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Tree's, Bee's, and Fee's *Spotlighted with video*

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Tree's, Bee's, and Fee'saustimerr
A fun level with nice visuals where you travel to and through the bugs world to solve the mystery of why the bug are so hungry!
This is my third level published but I consider it my first because the others are a tutorial and the PSP pod.

Begin in the forest and talk to a bird. You find out that bugs are eating all the trees!

So you go through some tree platforming until you get to the bugs world. I have created 8 very nice looking bugs that I think make this level so cool!

I don't want to explain the whole level but you resolve the problem and end the level on a happy note!

I hope you enjoy this level. I know I do!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rSIp9Xnw3pQ
2010-08-10 22:59:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


Ooooh cool im going to check this out!2010-08-11 00:32:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


Wow this level is great! i loved the bugs they looked very good! Great corner editing too the hole level looked very nice, I loved the bug city it reminded me of a bugs life. when i went to play it i saw 1 person had played it and rated it 1 star and that dose not make any sence this level was realy good!!! 5 stars and a heart great job! keep it up!2010-08-11 00:49:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


Wow, fantastic little level you got here! You did a bang up job on the characters both visually and in persona. You really brought the bug world to life. The only thing I thought was a little odd was that you put no point bubblles whatsoever. It made the tree section seem a little bit empty. Don't you know people like to score? LOL. 5 stars from me.2010-08-11 01:15:00

Author:
kaiju_kid
Posts: 329


Your corner editing and material selection were great. And your music selection was really fitting. However the stickerwork was probably the most outstanding feature. This was a nice level, but without point bubbles, it doesn't have as much replay value as it should.

All in all, 5-star level.
2010-08-11 01:55:00

Author:
Silver39
Posts: 1703


Because some one rated this level one star my level was only 2 stars so I republished it to get rid of that bad rating! So help me get a five star average rating people! Thanks!2010-08-11 03:59:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


ok ill replay it but you should update it with score bubbles2010-08-11 05:34:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


ok ill replay it but you should update it with score bubbles

Will do man!
2010-08-11 13:24:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


Score bubbles are up but kind of messed up too. 2010-08-11 14:01:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


Awesome scenery and characters, but next time, try and think of original gameplay and vary it a bit as well. Alot of it was "jump over fire, swing across ceiling, jump again". Maybe a few more original puzzles?(the maze has been done countless times)

It was awesome besides that tho.

4 stars and heart
2010-08-12 00:04:00

Author:
Unknown User


Awesome scenery and characters, but next time, try and think of original gameplay and vary it a bit as well. Alot of it was "jump over fire, swing across ceiling, jump again". Maybe a few more original puzzles?(the maze has been done countless times)

It was awesome besides that tho.

4 stars and heart

Thanks and I know that nothing was really original. I do alright with story, character, and scenery but I suck at creating new mechanics!
2010-08-12 03:05:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


This level was so awesome and the bugs too,they looked cool.Your sticker work and corner editing was my favorite thing in this level.The bugs talking in the bar was entertaning,but l did noticed a magic mouth next to the mosquito thingy.l suck at creating new mechanics too (l think), but ideas come and go you'll figure out something.lt is a great first level,l rate 5 stars and hearted.Good creators just keep coming and coming. 2010-08-12 03:57:00

Author:
Balgarino
Posts: 377


Any one mind posting pictures?2010-08-13 01:08:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


I just played this and I thought it was awesome. I don't mind so much that the level isn't very innovative as far as gameplay goes, because the scenery and story are so good. You could work on making your gameplay slightly more varied though. I always like seeing an awesome level from a creator I haven't heard of before(other people probably have heard of you, but I haven't). I loved the characters. Good characters are something I have always struggled to make, and you pulled it off well. One thing you should do is go throgh all the magic mouths and check spelling. I saw a few errors. Also, did you intentionally add apostrophies to the title? I don't see why you would, but, that should be changed. It's funny how the only things I can point out are spelling related.

:star::star::star::star::star: a <3 and a creator <3
2010-08-13 02:13:00

Author:
Nuffles
Posts: 132


Hi, austimerr! I tried you level and found it very interesting! You created very cool journey! There are a lot of very nice characters and environments (I love bug bar and it's visitors ). Also level has very cool gameplay - obstacles courses interesting and fun. I enjoy very much during walkthrough og your level. It was real fun. In many places it's remind me some levels from ps3 story mode (maybe because just yesterday I finished my third wallthrough of all ps3 story levels ) Any way, I gave you 5 stars and heart for this level and creator's heart for you! And I will wait for some new levels from you!

I will add some picture a little bit latter.
2010-08-13 14:23:00

Author:
Domik12
Posts: 838


How can I edit teh level and publish without losing my plays?2010-08-15 17:40:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


How can I edit teh level and publish without losing my plays?

Sorry not possible. You'd think Sony would have fixed that by now, but nope. When you republish you restart at 0. Btw I'll get you feedback by wednesday
2010-08-16 04:38:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


That sucks 2010-08-16 14:51:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


Story: 9/10
Not much you could add, bugs are just destroying some trees.

Music/SFX Choice: 7.5/10
Really missing SFX here. Music choice was okay...

Appearance: 8.2/10
I really like the whole gardens theme. A little more bit of stickers would be nice, but I really like how you stuck with gardens materials in the beginning. Corner editing wasn't jaw-dropping, but made the trees look real cool. And why was there fire in a tree...? Disreguard that sticker comment, you used a lot in the bug-city. It reminds me of "A Bug's Life"

Creatures/Objects: 10/10
This is where the level sines. The bugs look awesome!!!!

Gameplay: 8/10
Most of it isn't too original, I've seen it elsewhere, but I'm sure you didn't know that. I really liked the bug "boss" at the end where you spray the stuff on him lol.

Overall: 8.2/10 (not an average)
I gave you :star::star::star::star: and look forward to what you got coming next
2010-08-16 17:29:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


If I got corrupted and deleted my data does it also delete my published levels? Because if so no one else can play this 2010-08-18 03:21:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


Luckily, nope! Delete your data (OR, if you were smart enough to back up your profile, restore it.) and go to your levels on the Community Moon. You'll be able to download them, and, as the creator, copy them to My Moon. (No, not mine, yours. Your My Moon. )2010-08-18 13:04:00

Author:
Voltergeist
Posts: 1702


Hello Austimerr!!

Like Bill, said, as long as you have it on the server the corruption won't affect it, so you are safe.

Sorry for the late feedback, but here it goes. This level was a pleasant surprise. Tight and fluid designs with a relaxed and beautiful atmosphere. Great platforming and a killer story. I was digging it the whole way through. I really liked the look of this level, and the change of scenery between the different sections was a nice change of pace. The character designs were top notch, they all looked great. What kept me hooked was the gameplay, this was just a fun level to play. You did a great job on this and I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Five stars, a heart, and one for creator. <3
2010-08-18 19:20:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


Well I know I have already thanked everyone but I wanted to do it again! I'm super happy that everyone likes my level! And my new level would have been up today but...corruption!!!! I probably wont rebuild it but I have a good idea for my next level! But that may be awhile. So once again thanks everybody!2010-08-19 03:47:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


Level was good. But theirs one part were u can fall to the ground.2010-08-19 23:20:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


Where might this place be my friend?2010-08-20 01:31:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


Towards the end, i think, were u have to jump on the bugs to get to the top, when u jump to far to the right u dont go back down to the first layer u go to the floor.2010-08-21 04:11:00

Author:
Random
Posts: 673


Well I cant edit this level because it got deleted on my moon but thanks for finding that!2010-08-21 04:28:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


You know it's copyable to the creator of the level. So you can return it to your moon.2010-08-21 18:05:00

Author:
Silver39
Posts: 1703


I noticed that spot on a playthrough too, but I would not worry about a re-edit, unless it is something that will bug you forever.

It's not game breaking or anything.
2010-08-21 18:09:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


I cant copy my levels to my moon for some reason and Its not worth losing all my plays so I can live with it.2010-08-21 19:48:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


Hey austimerr,

Congratulations on the Community Spotlight! I loved the cute environment you created, and the story was very amusing. Keep up the great work!

Here's a video of your masterpiece:



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rSIp9Xnw3pQ



Sprayin' some bugs,
jeffcu28
2010-08-23 16:48:00

Author:
jeffcu28
Posts: 648


Hey austimerr,

Congratulations on your spotlighted level!!

This is one that will be on my psp for a long time.

I hope you are working on something new.

-VJ
2010-08-23 20:21:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


Hey great job on your spotlight! I can't wait to see your next level2010-08-24 02:48:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


Hey austimerr!

I played this level a while ago and I really loved it. Which reminds me, congrats on the Spotlight! Your corner editing and character design are absolutely fantastic, and of course I love all the little puns. Your writing is entertaining and creative - definitely bring that to the table again for your next level. The platforming and action sections are creative and fun as well, and I was kept on my toes for the whole level.

5 stars and a heart easily. Awesome sauce!
2010-08-29 06:30:00

Author:
Taffey
Posts: 3187


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