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Destiny of a Weary Soul

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<3Destiny of a Weary SoulFireshire206
Please heart if u like it..its about rock climbing but something bad happens please play thanks:star::star::star::star::star:<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3.
http://i908.photobucket.com/albums/ac286/Jake_Dukeshier/th_RockClimbing.jpg?t=1281539870

http://i908.photobucket.com/albums/ac286/Jake_Dukeshier/th_Camping.jpg?t=1281539870
2010-08-11 16:19:00

Author:
Fireshire206
Posts: 17


Sounds good. Maybe add a bigger description. I'll check it out when i'm next on. Check out my thread 'Realm Of Magic' *Spotlighted* 2010-08-11 18:01:00

Author:
XXGrEEn0Xx
Posts: 75


I'll be sure to check it out.2010-08-11 18:06:00

Author:
SnakeEater777
Posts: 19


I played your level and heres my feedback

Positives:
+3D usage

Negatives:
-Need a checkpoint by mountain
-Theres a hole in your mountain that I fell through & got stuck
-Short
-little wierd didnt really gasp the concept

Sugguestions:
-For description might want to add pics to motivate people to want to play your level.
- Never ask for 5 stars & hearts show that your a little desperate (No disrespect)
- Should add more obstacles in the mountain to make it feel like an adventure.

Overall keep up the work::star::star::star:
F4F My level Comix Zone:Night of The Mutants
2010-08-11 21:56:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


I like the beginning, waking up, and it feels early. Good tent. Nice! I'd take out the invisible wall to the left, since you can just use the rock wall itself to stop the player.

Give the car some sound! Looks great, though!

At the top of the first ridge (under the car prize bubble, except far to the right), I accidentally ran underneath the gray stone (under the tree sticker) and couldn't get out. A checkpoint would be good there, too.

Love the lightning in the cavern!

I also like coming out of the cavern! However, for the global lighting change, I might make it a slower time (2-5 seconds) so the change in light isn't so abrupt.

The first 0 on your 7:00pm rotating thing broke.

I also wasn't sure why about the end... but okay. Just a bit abrupt.

I think what-to-do is very unclear. I only understand what's going on if I read the description. I like the rock-climbing feel and attitude of it, and overall it looks fairly good. I think it needs more life, maybe some creatures and obstacles, or at least a character.

I give it :star::star::star:

If you like, please leave feedback on my level: Commander Keen: Goodbye Galaxy - Part I (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=32124-Commander-Keen-Goodbye-Galaxy-Part-I)
2010-08-12 04:53:00

Author:
Ryhas
Posts: 179


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