07 20:39:00

Author:
flyinhawaiian
Posts: 357


psn: YUBOY3
level: http://lbp.me/v/4wr838 second one: http://lbp.me/v/4wr478
genre: cinematic story
2011-08-09 12:43:00

Author:
YUBOY3
Posts: 116


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