LBPCentral Archive

Home

General Stuff

General Chat

Ye Olde Pirate vs Navy Roleplaying Thread

Archive: 158 posts

http://www.highstick.com/jerseys/logos/mascot/MUTINY.gif

Crewmen gather up, gather up! There be news of a mutiny in these high seas! Which crew will YOU be siding with?

Join Pirate Captain Marino as he fends off his supposed traitorous enemies, or follow the orders of Admiral Stix, as he journeys the seven seas looking to avenge his father's death!

Partake in epic battles, heated discussions, murderous raids...and climb up in rank to become a leading figure, and a name not to be trifled with!

Join the Pirates, and enjoy your total freedom! (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/group.php?groupid=25)

OR

Join the Navy, and hope to achieve the rank of Captain! (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/group.php?groupid=26)

Choose yer side carefully, crewman...For once you have chosen, you cannot go back!

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Character Template:
Fill out and PM to Marino or Stix, accordingly.

Name:
Gender:
Side:
Weapon/Fighting Style:
Appearance:
Personality Type:
Bio:

-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

A few guidelines:

1- Make sure you use grammar and punctuation in your posts.

2- Make sure your posts make sense in accordance with the story.

3- Make sure that your post is realistic and believable.

4- Make sure you have read and understood the entire story before posting.

5- Make sure that anything unrelated directly to the story (for example, a question regarding part of the story) is enclosed in SPOILER TAGS.

That's it, enjoy =D

2008-10-18 05:10:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

Captain Marino stands on the deck, with his grimy hand blocking out the sun's harmful rays. He looks out at the vast ocean horizon, with the misty ocean breeze blowing against his face. He licks his filthy finger and sticks it out into the wind. He smiles a greasy grin.

"Argh, the gods be smiling upon us today! 'Tis a fine evening for a cruise."

He walks into the lower deck where his First Mate, Code slumbers softly on his bunk bed.

"Code! Come on, mate! Wake up! 'Tis late!"

:arg:

2008-10-18 05:34:00

Author:
Unknown User

"Whatever..." grumbled Code. He slipped out of bed, rubbing his eyes. Code slipped on his clothes and looked at Marino. "I'm going fishing."

Code had already grabbed his fishing rod before Marino could protest. He trudged up to the deck, and then sat on the railing, then cast his line. He sat there for a short while, before feeling a slight tug. He quickly pulled in the line, and grabbed his prize. It was a mudkip!

Code grabbed it, and put it on his shoulder, like the he used to do with his parrot. The mudkip had taken a liking to him, so it didn't object. The two would forever be together, bound by some invisible force.

2008-10-18 05:49:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

Before Marino could protest, Code had already gone back onto the main deck. About to follow his mate upstairs, something peculiar caught his eye. A small hole was in the bottom of the boardroom wall.

http://apscalmato.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/04/mouse_hole.jpg

"Argh, we got mice! Code's gotta stop leavin' so many scraps of grub all over ye place!

"

Marino shook his head and continued to walk back upstairs to the deck. While on the umpteenth step, Marino heard Code yell from afar:

"Argh! I caught one! :arg:"

2008-10-18 05:57:00

Author:
Unknown User

Code, of course, didn't really say "Argh," it was just a strange mis-perception that Marino always seemed to have.

Anyway... Code, being the wonderful First Mate he is, completely ignored Marino and did what he wanted to. He climbed up to the bird's nest, and pulled a telescope out of his pocket, and observed the surrounding ocean. He made out a port through the dense fog and cried, "Land Ho!"

2008-10-18 06:07:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

Tall and strong stands the Admiral. In one hand he clenches a thick journal, the only found possession after his father's brutal death. In the other, a long silver sword, poised and ready for whatever bloodshed his revenge shall bring.

"You will pay, pirate scum." He mutters to himself, as the clench on his blade gets tighter.

"Admiral Stix!" A shout from outside his chamber doors comes resonating through. It was none other than Commodore Kyashu, one of the Admiral's grandest acquaintances, and greatest of friends.

"Out men our nearly assembled sir, we shall be ready for the next journey in no time." A feeble smirk, shadowed by the expression of grief, made itself visible on the Admiral's face. His father's death shall at last be avenged.

2008-10-18 06:11:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

"Argh! I caught one! .... Sand Grows! "

Marino, who doesn't have the best hearing due to his wax-infested ear drums, digs some wax out with his pinky and sticks it to the wall, adding to his collection.

He rotates his scraggly head looking for Code, but he is nowhere in sight. However, what Marino does see is a port directly ahead.

He checks in his pocket for his telescope, but it is nowhere to be found.

He instead squints, but doesn't see anything, as his vision is in poor condition, in addition to his horrible hearing.

"That scallywag Code... always taking meh loot.

"

He sees something else: a small mudfish with a sensitive radar receptor on it's head fin.

"What in the.... CODE??!!" :eek:

2008-10-18 06:16:00

Author:
Unknown User

Code was able to spot a Navy Flag atop one of the buildings in the city. He smiled, thinking of all the nasty ways he could mess with the navy. These included fireworks, explosions, cannons, burning of the flag, mudkipz, etc.

Code drew his rapier and jumped down onto the deck next to Marino. "Cap'n, it's time we set anchor, we need to expand our crew if we're ever to take on the Navy!"

2008-10-18 06:22:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

Christian grabbed a pistol from the box and stuffed it in his belt, then hefted and slung a rifle off the rack onto his shoulder.

Walking down behind the ranks of marines, a petty officer yelled, "Come on, get your gear together and let's run! Go, go, go! Hurry up, hurry up!"

Christian checked his box of cartridges. It was full and properly organized. He pulled the top of it down and slid the strap through the buckle, then locked it tight. He quickly examined his uniform. Good, everything was on straight. He pressed his hat more firmly on down on his head, unslung his rifle and brought it forward, and turned around to signify his readiness. Suddenly, the petty officer was yelling the orders to move out. He began marching out, a few of the other marines frantically finishing something before dashing to keep in line.

"Double columns! Get in step, there! Keep it tight! This is for the Admiral, so make it look sharp! I don't want a single man an inch out of line! Make it look like the Navy!"

He was already in step. He marched.

2008-10-18 06:29:00

Author:
Mark D. Stroyer

Posts: 632

Still startled by the strange mudfish that has somehow appeared on board, Marino asks Code:

"Sure I'll drop them anchors in a second, but first... what be in the... nevermind.... some things are better unsaid to a scallywag like me".

Marino walks over and, with a struggle, sinks the anchor into the deep soot of the shoreline.

"Argh mate, let's recruit some lads. Do you have any landlubbers in mind?"

Marino also tries to put the mudfish back into the seas where it came from, but it seems to be fixated to Code.

"Do I even want to know about where that creature came from...?

"

(BED. I'll continue in a few hours. I won't be able to sleep

)

2008-10-18 06:31:00

Author:
Unknown User

"Probably not, and no, I don't, but that's what being a pirate is all about, am I right?"

Code chuckled leaped onto the docks, rapier and pistol in hand. He gave a chuckle as the crowd scattered. Out of the corner of his eye he saw a navy recruit approaching. Turning around, Code gave the man a smile, "hello there good sir, didn't mean to cause any trouble, honest."

The recruit lifted up his rifle to Codes forehead. "T...tha...that's what they all say." he stammered. "Well, we can't have 'em all saying that now can we." said Code. Bam! Code shot the recruit in the heart, killing him instantly. Code kicked the recruits body into the sea. "C'mon Cap'n, get down here!"

2008-10-18 06:40:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

As everyone frantically came close to their positions commodore kyashu decided to give a final speech , silence spread across the ship and then bellowed the voice of kyashu" My dear friends, soldiers, brothers and brave men, today is the day we finally avenge our admirals fathers death. We have all suffered in one way or another in the hands of these scurvy ridden sea dogs. For the time has come we end the reign of terror these pirates have brought upon us for this our time. There the pirates huddle, with sheer terror gripping their hearts with icy fingers.Knowing full well what merciless horrors they will be suffering from us brave men.This day we rescue a world from mysticism and tyranny and usher in a future brighter than anything we can imagine.To victory!!!!"

2008-10-18 06:42:00

Author:
Kyashu

Posts: 447

The shouts from the assembly lines snapped the Admiral out of his grievous trance. He lay down his silver weapon, tucked the diary in his heavily prepped jacket, and began to make his way towards the deck.

"He'll be here any minute men! Make him proud!" The last shout was by far the loudest, and it seemed to have worked wonders on the crew. The deck was dead silent, only the sounds of the morning waves and the calls of the seagulls could be heard.

The Admiral, with a slight frown on his face, stepped into the sunlight. His vision slightly hazy, he made his way to the front of the assembly lines. After his vision was returned, and his gaze fixated on the young men, he was pleased. Pleased and forever ready to get his longed revenge.

"SALUTE!" Yelled a dark man, standing opposite the Admiral. The men, without a single word, quickly executed their commands. The Admiral smiled his first real smile ever since his father's death. It was nearly time.

2008-10-18 06:50:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

"Go go go! Hurry up!"

*rushing noises could be heard*

A new enlisteee opened his eyes and yawns as he lazily gets out of his bunk. It was none other than Rufus-Ezekiel, given the nickname Resh by his collegues. His navy uniform he wore wasn't even buttoned all the way up.

"man, what a lazy bum..."
"why is he even here...."
"Admiral Stix himself approved him so he must be useful...somehow"

talks go on but he payed no attention to them as he fixed his clothes.

"Get to the deck you bums!" someone yelled and they all marched in line.
----------
Resh stood in line to hear the commodore's speech, doesn't reallly look like his paying much attention as he stares to the pirate ship getting closer up ahead.

2008-10-18 06:51:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

(And now, we take you to an expert's view on the battle:

Or rather, my questions concerning it. Just to make sure I've got this right. The pirates are raiding Unnamed Port Town X, and they've reached the docks and are beginning to pile off. Meanwhile, the Admiral's ship is just outside the port, and is preparing to unload its own troops to combat the pirates, in tandem with the woefully inadequate defenses of the port itself. That is now the current situation.

Or is it that the Admiral's ship is currently docked, but the men on it are organizing? Or is it that the Admiral is off his ship, and instead in the town, and his men have been in barracks in the town? I'm not sure.)

2008-10-18 07:04:00

Author:
Mark D. Stroyer

Posts: 632

Code noticed a large gathering of sailors on a ship near the port. "Well ain't that a surprise, it's Admiral Stix and Commodore Kyashu." Code noticed the stare of one of the more inattentive Seamen. "Well, this isn't going to end well..."

Code withdrew his weapons, and called out, "Marino, we've got to get out of here and get a crew quickly, otherwise we're just sitting ducks!"

Code took off at full speed into the port, disappearing into the crowd. "Okay, I'm safe for now... but where will I find the Cap'n again?" Code thought about it for about 2 seconds, and then the answer hit him. "The tavern."

@ Mark: We're trying to gain crew members to fight you guys with, and my character is just being a show off to see if anyone is interested in being a pirate, and well, that's just his personality. We're not really in a 'raid' right now.

So here's the story: We dock, I show off, you guys are in an assembly on a ship out at sea. I see you guys, Reshin sees us. Then I run off without Marino, he'll probably run off too, or get captured by you guys.

2008-10-18 07:06:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

Anything not related directly, or is not part of the story goes in SPOILER TAGS...It just makes things easier that way =D

@Mark: Yeah, we're fairly close to the port, while they have already docked.

2008-10-18 07:10:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

As the ship's got closer the tension started to build , everyone looked at each within anticipation , Kyashu looked up at small case one of the officers had brought him.

Slowly openining it made his eyes shine upon the revealing of his sniper rifle. Once within range Admiral Stix and his men recongized the lack of men and the men that were lefton the ship had no command.Kyashu looked over at Stix and with a glance give him the nod. Kyashu pulled up his rifle and aimed, steadying himself , he focused upon the mudkip ( That had been caught earlier) and BANG the mudkip hit the sea with a splash, as the pirates looked with fear.

2008-10-18 09:00:00

Author:
Kyashu

Posts: 447

2008-10-18 09:05:00

Author:
Unknown User

Someone? You mean from the Pirate side? ;_;

2008-10-18 10:47:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

2008-10-18 15:44:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

Kyashu, I've already fled deep into the port, only Marino is left on the ship, so you couldn't have shot the mudkip.

OH I never knew mudkip had gone with ya my bad

2008-10-18 16:03:00

Author:
Kyashu

Posts: 447

While Code was already on the port, Marino hadn't even noticed. He was just staring blankly into the crashing waves.

FLASHBACK in Marino's POV:
Last time I layed my eyes on 'er it was deep in the night, the tide was crashing against the rocky shore, and I was stumblin' in a deep drunken stupor. The dizziness in my dazed noggin was too much, and I had to stop n' take a breather. I plopped my scurvy butt down and put meh leg down into the tide, slowly cleansing meh misery. It was then that I gazed upon 'er. At first I wasn't sure what she was, but as my vision cleared I slowly reckoned: it was a mermaid.

Suddenly, shots are heard in the distance, and Marino snaps out of his nostalgic daze. Confused, he looks around, looking for Code.

"Code? Where ye be? ...Argh! That ungrateful scallywag! He must of left without meh grr!"

Marino quickly grabs his hat that is laying upside down on the deck, and fumbles it onto his unruly hair.

"I be coming for ye mate! Don't you fear!"

He runs clumsily off the deck but he trips and falls overboard.

2008-10-18 16:54:00

Author:
Unknown User

Christian sharply planted the butt of his musket in the deck, his other hand firmly against his leg. He mentally checked his position. His feet were wrong. He slowly inched them apart to spread the toes wider. Better. He glanced around only with his eyes, and detected that off to the left, one of the officers was doing some quick reorganizing to move a man to the back. Probably hadn't been ready in time, and they didn't want the Admiral to see.

He turned his eyes back to the front, and stared deadly forward to the back of the head of the person in front of him. With his ears, he listened. There was a speech. Now the Admiral was making some order about the approach to the port. In just a short time, there'd be a flurry of movement he'd be taking part in as they sailed in. Let's hope this goes well.

2008-10-18 17:24:00

Author:
Mark D. Stroyer

Posts: 632

Code spied the sail of the approaching ship from the town square. He hopped up on a barrel, and loaded his pistol. A group of three guards approached him. "Stop right there, criminal scum!" they cried. Code looked up at them, and slowly moved his pistol into a firing position. "I hate to trouble you guys, but..." Bam! Code shot the first guard dead then stabbed the second one in the heart. The third guard gave a yelp and then ran off.

As soon as Code finished reloading, he headed towards the tavern. He burst through the door, and after firing his pistol into the air yelled, "Any of you scallywags foolish enough to join a pirate?"

2008-10-18 17:39:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

FLASHBACK in Marino's POV:
And there she was, the sparklin' of the beaut's eyes almost blinded me. Iv' always reckon'd there were mermaids, but I n'ver recokn'd there would be one to meet an old scallywag like me. I crawl'd out to grab 'her beaut' locks of hair and I reached and kiss'd...

"Christopher! Come here! I found a man washed ashore! Christopher!"

A woman on her daily stroll through the beach has found Marino washed ashore, laying unconscious.

"Is he alive, honey? Does he appear to be in good health?" Christopher yells while running to the scene.

"I'm not sure, let me check his breathing."

She starts to exhale warm breaths of air into unconscious Marino's lips when he starts to kiss her, thinking she is the mermaid.

"Ugh! What a filthy man! What horrid breath! Christopher! This man tried to kiss me!"

Christopher arrives on the scene and angrily starts kicking Marino's abdomen, waking Marino up.

"Wha...? Where we be?"

Christopher, still infuritated, starts dragging Marino's body towards the port.

"Don't worry honey, I'll take care of this wretched man."

2008-10-18 17:58:00

Author:
Unknown User

Rain, an experienced marksmen and explosives expert, was sitting in a bar drinking some of his favorite rum, because he had just been fired from the navy for using his cruel humor on some of the other recruits. Earlier he had set small directional charges on the bottom of some of the other recruits mugs while they were enjoying some nice beer. All of the sudden the contents in each of their mugs were instantly emptied by an explosion. He injured a few people but only in a minor way. But everyone still does not know how he set them all off simultaneously and it was as if they were set off by some unknown force. He was fired from the navy and now he was reminiscing in the bar wondering why he was fired and why his parents gave him the name of Rain. But since of the accident in the bar that one day and because he was fired he got the nickname RainFire and has stuck by it ever since.

Just then some guy came in and fired his pistol yelling out if they wanted to join and serve under the pirates and enjoy some freedom. He yelled out that his name was Code and he was the first mate under Marino, who was a legendary captain of the sea. Other pirates have come in to the same bar before and RainFire did not think much of them but the strange blue thing on the guy's shoulder gave him hope and without retaliation stood up and said, "I will join your crew and be glad to do it. I have some special "abilities" that i am able to contribute to the crew."

2008-10-18 18:59:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

While RAIN and Code are meeting inside the tavern, Marino is being dragged past the tavern by Christopher. He puts up a struggle, flailing his arms and legs, but Christopher is much too strong for Marino to escape. Due to his noggin being repeatedly bashed against the rocky ground, Marino, again, falls unconscious.

FLASHBACK in Marino's POV:
As soon as I kiss'd er, she was gone. Gone. Never to be seen 'gain. I gave a tired sigh n' stumbled back to the port where I would find somewhere to sleep as usual. Being homeless is rough, but I manage. I found a ol' rum bottle laying around, so I tried to empty it into my gut but it was empty.

"Argh, I'll be looting some moar rum at the next tide" I reckon'd.

I sighed and slipped back into my drunken stupor, where, the next morn', I woke up to a pleasant surprise....

2008-10-18 19:25:00

Author:
Unknown User

Admiral Stix's ship has finally reached the port, quickly his men marched to where the pirate ship was docked. As he talks with the port director, he sent a team to guard the ship to make sure it doesn't leave. Another to post up flyers of the wanted pirates, and another to scout the town looking for the pirates.

Resh was lazily walking down the road, when he noticed a guy dragging a wet, unconcious, large man. The large man was mumbling which is a sign he was drunk.

He approaches the man, "need some help good sir?"

2008-10-18 20:00:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

While being dragged down the road, a tall man with short black hair that has a dreamy look in his eyes approaches Marino.

"Need some help good sir?"

Marino being the deceitful follow he is, decides to use this man as a way to freedom. He tries to hide his drunkenness, and lies:

"Thank the heavens you showed up! I was sleeping in my house when this man kidnapped me! Please help!"

Christopher did not hear this because he was so determined on revenge.

2008-10-18 20:18:00

Author:
Unknown User

Uhh... Okay, this Christian isn't me, now is it? It's somebody else, right?

Also, in other news, I think that we should get some RP rules laid down, just in case we run into something later on.

2008-10-18 20:27:00

Author:
Mark D. Stroyer

Posts: 632

Christopher is the husband of the lady that found me laying unconscious on the shore. I basically frenched his wife, and now he is dragging me to an unknown location. Reshin happened to see me being dragged down the road, and I am trying to deceive him so he will help me out, even though we are opposing forces.

What rules do you have in mind? :arg:

2008-10-18 20:31:00

Author:
Unknown User

his Christopher not Christian...your either guarding, hanging flyers,or pirate looking. And I agree we need to lay the rp rules down... its gonna get tricky once rp battles start out...

Resh looks up to the man, "my good sir, is this true?" The man doesn't seem to pay attention.

'the large man is obviously drunk, best to get a different story...then again he could be in trouble and needs my help...however I could be helping out someone who does deserve righteous judgement...sigh too much work...'

Resh grabs pulls out his pistol and points at the man shocking the crowd and the guy himself. A crowd gathers giving the large man a chance to escape.

"What do you think your doing?! I've done nothing wrong!" The man cries out
"Sorry, I thought you were someone else...." Resh said in a monotone. He putted the firearm back in its strap and walks away leaving a confused crowd.

'Its in your hands now to save yourself tubby' he thought to himself as he continues his route

2008-10-18 20:41:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

ok yeah we need to set out rules and if no one want to rescue Marino i will do it with Code i just need Code to send out his mudkip and report back that Marino is in trouble

2008-10-18 20:56:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

Meanwhile, in the local tavern.

"Well then mate, grab your gear before the Navy gets here!" Code, of course, didn't allow the man time to grab his gear, and instead, grabbed the man by the arm and pulled him outside into an alleyway. "Well, you look sturdy enough." said Code, examining the man, "not like the Cap'n will care anyway." Code drew his rapier, "okay boy, show me what you've got, I want you take out that guard over there." Code points to a nearby guard, who is currently half asleep. "Should be easy enough for ya, but you get in to too much trouble, you're on your own."

Just kill the guard, and we'll run off together.

2008-10-18 21:05:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

"Argh! 'Tis be my chance to escape!"

Marino, being excited and such, jumps up from the ground, but he trips and falls again.

Unconcious, in the middle of the road. With passerbys just staring at him. Great.

2008-10-18 21:07:00

Author:
Unknown User

"Alright sure no problem" Then Rain takes out his pistol and without even looking and without hesitation shoots the guard in the head as he was going to get his gear. "Now can i get my gear," he says with a grim smile on his face. he rushes into the bar grabs his bag of gear and ammunition and runs off with Code and his strange looking mud fish.

2008-10-18 21:20:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

As Resh is going down the cobblestone path he hears a gunshot coming from around the alley.

That can't be good... he then runs to the back alley where he sees a guard shot dead.

he turns to the two culprits running along.

"STOP!!" He yells as he chases them down

2008-10-18 21:26:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

Well, let me try to get together some suggestions:

1. The player must always act in-character. In other words, as their character would, without influence from their out-of-character self. Also, this means be mature. Your character can be immature and childish, but you as the player must be mature about portraying this immaturity. (If that makes sense, good.)

2. The player must try to keep things both realistic (or at least stylized reality), and believable. This means that players must act believably. Get stabbed, and that wound affects how you act. Etc. This also means no godmoding (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Godmoding) or anything to that effect. Also, this is about the story itself, not personal triumph over the foe, so make it story-centric. Act like it. Also, make sure you keep up with every post, and understand it before posting yourself, to make sure nothing gets lost in-transit because you didn't notice that the ship already sailed, or something like that.

3. Combat happens in the following manner: Against NPCs, the player is free to act as they like, as long as it falls under the other rules. (No complete Rambo killing sprees, where they happen to magically avoid every counterattack, for example. Again, make it real.) Against other players, the player first declares their intention. Then, the other player responds to it. Back and forth.
Example:
Bob: Bob rushes towards Randy, sword held overhead, yelling a war cry. From three feet away, he brings his sword straight down towards Randy's head.
Randy: Hearing the piercing yell, he turns to come face-to-face with Bob. He manages to make a quick sidestep, and narrowly avoids getting his little toe chopped off. He then brings around his sword and swings towards the back of Bob's neck.
Bob: Bob yanks his blade out of the ground, then leans to the left, bringing his sword around to intercept Randy's incoming blade, stopping it hard.
And so on.

Note: This can be handled off-screen, such as between players in PMs or chat, and then posted by one person all at once. Also, remember to keep this all REAL. Your character has weaknesses, even if very strong. Make sure you show these. A duel between two characters that goes on forever just because both players don't want to get their characters hurt is not fun. Remember, this isn't about winning or losing, it's about winning it's about the story.

4. All player interactions are handled in this attempt-response fashion, unless handled offscreen previously. All characters and items belonging to said characters are the sole property of their respective players, and should be treated as such.

How's that, at least for a start?

2008-10-18 21:36:00

Author:
Mark D. Stroyer

Posts: 632

"Stop!" heard Code as he retreated from the scene of the crime. He, however, like a true pirate, continued to run. He saw Marino lying on his back in the middle of the street. Giving a sigh, Code picked up Marino and threw him into a nearby crate. "He'll be safe there for now, c'mon, before the guards catch up." Code said to Rainfire. The two ran to the docks, and Code, thinking quickly, hopped onto the Navy ship docked nearby and hid himself among a pile of cargo, the guards close behind.

2008-10-18 21:39:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

assassin's creed chase scene lol... and those are good basic rp game rules, I agree, but must "badass moments" always be hindered? Those moments although cliche shows how fearful the character is. I do support the "no badass comes and kills everyone in 1 post" however, make it look like their not a bunch of puffballs atleast.

The convicts didn't seem to listen to what he said and continued running. He continued the chase until he saw where they were headed, the docks. Their he stopped and let the other men on the chase pass him. One looked back at him and sighed "you really are a lazy bum..." and the sailor went on with the chase.

In his mind; their ship was on lock down, and the port was heavily guarded by the Navy. Its pointless to keep chasing, instead its better to find out what they were doing exactly. He headed back to the tavern to get some information

2008-10-18 21:50:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

Well, as long as it's believable, and has at least stylized realism. Notice that I also used the phrase 'stylized' because it doesn't have to be nitty-gritty pure realism. It can be movie-ized. Realistic, but stretched. So sure, a character can be completely awesome and own a whole lot of NPCs. But it has to be believable.

For example, no just breezing through wholly incompetent soldiers who have no combat knowledge by just stabbing them all once, and them not even getting close to scratching you. Instead, it'd be much better to have some basic combat, even if ultimately the character owns them all. Look at all the pirate movies. The übermain characters always end up killing a dozen facelesses. However, they always spend a few blows dueling back and forth before getting in a good stab to finish them. You get what I'm saying. Also, another note is that getting beaten down, only to come back and triumph despite it, looks a lot cooler when it comes to the narrative.

Again, stylized, but still realistic and believable. That's the bottom line for the whole thing, really.

2008-10-18 22:06:00

Author:
Mark D. Stroyer

Posts: 632

Rainfire then prepared some of his explosives within the ship and prepared for escape. Code looks at him and says, "Are you mad? we are in a confined space we will get hurt if you use those in here."

"Not a chance," says Rainfire, "we will get out of here just fine and be able to get our captain out of the crate you through him in"

"OK fine whatever you say just do it, we need to get out of here"

Rainfire started to press his head against the board work that they were surrounded by to figure out the structure of the ship. He noticed that they were right above the water line. Perfect. He set the explosives. He turned to Code and said, "Alright as soon as this blows you need to stay right with me or else they will see us and follow us even more. So turn around and once you hear a POP turn around and follow me immediately."

Not allowing Code enough time to turn around all the way, Rainfire set off the explosives right in the ship blowing a hole port side in the ship right above the water, but not to Code's knowledge, Rainfire set off a little more than that. He blew up the docks leading to the ship and caused a dust cloud right where the land began and right in front of the pursures. He also blew up a building for a little distraction so they would notice the hole in the ship till it was too late. With the aid of the vision impairments and the distraction of the destruction of the building, Code and Rainfire were able to slip out of the ship unnoticed and into a building behind the pursuers getting ready to get Marino out of the box Code threw him in.

2008-10-18 22:13:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

Meanwhile, Marino sleeps in the crate. :arg:

2008-10-18 22:21:00

Author:
Unknown User

Its Marino not Maltay lol

Resh was walking back to the tavern when suddenly

*BOOM*

A large explosion was heard Resh turns towards the docks to see smoke. People from all over started running towards the docks. His first instinct was to run with them to see if everyone was ok, but then he heard a large snore coming from behind the pile of crates in the alley.

so tubby managed to rescue himself, ha

He started to go towards the port when he noticed two people running the opposite direction.

strange... he thought to himself...He then focused his attention on the two running towards him and he remembered those clothes. They were the guys he was chasing earlier.

"Looking for someone?" He asked, putting his hand on the hilt of the standard navy issued sword.

2008-10-18 22:25:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

Its Marino not Maltay

2008-10-18 22:29:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

"Not you" replied Code, "Rainfire, go get Marino, I'll take this guy." The man didn't try to chase Rainfire. "So, you're smarter than those other idiots, what's your name?" asked Code, drawing his rapier.

2008-10-18 22:29:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

Rainfire rushed to get Marino out of the box but upon picking up it slowed him down dramatically and Rainfire shouted to Code,"I need to go wake Marino up and then get back to the ship can you handle this guy?"

Code shouted back,"Go as fast as you can and get back to the ship and i will meet up with you do not worry. Now go!"

Rainfire ran off with Marino on his back hoping that Code can handle that guy and that he and his passenger can get to safety.

2008-10-18 22:35:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

"What is your name?" asked one of the men holding a rapier , while the other one goes for the tubby in the crates.

"What my name is shouldn't matter to a dead man..." Resh said. He draws his sword.

a standard blade against a rapier...something tells me he doesn't carry that thing just for show either...interessting, and what exactly do they want with tubby...

*yawn*

Resh yawns as he moves to a fencing stance. The lazy look on his eyes seem to disappear and a smile makes its way on his face.

"Engard!"

2008-10-18 22:40:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

Part of the patrol squad, out looking for pirates, Christian had received a few odd looks from the citizens of the town. That was probably expected. Armed men walking the streets in the Royal Navy's blue uniform, rather than the bright red of the guards who tended to stick to their posts instead, was not an everyday sight. However, all the people he'd come across were strictly civilian. Not much pirate material. Then again, he'd just been walking the streets. Any pirate with half a brain wouldn't just be walking out in the open. Probably a good time for some more in-depth investigation.

Suddenly, there was a large blast of sound, all at once and out of nowhere. Everyone in the streets stopped in their tracks in surprise, as did he. Suddenly, he broke into a run, heading back towards the docks. Skirting around some piles of barrels and crates, he slowed to a stop just on the edge of the port. Across the sheltered waters he saw a billow of smoke and dust rising, clouding out the other side. But he remembered that was right where the ship was docked. Oh, the bloody...

His thought was interrupted by the Admiral's men who were on guard detail, along with the Admiral, passing by him while running towards the explosion. He dashed to join them. Suddenly, a thought came to him, and he slowed down again. If somebody just blew up that ship, it'd be pirates. They'd know why we're here. And if they blew up the ship, then... After a rush of thoughts all at once, it hit him.

He was at a walking pace at the time of the epiphany, but he quickly spun around and broke into an all-out run, back in the opposite direction, unslinging his rifle as he went.

2008-10-18 22:47:00

Author:
Mark D. Stroyer

Posts: 632

I'm finding it impossible to introduce myself, as the story is constantly changing.

2008-10-18 22:49:00

Author:
Unknown User

Well, you could be a tavern-dweller who went to check out the explosion, and ran into pirates near their ship, then promptly got recruited. Good way to do that. Might be good to wait for an open space where people aren't running, then utilize that. Use your imagination.

2008-10-18 22:51:00

Author:
Mark D. Stroyer

Posts: 632

you could also try and help Marino and i get to safety

2008-10-18 22:53:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

I've had three different ideas to introduce myself, but all had to be thrown away as the story changed. The thing is, I know Code and Marino because I am on their crew, but excessive drinking has made them forget me. I planned on making a scene where Code comes across me, we converse, and he has a flashback to the time when he accidently casted me on his fishing line into the sea and in turn caused me to get a harpoon for a hand, a fishing net with the net broken off as a peg leg for my right leg, and an ancient Aztec talisman lodged into my right eye socket. Then Code remembers me, and we continue from there.

2008-10-18 22:55:00

Author:
Unknown User

Marino is currently unconcious on RAIN's back, being carried to the ship.

2008-10-18 22:57:00

Author:
Unknown User

Well, you could stumble over towards the docks due to the explosion, and come across Code and Resh's duel. Then have it carry out from there.

2008-10-18 22:57:00

Author:
Mark D. Stroyer

Posts: 632

"Wha...."

Marino looks around him and everything is in complete chaos. He has absolutely no idea what has occured, all he knows is that his back is very sore for sleeping in the crate for.. whatever length of time he has been in there, as he has lost all track of it. In his dream world as usual, Marino ignores all the chaos and decides to go back to his ship and get some sleep there, at least the bunkbed was somewhat comfortable. He rises off the floor and heads for the ship, maneuvering his way through the screaming crowds.

"Argh, landlubbers these days. Can't they just relax?"

You are unconscious and Rainfire is carrying you on his back, back to the ship, while Code is about to engage in a sword fight with Reshin.

2008-10-18 22:59:00

Author:
Unknown User

Sorry 'bout that. :3

2008-10-18 23:01:00

Author:
Unknown User

"Hey captain i am one of your new recruits" Rainfire shouts as Marino is weaving in and out of the crowds and Rainfire catches up. A few moments before Marino woke up Rainfire found an emptied shop to hide in and rested right next to the door so he could wait for Marino to wake up and then instantly continue to the ship. Rainfire started to doze of himself while waiting for Marino to wake up and was awoken by him opening the door. Then Rainfire woke up and ran after Marino

"Ye be? Well come 'long then, let's get back to the ship." said Marino

"Yes sir." replied Rainfire

"Where is me first matee?"

"He is fighting some guy sir, but we need to get back to safety and avoid any possible occurrences with the navy because that will attract attention and that is the last thing we need right now. So let's try and stay out of the open sir."

They continue to run to the ship. Marino continues to want to get back to the ship for some sleep, but Rainfire wants to get back to the ship so they can stay low and plan to get more recruits and meet up with Code again.

do not worry i tried to fix it

2008-10-18 23:11:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

Code parried Reshin's sword. "Touche" said Reshin. The two then began their duel. It lasted about 2 minutes total, neither man giving up any ground until Reshin disarmed Code and sliced into his left shoulder. "Crap!" said Code stumbling back. Reshin gave him a smile and held he sword to Code's neck. Code stared him in the eye, slyly reaching down for his pistol. "It was a good duel..." sighed Code.

Pow!

Code shot Reshin in the chest. Reshin cried out and stumbled back, while Code, taking advantage of the moment, grabbed his rapier off the ground and sprinted off towards the docks. By the time he caught up to Rainfire and Marino, they had practically reached the ship.

Clank, when we get back to the ship, you can join. We'll find you as you attempt to stowaway on our ship. K?

2008-10-18 23:15:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

"Good to see you again Code," said Rainfire.

"Good to see you too, Rainfire." said Code, "i am glad to see you, captain, finally awake"

"Rrrr, me too, matee," said Marino.

The 3 of them later reached the ship but they have only gotten 1 recruit, Rainfire, but they came to the port to get at least 3 so they began to devise a way to get more recruits to make thier force a bit stronger and mabey get a better ship so it can fit more people, preferably, already stocked and ready to go with plenty of rum onboard.

2008-10-18 23:23:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

suddenly code, rainfire and marino were struck on the back of the head with something heavy and they toppled over. as they lay on the floor, a small mouse stood in front of them with a needle in her hand.

"you evil kitty! I will teach you for coming near my cheese again!"

mouse saw three people lying face first in the ground

"you aren't a cat!"

2008-10-18 23:26:00

Author:
Go,Mouse!

Posts: 388

Code rubbed his head. He saw a small mouse and made a blank expression.

"Marino, this is what you get for never cleaning up..."

2008-10-18 23:31:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

Marino, who is now laying alongside his 2 mates, groans.

"Coooddee.. don't you reck'n me telling you not to leave yer grub all over the place?"

He hears the mouse squeak but she speaks in a very high frequency so Marino cannot comprehend her language. Thinking quickly, Marino has an idea of how he might be able to communicate with the Mouse. He reaches under the bunkbed for a bottle of rum, and finds one about 3/4 empty. He swigs the last quarter and the effects start to kick in immediately. He is now so drunk that he can understand what the mouse is saying.

"....You aren't a cat!" says the Mouse.

2008-10-18 23:32:00

Author:
Unknown User

"what are you doing here?" mouse is very angry, "you ruined my trap and now the cat will get my food!"

2008-10-18 23:34:00

Author:
Go,Mouse!

Posts: 388

Marino crawls on the floor so he can talk to the mouse face to face.

"....a cat ye say?"... "Lad, there be no cats on this here ship." he says as he looks around.

Code and RAIN blankly stare at Marino.

Code says "Cap'n, are you REALLY talking to a mouse right now? I know you're a drunk, but WOW..." :eek:

Marino is so fascinated with his newly found ability that he does not even notice Code speaking

"Sorry about yer trap, lad.... maybe ye can make another one... for us? We be fighting these landlubbers, ye see, and we could really use all the help we can get. Ye reck'n you could join us? Ye could climb in this here pocket, and we can show you everything."

Without a chance for the Mouse to squeak back, Marino picks her up and places her in his front shirt pocket.

"Thar, now just poke yer furry lil' head out and look around? Ye comfortable?"

RAINFIRE:

"We own this ship and are very proud of it too. But hey that was a good smack for such a small mouse and a very good trap for one. Second, we never even noticed you were really aboard. We can provide you with food, but we want you to be a part of our crew, because if you are really hard to be noticed and can make good traps like this one, you would be a really good spy to add to our crew. So how about it?" suggested Rainfire.

2008-10-18 23:40:00

Author:
Unknown User

mouse thought for 3 seconds "free food! I will join your crew!" mouse smiles, but then notices a very large mud fish looking down at her.

2008-10-18 23:41:00

Author:
Go,Mouse!

Posts: 388

thanks, i am glad you are a mod because that was a good fix

2008-10-18 23:44:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

wait so is mouse a lady that acts like a mouse or a mouse that acts like a mouse ????

2008-10-18 23:46:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

i am an actual rodent mouse in the story

2008-10-18 23:48:00

Author:
Go,Mouse!

Posts: 388

Some where at a dock, Darkelite stumbles out of a bar drunk and steals a cannon. He loads it onto a small Dinghy boat and sets sail. He see's a large pirate ship and thinks he can take it, So he lights the cannon and when the cannon shoots the force of the cannon push the cannon through the hull of his boat and sinks it. Wile his boat sinks he realizes he forgot to load the cannon. He only stuck gun powder in it.

I sink my boat "force of the cannon push the cannon through the hull of his boat and sinks it"

2008-10-18 23:51:00

Author:
Darkelite105

Posts: 374

Yeah guys, Dark sinks his own boat, not ours. LOL

2008-10-18 23:58:00

Author:
Unknown User

ok you epic failed then lol

2008-10-18 23:59:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

Guys, Dark's cannon was a complete fail. The cannon ball didn't shoot far. It didn't hit us. Dark just epically failed and will now swim toward our ship.

2008-10-19 00:01:00

Author:
Unknown User

Having been escorted to the site of the explosion, the Admiral's smile had been cleanly wiped off his furious face. Not a moment did he stop to wonder who might have done such an act against him and his men. To him it was obvious. It was the evil doing of the man that killed his father and his men. It was none other than that filthy Pirate Captain Marino.

"Awaiting your direct orders, sir" Yelled the mysterious dark man, whom the Admiral had never seen before.

"We need to focus on the situation at hand, scout the area for any injured men, then assemble a Recruiting Group and send them across town. We need more men." Muttered the Admiral, with a blank, emotionless expression, as he gazed out into the vast ocean.

2008-10-19 00:04:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

Suddenly, Mouse squeaked "Guys, did you hear that? My acute mouse senses just picked up a splash in the distance. Can you bring me to check it out?"

Marino trusts Mouse already so he obeys her, and without a word, walks up the stairs onto the main deck.

"Argh, what was it? Do ye see anything? Meh sight isn't too great these days.."

Mouse squeaks and points at the horizon "There! A sinking ship! Go help them!"

Marino sighs. "But we be pirates, we don't help lads that don't help us first"

2008-10-19 00:07:00

Author:
Unknown User

Darkelite half dazed see's a ship approaching from the distance. So he swims over to the ship and climbs aboard using a net that is on the side of the ship. When Darkelite gets onto the ship he is questioned by Marino and is surrounded by marinos crew.

Marino-"Arg, what ye be doin' on me ship

Darkelite - Pulls out a pistol that is wet so it wouldnt work anyway. "I have ye out number give me all ye gold"

2008-10-19 00:13:00

Author:
Darkelite105

Posts: 374

Marino stares dumbfounded at the drunken looter's stupidity. :eek:

"Try to shoot us lad, I dare ye."

2008-10-19 00:15:00

Author:
Unknown User

Resh opened his eyes...he noticed he was on a bed and bandages were wrapped around his chest. Judging by the other beds around him, this was a hospital

"ugh what happend..."

He said as he gets up from the bed, his memory came rushing in about his battle with the man with a fish on his shoulder

well wasn't expecting him to do that

he putted on his white collared shirt but he didn't button it up at the risk of opening the wound. Grabbing his navy blue jacket he tossed it on his shoulder and headed for the door.

"Hey you can't leave yet!" One man said
"I need some fresh air, it smells like dead bodies here."

Resh went to the Port and sees the admiral staring out in the sea.

"Bad day sir?"

2008-10-19 00:19:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

Darkelite - Proceeds to pull the trigger and nothing happens then he quickly pulls out a sword Prepare to fight ye

Marino - laughs "Men take him to the jail

Darkelite is taken to the jail

2008-10-19 00:19:00

Author:
Darkelite105

Posts: 374

After Marino orders Code to catch his Mudkip, I'll be entering the scene and be talking to Code.

2008-10-19 00:27:00

Author:
Unknown User

MARINO:
Code and RAIN throw the drunken looter into the cage.

"Har. Har. Har. Jolly try lad, but no one loots meh."

Marino takes a key out of his pocket and locks the cage. He dangles the keys in front of Dark's face, mocking him.

"Ye want these? You'll have to do something for meh first.... heh." :arg:

MOUSE:

mouse is guarding darkelite's cell when she hears a noise *bzzzzrrrrrpppp* she looks around but her eyesight fails her and she concentrates on guarding again yay! Clank is joining!

2008-10-19 00:27:00

Author:
Go,Mouse!

Posts: 388

For a long time his eyes were fixated on the waves, until he heard a familiar voice.

"Bad day, sir?" It took the Admiral a few moments to figure out who it was. He turned his head around and inspected the slouched man. As soon as the man gave an unwilling yawn, it struck the Admiral.

"You are Havrin's boy, are you not, lad?"

The man, surprised and ecstatic that The Admiral knew his father, quickly straightened up and gave Admiral a firm salute. "Sir, yes sir."

With the blank expression still present, The Admiral reached out and patted the man on his back, easing his stiff pose. "Yes, your father was quite the leading figure, he was, yet his lenient and laid-back personality gave him away at times" The Admiral chuckled.

The young man, smiling out of sheer happiness, couldn't help but laugh back.

"Go get rest, boy. You will need all the energy you can possibly handle tomorrow morn'." Murmured the Admiral, back to his blank expression.

"Sir, yes sir, thank you, sir." Saluted the young man, and went running back to the hospital he came from.

As soon as the man was out of sight, the mysterious dark man appeared. The Admiral, facing his back towards the approaching figure, was back into his grievous gaze.

As the man approached silently towards the Admiral, he pulled out a shiny, gold encrusted silver dagger. And just as he was executing the fatal thrust, he was knocked down on the cold paved floor of the port side. His dagger fallen away from his dark hand, the mysterious man lay there, petrified, looking up at what had put him down. It was The Admiral himself.

The heroic Admiral must have noticed him after all. He pulled out his long sword, and aimed it at the man's throat. "Who are you, traitor?"

"Captain Marino sends his regards." The man grinned.

2008-10-19 00:41:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

I just want to make a correction, my character is a wise lazy noble not some giddy sailor boy fresh out of the family....that moment seemed too OOC.

2008-10-19 00:50:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

Darkelite tells mouse to go get Captain Marino. Darkelite was pretending to be drunk to get aboard marino ship and to just be passed of as a foolish man.

2008-10-19 00:51:00

Author:
Darkelite105

Posts: 374

Code had fallen asleep on the deck, not really caring about anything that was going on around him. His mudkip had hopped off his shoulder and was running about the deck, and he could care less.

2008-10-19 00:53:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

That's okay Resh, I didn't really mean it to be that way either...I'll edit if you really want

2008-10-19 00:56:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

Mouse goes up to Marino.

"the prisioner wants to speak to you."

2008-10-19 00:57:00

Author:
Go,Mouse!

Posts: 388

Marino walks over to Dark.

"Yeh? Mouse told me you want'd meh."
..
"I have a feeling yer hiding somethin'.... but I'm not sure what...."

Marino turns around and sees Code laying on the deck in pain.

"Argh.. RAIN, you wanna help the poor lad out? We really need a doctor 'round here, but I suppose you will do fer now."

2008-10-19 00:58:00

Author:
Unknown User

Without a second thought, the Admiral ordered the dark man to get up and start walking towards the hospital. The dark man was still in a state of shock, and therefore proved little to no challenge.

As the two were walking slowly towards the stinking smell of the deathbeds, they were met up by two Petty Officers of the Navy.

"Lock him up, but don't harm him. We need him if we ever want to find that scum of the Earth Marino."

2008-10-19 01:06:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

Code was sleeping on the deck, that is, until a large sound of impact had obstructed his slumber. He woke up and saw a harpoon in the ship's mast. He stood up, looked around, but saw no ships in range to send a harpoon that far. His eyes followed the chain of the harpoon to the side of the ship.

"Who goes there?" Code yelled. *burp*

"Code! Is that you!" a voice called. Code was alarmed. He hadn't expected anyone to answer. "It's me, Clank!" A man suddenly flew from the sea to the mast by means of retracting the harpoon. The harpoon was attatched to his left arm in place of his hand! This alarmed Code even more. This so-called 'Clank' pulled out his harpoon from the ships's mast, and dropped onto the deck. Code saw him as a danger and pulled out his rapier. He gripped it tight and pointed it towards Clank. "Why are you interrupting my nappy time, and how do you know my name?"

"You mean to tell me you don't remember good 'ol Clank?!" he exclaimed. "How could you forget me? I'm part of your crew! Under Captain Marino! Don't you remember the fishing accident?" Code thought hard to try and recall his fishing sessions.

FLASHBACK in Code's POV:
I woke up and grabbed my fishing rod, ready to fish after the previous night's drinking. I sat in my usual spot and casted. It was quite odd, as I had to use a lot more strength to get it into water because it felt heavier. Just as I had casted, I heard Marino yell for me. I stuck my fishing rod into some loose boards on the deck. I went to the Captain's cabin and got a long lecture about eating his bacon. I returned to the main deck and saw that the line of my rod was being pulled tight. I must've hooked something. I went over and tugged hard. Harder and harder I pulled until to my surprise a man crawled onto the deck! I helped him over the edge, and noticed that it was that one guy on our crew whose name nobody knew.
END OF FLASHBACK in Code's POV

"Oh yeah!" Code exclaimed. "I remember you, and I even remember your hapoon. How did you get that anyhow?"

Clank was glad to see that Code remembered him, but made an unpleasant face when reminded of the incident.

FLASHBACK in Clank's POV:
I was in swabbing the main deck when out of nowhere a hook and line came straight towards me. I ducked and was hooked by my trousers. I got pulled and dragged along the deck, which I had just swabbed by the way, and to my amazement was cast into the sea! The last thing I saw was Code holding the rod whose hook was attatched to my captain's quarters. I plunged deep into the waters and was being beaten by the rough terrain of the seafloor. I saw a harpoon whose point was struck in sand and rocks and I attempted to grab it, but that didn't turn out well. It took out my left hand and placed itself in the spot where my hand used to be. I screamed in pain and tried to pull it out, but it was stuck. A rushing feeling overcame me, and I thought I was blacking out, but I was being pulled back out of the water.
END OF FLASHBACK in Clank's POV

"Meh," Clank answered, "it's not that interesting."

"Glad to see you're back, from wherever it was you went."

"You had me test the new plank and forgot to come get me."

"Oh, that's right," Code smiled in embarassment.

2008-10-19 01:09:00

Author:
Unknown User

"Well, go do what you want." said Code. He was not very interested much beyond that, and decided to fall back asleep.

2008-10-19 01:15:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

Marino turned around and immediately thought he was drunk again. He saw a strange man with a harpoon for a hand. To test the reality of things, Marino decided to go over and talk to the man, despite of the risk of being called crazy if this was just another hallucination (like the whole Mouse talking thing).

"Argh, mate... wha..who are ye? Where do ye hail from? What do ye want?"

Marino swung his head back around to check if Dark was still there... but he wasn't.

"What in the heavens... Mouse?! What happened? Were you not keeping guard??"

2008-10-19 01:22:00

Author:
Unknown User

Mouse looks away from her cheese, toward marino.

"uhhhh....what am I supposed to do about it? i am three inches tall!"

2008-10-19 01:24:00

Author:
Go,Mouse!

Posts: 388

wile mouse and marino were distracted, Darkelite picked the lock on his Cage and went off to search marino's ship for treasure and a escape boat.

2008-10-19 01:27:00

Author:
Darkelite105

Posts: 374

Marino sighs.

"True lad, true."

He looks around and ponders:

"Where could that scallywag be..? I knew he had something up his sleeve.."

2008-10-19 01:27:00

Author:
Unknown User

Where the heck are my guys? >_>

2008-10-19 01:28:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

Clank ran up to Marino. "Good to see you again, Captain Marino!" he exclaimed. "Reporting for duty, Captain!" He saluted with his harpoon and accidently made a cut mark on Marino's hat.

2008-10-19 01:32:00

Author:
Unknown User

Where the heck are my guys? >_>

Don't know how to play, or else I would of been one of "your" guys.

2008-10-19 01:34:00

Author:
Whalio Cappuccino

Posts: 5250

Code had woken up, his wound still ached, so he decided he would shake it off with some rum. Ignoring everyone else, he slipped into storage. Within the dim lighting of the room, he noticed a dark figure gathering up their rum into a sack. Code lifted his pistol and moved closer. He grabbed what appeared to be a man by the hair and place his pistol upon his forehead.

"Well, well..." said Code, "what should I do with you? The Cap'n is far more forgiving then I am."

2008-10-19 01:37:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

"Thanks mate, sorry. I forgot who ye were for a sec. Clank, right?"

Marino looks around, oblivious.

"Hey... where did Code go? Everyone's dissapearin' on meh.

2008-10-19 01:41:00

Author:
Unknown User

Clank lowered his harpoon. "I think he went to get some rum."

2008-10-19 01:52:00

Author:
Unknown User

Code threw the man upon the deck an stomped on the man's back, immobilizing him. "I found a rat." he said, aiming his pistol at the man's head. "What shall we do with him?"

2008-10-19 01:59:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

Resh sighed, as he walked along the stone path, tossing an apple into the air and then catching it.

the pirates escaped and we are stranded here until we get our hands on a ship....

*Resh thinks back... at the past events*

theirs a man with a weird fish on his shoulder, a great swordman and quick on the trigger...the guy with him was probably a demolition expert, setting off bombs...then theirs tubby, a drunk man...I still doubt he was one of them

On the Admiral's side...The only ones that stick out is me the fencer Rufus Ezekiel, the gunslinger Christian, and the commodore Kyashu.

*Resh reaches the tavern and goes in and haves a drink*
This will be a long chase....

2008-10-19 02:05:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

"I think we should punish him, but do not kill him." suggested Rainfire, "He was brave to come aboard for greed even though he knew we were dangerous and that we outnumbered him. Now that is a pirate personality, but if we do accept him on our ship then he could very easily betray us. It would be a great risk, so lets torture him first. I have some explosive ideas." Rainfire starts to laugh and gets a grim smile on his face. What do you say, Captain?

2008-10-19 02:27:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

"Torture, eh? Heh.. that'll teach him to be loyal to our side. :arg:"

Marino stands up and whistles.

"Alright mates, carry this scallywag to the dungeon. I have a ... splashing idea.

2008-10-19 02:31:00

Author:
Unknown User

The Admiral kept his march, onwards to the hospital. He had thought of something, and wanted Seaman Ezekiel to do this personally.

After a short walk, he reached the foul stench of the hospital. Without a single knock, he forced the wooden double doors open and marched inside, hoping to catch sight of the Seaman.

The men were all laying on their beds. Some in utter agony, whilst others were nearly dead. "Seaman Ezekiel" He called out loudly, to no response. "Seaman. report for duty immediately!" His shout was sharp. This time, he was granted his reply. Even still, it was not the man he was after.

"The injured Seaman left here not long ago, he said he was going for a drink" A short, bald stubby man in a long blood stained white robe stood in the back doorway. "He's at the tavern, sir."

The Admiral nodded and thanked the old man. He then made his way to the nearby tavern.

After reaching his destination, he quickly made his way inside. Seaman Ezekiel was seated not far from the entrance. Hunched over, he had a large mug of ale in his hands.

"Seaman Ezekiel, I have been looking for you" The Seaman quickly dropped his mug, stood up, fixed himself up and saluted the Admiral. "Seaman Ezekiel, reporting for duty, sir."

Tall and expressionless, The Admiral looked at the Seaman. "I need you to do me a personal favour."

Excited yet rather calm, the Seaman waited for the orders.

"There are only few men that could detonate such an explosive, Seaman. And those men are the Navy itself. The only person who could have possessed such firepower could only have come from our Naval Forces. I need you to travel to the Head Quarters, and retrieve for me a document that contains the names of men who have been dismissed from the Navy. The document is called the 'Navy Dismissal Form'. If we use it, we may very well find our culprit."

The Seaman, without much thought, saluted the Admiral once more. "It would be my honour, sir." He quickly left the tavern, and headed towards the Navy Head Quarters.

2008-10-19 02:34:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

"A'ight then captain." said Code. He grabbed the man by his hair, and dragged him down into the dungeon, keeping him in check with his pistol. "Welcome to your new home." said Code, as he took the mans lock picks, and threw him in the dungeon.

2008-10-19 02:35:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

"Heh, thanks mate. Now, give meh some privacy.

"

Marino drags the traitor down the dungeon stairs and sets him down. He then ties his feet to a pulley system and hangs Dark upside down, hanging above a large vat of ice cold water.

http://www.hrw.org/photos/2006/pressers/usdom14465.jpg

"Heh, have you ever done this before?"

Dark, who is now shaking, mumbles:

"No, no...sir....never."

Marino chuckles.

"Harharhar, you sure are in for a surprise mate. :arg:"

2008-10-19 02:41:00

Author:
Unknown User

Code left the ship to take a walk upon the beach. When one of the guards tried to stop him, he, without hesitation, stabbed through the guard's heart and moved onto the beach. There, he sat down, watching the waves crash into the sand. He sighed, thinking about time long past.

"I was once happy..." he said, "then, before I knew, she 'disappeared,' but I know what happened. They might as well have laid her body before me."

He stabbed his sword into the ground before him.

"The government shouldn't have the right do such thing, and if it does, then it does not have the right to exist!"

Code went into town, enraged, shooting all the guards and seamen on sight. People scattered and Code, in his rage, grabbed a torch, and set the hospital on fire. Code realized how much trouble they were in now, and quickly retreated to the ship to tell the crew.

2008-10-19 03:03:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

The Admiral hears screaming outside the tavern. He decides to investigate, but the ale inside him renders him unable to do such things. Instead, he drags himself to an empty room in the back, and falls fast asleep.

2008-10-19 03:12:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

RAINFIRE, read Code's post again, I think yours is a bit off

2008-10-19 03:23:00

Author:
Unknown User

*boarding a passenger ship back to Britain*
alright all I need to do is get to the Navy, request a document, and back... sounds too simple...

since this is a town that was easily infiltraded by Pirates I'm assuming I need to set sail...not going to advance since this is introduction gold for anyone willing to join....

2008-10-19 03:28:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

oops sorry did not see the last paragraph, not the time for it so i will wait to bring the set of questions till the time is right

2008-10-19 03:32:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

If anyone's willing to join :/

The Admiral is woken up...But the side effects of the strong ale are still acting within him, and after a few moments, he fell back to sleep.

2008-10-19 04:01:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

Waiting for Dark to make his move.

Dark isn't giving into Marino's harsh treatment, so Marino keeps at it.

"Tough guy, heh? Soon you won't even know why you attempted to escape meh grasp." :arg:

2008-10-19 04:03:00

Author:
Unknown User

Code hopped onto the ship. "Weigh anchor!" he cried, "we're heading for Spain!" Code unfurled the mast, while Clank lifted the anchor, Rainfire fired the canons at the port, and his pet mudkip steered the ship.

When they made it a few mile away from the port. then the crew rested.

2008-10-19 04:23:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

While waiting for the torture of Darkelite to be over, Rainfire decided to continue work on one of his favorite projects that he has been working on that used his knowledge of guns, bombs, and his skill when working with bombs and metals. He is working on making exploding bullets that are small enough to fit in his pistol and so that the bombs go off a moment or two after making their mark. So far he has made a few bullets but they are only experimental and too sensitive. He has a lot kinks to work out but he expects it to be nearly finished by morning and after he could upgrade all of the crew's weaponry. For now he will only work a little on the project and then get some really needed sleep before things start to heat up again.

2008-10-19 04:28:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

Mouse sleeps in a small hole inside of the ship while crew members go about their business

2008-10-19 05:44:00

Author:
Go,Mouse!

Posts: 388

Christian laid in his hammock, thinking back and analyzing the day. If only he hadn't nearly bowled over that one woman, he might have made it in time. As it was, he'd made it to where the pirates' ship was docked just too late. They were sailing off into the distance as he arrived at the edge. He'd done some patrolling around for any wounded or other necessary, but all the noteworthy finds were done by other people.

Frankly, he wasn't even sure he understood what the whole situation was about. But he hated being kept out of being able to help. Because if he wasn't pursuing something, then it would be all too quick for...

He mentally slapped himself. He didn't need to be remembering anything. Especially not now. He needed to do something, quickly, before he did.

On impulse, he launched himself out of the hammock, and began walking through the decks, towards the officers' cabins. Approaching the Commodore's door, he stopped outside and knocked.

It was a stern voice that answered. "Come in."

He opened the latch and swung the door open enough to just step in. Unsure of himself for a moment, he stood there. The Commodore looked up from his desk.

"...Well?"

He saluted, "Seaman Robinson, sir. Uh...I'm sorry to waste your time, but I was just wondering, perhaps there'd be something, some sort of assignment, that I could help with? I think I should really be doing something to help...but I don't know what needs to be done. And I'd like some kind of orders to go with that. Would there be anything needed that I could do?"

2008-10-19 06:13:00

Author:
Mark D. Stroyer

Posts: 632

Having drifted in the ocean for almost three fortnights, Clank was glad to be on a ship again. He sat on the bow and looked towards the stars. He thought back to the day he got his harpoon. He wasn't angry at Code. He knew it was just an accident. The harpoon on his arm actually turned out to be a good thing. It helped him plenty of times while he drifted the waters. He used it to hunt for food, fight off creatures, and travel quickly underwater when needed by impaling objects and retracting towards them. In the long run, his harpoon was a gift, not a burden.

And so, after having reflected on his harpoon, Clank made an oath to himself to make the most of this gift, and use it to the best of his abilities and potential. Perhaps he would become a legend, or maybe die as a nobody. He didn't know what was to become of him, or of anyone for that matter. That would be decided by fate. He would train himself in the art of fighting with a harpoon, which had never been done before by anyone. He would start at dawn, but for now, he rested.

2008-10-19 06:27:00

Author:
Unknown User

And so The Admiral, having had a long and comfortable rest, was awoken from his slumber by the rapid sounds of rushing footsteps coming from outside the room in which he slept in.

He quickly stood up, looked out the small wooden window pane, and made his judgment on the time. He was displeased, for he believed he slept far too long. Yawning and stretching, he made his way outside the small dirty room at the back of the tavern. He brushed the dust and in some instances, hay, off his blue uniform, and checked to see if any of his personal belongings were missing.

His sword was there, still poised from the very day he laid eyes upon it. His small bag of gold coins was still present under his jacket. And most importantly, his father's precious diary was still intact. He gave out a sigh of relief, as he marched on, out of the tavern, and towards the port.

Along the way, he met, what to him seemed to be, a very determined young man.

"Admiral Stix...The Commodore has sent me to find you! Are you alright?" Noted the determined looking young man, holding a very uptight and stiff position.

"I'm fine, Seaman. Thank you for your concern. What is your name, man?"

"Robinson, sir, Seaman Christian Robinson" The man saluted, without a flinch.

The Admiral, being pleased by the young man's determination, muttered "Come, let us walk. I have a favour to ask of you."

2008-10-19 07:16:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

"Heres another one" some ones says from a distance, kyashu slowly opens his eyes to be met by a woman. Hazardly kyashu asks " where am i? how did I get here ?" The girl with a small pause answers " Good sir your ship was attacked by them pirates."

Commodore kyashu tries standing up but falls straight back down " please remain on the floor your leg is broken sir" Looking down to his disgusted , his foot was mangled and truly un recongizable. The pain started to spread , as the villagers started to carry him back to the local doctor only couple things were racing through his mind revenge and the safety of his admiral and his brave men.

2008-10-19 15:46:00

Author:
Kyashu

Posts: 447

Darkelite, who is still not giving into the treatment, is about to be dunked in again when Marino snapped.

"Argh, ye know what? FINE... FINE! I've had it! I be givin' up!

"

Marino takes Darkelite off the pulley system, and places him on his feet.

"Argh, don't think you got away from meh, I'll still be watchin' over ye. Don't ye think you get to be free all of a sudd'n. I still reck'n what you did to me back thar... escapin' from meh grasp was a rottn', scallywag thing to do!"

Dark stares at Marino blankly, as if he wasn't even there.

"I'll be watchin' ye. I'll bring ye food every tide, don't think yer gonna starve yer way out of this."

Frustrated, Marino walks up the creaky steps and slams the door behind him. Little does he know that he accidentally left the key that was supposed to lock him in with Dark.

2008-10-19 16:46:00

Author:
Unknown User

It was the middle of the night, and Code couldn't sleep, he went to the upper decks, and looked out to see. He sighed, remembering all he had done, all that he had accomplished, thinking about how things could have been. He picked up his mudkip, who had fallen asleep upon the deck and set it on his lap. "It's not that I hate being a pirate, I enjoy the freedom and all but..." Code muttered to himself, "it's just not like how it used to be, my life will never be like that again."

2008-10-19 23:21:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

well thats enough time for anyone in Navy to join

*The passanger ship is sailing along the night as Resh is up on deck staring at full moon, his chest still bandaged up*

what a peaceful evening, if only life can always be like this...why must men desire to harm their fellow men...is that another ship headed for us?

2008-10-19 23:26:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

The luminescent moon shines on Marino's scruffy face as he watches the waves and the hull of the ship converge. All is silent as Code lays down, above on the upper deck, with a rather gloomy look on his face.

"Argh, things sure are quiet 'round here. I reck'n this will be a long journey. I TOLD Code we should'a recruited moar crew members before settin' sail. That Scallywag..."

Marino closes his eyes as he pours some rum down his crusty ol' throat.

2008-10-19 23:40:00

Author:
Unknown User

Dawn, and the sun rises.

http://xnet.kp.org/permanentejournal/fall06/sunriseship.JPG

2008-10-19 23:46:00

Author:
Unknown User

someone needs to make this story progress or it will die

2008-10-19 23:47:00

Author:
Go,Mouse!

Posts: 388

The navy needs to post more, that's the problem.

2008-10-19 23:55:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

eh I'm giving you story fodder, your setting sail for spain, I'm for britain from town x, if we meet or not is up to you....

2008-10-20 00:09:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

Seeing Code just laying down on the deck with a sad look on his face, Rainfire decided to ask Code a few questions.

Rainfire walked up to Code and layed down beside him and turned to him and said,"Code, what is your story, and how did you end up with up with Marino? And where in the world did you learn your amazing sword and marksmen skills?"

2008-10-20 01:11:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

2008-10-20 01:50:00

Author:
Unknown User

Yeah i know that his bio answers all of those answers but it would be good to have it in the story to because not all people are going to got the respective sides groups to check those out and they can be incorporated in to the story so it would be better to do at least some of it this way and the characters do not know about each other until they ask, it adds to the realism

So Code just respond with what is in your bio

2008-10-20 01:59:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

Code needed to vent, and this was the perfect opportunity, "Well, I was born to English noblity, and I fenced as a hobby. All was fine and dandy then, then I met her, and I was in love. I met a girl named Anne Marie, and she was finer than any of those mermaids that Marino fantasizes about, and I was made to marry her. The problem came when her father angered the King of England. The king had her and her family kidnapped and taken to London. I don't expect to ever see her again, all I know is that she is either in great pain right now, or dead. That's the reason I picked up my fathers pistol and begun my training, so I could survive out here, against this perilous ocean. And maybe, if I survive long enough, I'll be able take revenge the monarchy, and show them the pain that I've felt all these years."

2008-10-20 02:11:00

Author:
Code1337

Posts: 3476

Clank walked the port of his town like he did every morning. He noticed a ship in the bay that he had never seen before. Its architecture was different than the usual ones. The walkway was drawn out, so he decided to take a stroll aboard the ship. There was lots of sea equipment, more than a cargo or Navy ship would have. He was quite interested.

He walked up to the second deck, and walked over to the steering wheel. Also not of the Navy. He brought his left hand up and began to move it towards the wheel. He touched it with his fingertips, and fell with a thud. He stood up and realized he had been tackled by a strange creature. It was the oddest thing he?d ever seen. It was blue, with orange gills he presumed, and had multiple fins on his body, and four legs! What kind of creature was this? The creature looked at him, and was getting ready to pounce again.

*bang* A loud noise that was surely a gunshot fired in the distance. The creature got out of pouncing position and turned around towards the town, as did Clank. He could make out one, no, two figures sprinting towards the port. They knocked over whoever came in their path, and were clearly being chased. He tried to figure out which ship they were going to escape to, and that?s when he pieced it together. He was on their ship - a pirate ship. He hid behind a cannon as they neared. The little, tackling beast disregarded him to greet one the of men and withdraw the walkway. One man ran over to the anchor and pulled it up while the other ran passed Clank behind the cannon and took the steering wheel into his gritty hands. After lifting the anchor, the man with the creature on his shoulder faced the port while they began to sail away. Clank did the same as he still had a view of it.

A man in suit followed by similarly dressed men arrived at the port. Clank recognized this man. It was Admiral Stix, the hero of the town. He had seen his promotions to join the Navy on the door of every pub, and had attended his promotion to Admiral a while back. At the moment he was carrying a pistol, a wepon that one in the Navy doesn't usually ever carry. Odd. Clank looked over at the two pirates and saw that they hadn?t anything of great value. Even more odd. His gaze returned to the port as he heard the admiral shouting. ?Captain Marino, you will live every day in fear and regret until, with my sword, I shall exact a toll.?

The man piloting the ship glanced into the eyes of Admiral Stix, but only for a second. What could have this pirate have done to anger one so much if he didn?t steal anything? ?I know it's not exactly in my place to be asking, Captain Marino,? began the man whose shoulder harbored the blue creature, ?but what you did back there, was that really necessary??

?You?re right, Code,? Marino replied while keeping his eyes on the horizon, ?it's not in your place to be asking that.?

Code?s, pet it seemed, jumped to the deck and headed towards Clank behind the cannon. ?What are you doing, Mudkip, you idiot?? Code grumbled as he followed. Clank?s heart beat faster and faster as he approached. He had to think fast. He looked around him and found a cannonball. With no other ideas and in a desperate situation, he picked it up, stood up and tossed it at the unsuspecting pirate. Code ducked and stood erect again as the cannonball crashed into the deck of the ship.

This attracted the attention of the Captain, and he ran over to see what had happened. The Mudkip took control of the steering wheel. ?Who are you and why did you try to decapitate me Caribbean style?!? Code yelled in a tone of mixed anger and surprise.

Clank felt a cold object pressed against the side of his head. His eyes looked to the right and saw the Captain was holding a pistol to his skull. He gulped. ?I uh, I, uhm.? He couldn?t think of any logical explanation that would stop the pirate at his side from sending a bullet into the contents of his head. Well, pirates love honesty, don't they? ?I noticed your ship in the bay and decided to see what you guys had on here and who it belonged to. I didn?t do anything, except touch the steering wheel, and,?

?What is it you did?!? yelled Marino. Clank was nearly about to start crying, as he knew he had just pronounced his own death. He would die, and no one would know. He would have no funeral. His name wouldn't be in the obituary. His burial place would be the sea, the bullet in his head his tombstone. ?Which hand?!? he yelled.

?What??

?Which hand did ye be dirtying me wheel with?!?

Oh, no. They were going to chop off his hand. ?Muh, my left.? He stuttered.

?Well, then,? the Captain said. He lowered the pistol and put his left hand out. ?Welcome to the crew.?

Clank was completely bewildered. He thought they were going to slit his throat and leave him to the sharks. ?But, aren?t you going to kill me??

?Ah course not, mate. It's takes true bravery to shake the hand of a pirate?s ship.? Marino smiled and held his hand higher. Clank grasped his hand and shook it. ?Yer a pirate now, lad.?

?Wait a second, here,? Code protested, ?he almost knocked my head off! I think we should most definitely kill him! Yes, killing him would be great!?

?Ahh, quit yer whimperin? Code.? Marino scolded. ?Let us be merry and sing a pirate?s chantey!?

As the ship sailed off into the horizon, the three began singing in unison. ?Yo ho, yo ho, a pirate?s life for me!?

Please post a comment on my profile to tell me what you think of this one. I spent a long time on it.

2008-10-20 03:28:00

Author:
Unknown User

Pain drifted through his body.. With each pulsating heart beat a fresh wave of pain was unleashed. His foot now cleaned and no blood in sight but rather bandages and bamboo sticks integrated within each other. The integrated bamboo sticks mean that commodore kyashu could hobble at least. He looked around at the room; it was a dark, almost shanty like room held by loose wood and bricks. On the other side of the room lay a bucket with a combination of bandages and cloth drenched with his blood.
He started to raise himself.

"Sir here's a glass of water" a gentle voice came from the dark. Forward she stepped from the dark corner, with her dark black hair and mesmerizing eyes, kyashu?s eyes fixed on her, she was easy on the eye yet something mysterious about her. " Here's your glass of water sir ?.
"Thank you" replied Kyashu still mesmerized due to her beauty. But remembering why he was there he asked " Do you have any news on the others ?" . "Sir, without disrespect you are in no health no go back" as she lowered her gazes and without trying to avoid angering the commodore. " I wish I could rest but my men need me out there, the admiral needs me out there, I will have to take to sea once again, I must inform everyone of the pirates and their dastardly deeds."

"I understand" she said with disappointment. "There is a ship leaving for Britain and rumours say one of your fellow navy officers is on board ?. *Gulp* The Commodore drinks his water with one swipe and starts to stand up slowly, " We shall leave at once then " And leave for the docks.

Once At the docks commodore kyashu studies the ship as he approaches, his eye catches a very well suited man, upon close inspection he notices it is reshin his fellow brave solider. While hobbling Kyashu starts to ascend the ramp with much difficulty, but with help from the girl he gets on to the ship.

Once on the ship kyashu turns around and while looking into the mysterious girl?s eyes he asks humbly " how can I ever return this favour, you have helped me in such bad times and have nurtured me that I may fight again?. While giving a small grin she gives a kiss on kyashu?s cheek with her tender lips and whispers in his ear "we shall meet again but promise me you shall never forget me. Kyashu whispers back ?I shall never forget you and I shall return.?

As they both smile at each other they turn their backs, and start to walk their own ways. ?We meet again brother ? Kyashu says to Reshin. ?Commodore Kyashu ! You?re alive? and salutes while still amazed at seeing kyashu.
As they start to talk about what occurred during the day the ship sets sail into the dark night for not knowing what lies ahead of them

Sorry about grammar or any mistakes lol Im not that good that way lol sorry again

2008-10-21 02:49:00

Author:
Kyashu

Posts: 447

The Seaman, walking besides the Admiral, was feeling rather nervous. He had never taken direct orders from the Admiral, let alone walked beside him before.

"Before I say anything, know this. What I am about to say to you must never be mentioned outside this conversation. It is important that you keep it secret." Whispered the Admiral, as he halted his march.

"Of course, sir! Not a word shall roll off my tongue!" Replied the Seaman with confidence. The Seaman was trustworthy, and the Admiral knew this.

"I need you to travel South, to a small village by the name of Sattleshyre. There, you will find the local butcher and ask him for directions to a man who likes to call himself Richard Le Theadre. Once you reach that man, you must tell him who sent you. He's an old friend of mine, with rather old habits. He dislikes Seamen, and tends to think of them as unworthy to even converse with. Knowing this, I am now officially raising you to the rank of Midshipman." The Admiral glimpsed a slight smile on the boy's face.

He went on. "After proving your rank to him, you must retrieve an object from him. The object is sealed in a crafted wooden chest. Make sure that the chest is never opened until it reaches my hands."

"May I ask sir...What is this object?" The now curious Midshipman looked at the Admiral's emotionless face with sparkling eyes.

"The object itself shouldn't matter to you, but rather, it's safety. You must ensure that it reaches me safe and sound. It is all too important to lose, especially in these dark times." The Midshipman spoke no further.

"The Nairre. That is what Richard likes to call it. Make sure you remember the name, it is vital that he trusts you enough to hand it over. It is as special to him as it is to me."

The now Midshipman gave a firm salute. "Aye aye, sir"

He left the title of Seaman behind, and began his long journey towards the village, towards the Admiral's old friend, and his prized possession.

2008-10-21 07:24:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

After The Death of His Parents, Bob always was on a tavern, drinking some ale while playing a lute, thinking how he could avenge his parents.

The Bartender after seeing Bob's Sad Face, Asked: What Upset You, Lad?
Bob,said: I need To Find a way to get to the sea, because the pirates owe me something.
and Then, The Bartender, seeing the tone of sadness of bob's voice, says: Why don't you join the crew of admiral Stix? I heard He was looking for crew on the last days

For The First time after the raid, Bob Smiled, And Said: That's not a Bad Idea, I'm going, If you see the Admiral, Say To Him that I want to join him.
Then Bob Left the money on the table, Packed His Stuff, and Left the Tavern Looking for Admiral Stix.

"Well, I think the time has come" Said Bob, While Heading To the Docks

2008-10-21 15:23:00

Author:
Bob Tampinha

Posts: 82

"Pirates!!!!!" someone yelled and a bunch of men and women started panicking down in the cabins... the door to the private quarters where Resh and Commadore Kyashu was were flung open. Interrupting Resh's novel

"Hey you Navy guys!!! We are being chased by Pirates!!!" The captain of the passanger ship yelled

Resh and the Commadore looked at each other.

"Marino?" asked Resh
"No...I've chased these guys all over with the Admiral, they woudn't raid a ship with little value, especially with his new crew still small..."

The Commadore stood up with a commanding look on his face. He started walking to the top deck with the captain and Resh following behind.

"How far?"
"A....a few paces w-w-west.They are headed for us fast though" The captain stuttered.
"Cannons?"
"Only about 5"
"Men?"
"Just a handfull of mercs."
"Get them to load the cannons, send the rest on top, Seaman Ezekiel, your with me"

The Commodore then openes the door to the higher decks.

As they go on out they noticed the pirate ship headed towards them.
"Ezekiel take the wheel, 90 degree turn west, ..."
"We're headed right for them?"
"Did I stutter?"
"whatever you say..."

The commodore then pulled out what seems to be a musket, but the barrel is much more thinner and longer. Their seemd to be 3 circular glass attached and evenly spaced along the top.

What is that thing? he doesn't think he can hit a target that far off can he....well, he was a commodore for a reason I suppose
Resh thought as he turned the wheel...

*bam* the Commodore's weird musket was shot.
"Pirates..."the Commodore said, as he loads another shot in the weird firearm
*bam*
"Take out the captain, the first mate..."
*bam*
"and the navigator...and they panick"
he smiled as he puts down the firearm

Resh stares in amazement, as he sees a few pirates jumping ship from a distance how can the Commodore hit something that far...

He putted the firearm away.
"Now its a simple game of chicken..." Kyashu smiled as the pirate ship seems to slow down as the passager ship heads for them...
"You can take it from here right?" The Commodore said as he goes back down.

Their was no need, as Resh stairs blankly out on the pirate ship now turning away.

Who exactly is Commodore Kyashu....sigh, next stop, Britain
Resh thought as he turns the wheel to get them back on course

I do hope I captured your char right Kyashu

2008-10-22 00:51:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

When Bob Reaches the Docks, He See That The Admiral already left the city, But after looking the sea, He See Some Pirates Jumping To A Ship, Then He Realizes That the Ship is Probably The Admiral's Ship.

Bob, Quickly Entered The Last Memory of His Parents, The Only Thing That Was Not Destructed On The Raid, His Father's Boat. He was so Desesperate That He Didn't Tought that it would be near impossible to Reach Them
But, The Boy Would Not Care.

Then He Starts To Sail after The Ship.

2008-10-22 01:26:00

Author:
Bob Tampinha

Posts: 82

Christian kept up his slow, jogging pace. He'd been keeping this up for a while, but he was in the Navy for a reason. He'd fallen into a regular pattern of breathing and jogging, which helped make the time blend together. The village being a few miles away from the port town, it took some time to reach it. Finally, he saw the collection of buildings. He dropped down to his typical, long-gaited walk, to help regain his breath and to prevent attracting any suspicion.

A small, weather-worn sign just on the outside confirmed his destination. "Sattleshyre".

He strolled through the main street. Looking around and between different buildings, the rest of the streets were jokes in comparison. As he expected, it was very quiet. A few shopowners meddling around their stores was the bulk of the activity. Some looked up to watch him as he passed through, others simply ignored him entirely. He noticed on the end of the village, a butcher's shop, the shutters open to reveal the inside. The man inside was busying himself by selecting various cuts off a fresh side of beef. Christian walked over.

"I supposed you'd be the butcher?"

He received a grunt in reply, as the butcher continued his work, ignoring the man. Christian waited, supposing the butcher was going to finish something before speaking with him.

After a few moments, the butcher looked up at him and said, "Look 'ere, if ya ain't got any business, ya might just be gettin' outta 'ere, eh?" before returning to his work.

Christian leaned in a bit, and spoke in a lowered voice. "I'm looking for a man called Richard Le Theadre. I understand you could direct me to where he is."

The butcher froze. Then, he sharply turned towards him and pointed at him with the butcher's knife still in hand. "Ah don' know a thing of what yer talkin' about. Yer crazy, ye hear? You stop yer snoopin' around and mind yer own business. Ah've got nuthin' you'd want to know, so get away from 'ere. Jus' clear out!" And with that, the butcher rather violently closed the shutters, locking them.

Christian decided to take matters of persuasion a bit further. He walked around to the back of the building, to the connected living quarters. Once out of sight, he moved swiftly to find the door. Locked, as he suspected. He pulled the dirk out of its sheath on his right hip, and placed it around where the locking mechanism was. With a quick push and then a twist, the door cracked open. He opened it fully, then stepped inside. Suddenly, the butcher entered the room he had just broken into. The butcher turned to run, but Christian dashed towards the man, shoved him against the wall, and held him there with his left forearm, hand clamped against his mouth. With his right arm, he stick the dirk into the wall nearby the butcher's neck.

"I believe you'll find things quite differently than you claim. Now, there'll be no yelling for help, no scuffle, and no resistance. If you want to get out of this unhurt, that is. And we all know how difficult deep wounds can be to treat properly. So you'll tell me what I want to know, and then you can go free. Is that understood?"

The butcher nervously nodded.

"Good. As you were saying?" He removed his hand, but kept it nearby, just in case.

"Head down the road for a mile and a half. There'll be a cluster of trees just off the road, and a boulder off to the other side. Go through the trees, and you'll find a path. Follow it, and you'll find a shack next to a stream. He lives there."

"Now that wasn't too hard, now was it? Thank you for your time."

Christian dropped the man, who slumped back against the wall, and then turned and walked out, sheathing his dirk in the process. He stepped out of the building, returned to the main road, and headed out of town. Apparently, he still had some walking to do.

Dum dum dummm....

Decided to break it up into two parts, just to prevent the awesomeness to be too overwhelming. And plus, then I can help encourage more activity with multiple posts!

2008-10-22 19:47:00

Author:
Mark D. Stroyer

Posts: 632

It looks like no one is going to continue

2008-10-23 20:29:00

Author:
Bob Tampinha

Posts: 82

Ok now i think i need to spruce up the story here and am going to add a scene where we, who are now on our ship run in to a scout ship outside of Spain and we need to destroy it and everyone aboard so that we can get some action in and more than one post from all of us pirates, meaning that the story of the attack on the scout ship will be carried out over most of the pirate crew members posts to encourage more posts, activity once again on this, some action, and some fun

After waking up in the middle of the night because he could not sleep, Rainfire stumbled up the the main deck in tiredness and goes to look out off of the bow to relax himself. Upon stepping on the bow he looked over the dark and pristine ocean that seemed endless?the kind of thing he always loved seeing?but as he looked out on the horizon he saw a small triangle shaped black figure cruising on the horizon. The last he heard of their position was last afternoon and the captain said that they were going to be in Spain in about 3 days. In that moment of seeing the ship everything clicked in to position and he knew what was on the horizon. Right after he noticed what he had just saw he ran to the Captains quarters shouting, "Captain!..."

2008-10-24 00:01:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

I don't really think so... It's only been inactive for a day or two. Roleplaying, unless done by a group of really serious people, typically has phases. It may go inactive for a couple days, but it comes back. Usually just people being busy and not posting, and then someone does something and it all comes back, because other people are waiting for someone else to move before things get started. Typical. So yeah, if you're one of the waiters, please post and make it up, and that'll help pull the whole thing together.

On another note, are we going to accept the rules I suggested for PvP combat? I'm not sure if it did or not.

Christian suddenly stopped in his tracks, walking along the beachside path, and looked up at the sun. It was one of those times, again. In his mind, he couldn't think of anything but her. He wanted to just put his arms around her, and kiss her, and be able to look into her eyes and hear her voice.

And he wanted to die.

He'd considered it. Many times, actually. But it all came down to him believing that doing that would be just stupid, and cowardly, and that if he was still alive, it was for a reason. He just didn't know in the slightest what that might be.

In these moments, he felt overwhelmed and incapacitated. And in ways, he was. Stepping away, for him, was impossible. He knew it was for the best. And he knew there was no other option. But when it just came down to it, he couldn't do it. This was why he always did his best to stay away from anything that would lead him to this spot. He couldn't just get out of it willingly. That was why he tried to escape. And typically, he did a fairly good job at that, or at least he thought he did. But no matter how well he did at escaping from it all, he could never get away.

Thus, there he stood. Transfixed by the lingering memories. He thought to how he'd got here. It was the beach. The sun slowly heading towards the horizon. The ever-changing glint of light off the rhythmic flow of the water. And then all that without her hand in his. That was all it took. Because in his eyes, all too much reminded him, and it didn't take much to push him all the way.

He struggled with himself for a few moments, attempting to pull himself away. He managed to make himself take a few slow steps along the path. Suddenly, he heard a seagull's cry. There were a few of them gathered just off the path, on a piece of driftwood resting on the sand. He took full advantage of the distraction to resume his walk. And then he forced himself to not look to the side.

He wasn't far away. A few minutes later, he noticed the large stone in the distance. Once he reached it, he looked across the path. As described, a cluster of trees, with some fairly thick foliage filling the area between them. He pushed a large leaf aside and ducked under some other greenery, then slowly made his way through the varied plants. After about five feet of this pushing, he emerged from it all, and found himself on a faint, but obvious, walked path in the middle of the heavy jungle. It looked just like a track blazed by animals. And that was an excellent disguise.

He pushed on along the path. The surrounding jungle repeated itself often, and would likely be very easy to get lost in, due to the vast similarity from one part to the next. But that was likely exactly why this man hid here. As he went on, he began to faintly hear the flow of water through the rest of the quiet. That grew, and soon he found himself walking along the edge of more than just a stream as described, but rather closer to a river, with a rock-lined bottom, limpid water revealing all the contents of it, except the various miniature waterfalls, where the otherwise glassy surface became contorted by the changing shapes and conflicting flows, which bent the light to obscure what was beneath.

Beside the river, the path continued, so he assumed that the butcher's directions were somewhat corrupted, and that the shack was instead further along. He walked on beside the flow, and the bank of the river where he walked began to widen slightly, then quickly, and suddenly there was a clearing, consisting of a shack, some basic tools for cookery next to a fire pit, and a few varied items lying around the area. He approached the shack.

It was quiet inside. He knocked. No answer. He knocked again. Suddenly, he felt a hand grab his shoulder, and in a moment he was pressed with his back against the shack, a cutlass next to his neck, and a stern face glaring at him.

Calmly, Christian spoke, "You must be Richard Le Theadre, then."

"What's it to you?"

"Midshipman Robinson, sir. I'm under the command of Admiral Stix. I believe you're a friend of his."

The man loosened his grip, and stepped back a few steps, letting the weapon dangle by his side, his eyes scanning Christian up and down. After a moment, he stepped in and silently tapped Christian on the shoulder with the side of his blade. Christian looked, and it was his patch.

"Right. Recent battlefield promotion by the Admiral. Haven't had time to update my uniform, yet."

The man replied, "So yer a midshipman..." He reached in and grabbed the hilt of Christian's sword, then pulled it out to examine it. "What's this, then? How'd you get this as a midshipman?"

Christian stepped away from the shack and took hold of the sword, then returned it to its sheath. "It was my father's. He gave it to me."

"So your father was an officer, and you're an enlisted man? Are you daft or do you think I am? Why in the world would you do that, when you could just as easily been an officer?"

Christian glared back. This was a reminder he didn't need. Through teeth almost-clenched, he replied, "I had reasons good enough."

"Ah, so you got yourself in a bit of trouble and needed to get away from it all, eh?"

"I didn't do anything. I just have reasons. Also, I came here under orders, and this is simply circumventing my carrying out of them."

"Get to the point then, boy."

"Admiral Stix needs the Nairre."

Richard swiftly rushed in towards Christian, and he found himself back against the shack, this time with a hand firmly clamped against his mouth. "Boy, you don't know what you're about to get into. The instant anyone sees you, you're going to have word spread about you like hot butter over a turkey. And then they're all going to come out of the woodwork. And all of 'em are going to want your heart on a stick. And then burned."

The man stepped back once again. Christian popped his neck to the side.

"Now are you sure you're prepared for that?"

Calmly, Christian replied, "I was given orders by the Admiral. It's my duty to carry them out to the furthest of my ability. Not to dispute them."

The man stared at him for a moment. Finally, he said, "Well, apparently Stix trusts you. I wouldn't. Seem more insolent than trustworthy to me. You stay here."

Richard turned and went inside his shack. Under his breath, Christian muttered something to himself about cynical kooks. A few moments later, the man emerged with a small chest - really not more than a wooden box - in his hands. He walked over towards Christian, and held it out to him.

Christian took the box with both hands. It was quite heavy. As if underneath the wood, there was a thick layer of solid iron to protect it. Richard commented further.

"Now you protect that chest with your life, and make sure that with all certainty it gets to Stix, and only Stix. Because believe me, if it doesn't... You're not going to want to know what else."

Christian nodded, and then began walking back up the path he had come. He glanced back to notice the man still watching him as he disappeared out of site among the trees.

What this thing was he was transporting, he hadn't the slightest in the world. But he hoped it was worth at least half what Richard had claimed. Because if it was, they Navy would be in incredibly fine shape.

2008-10-24 01:22:00

Author:
Mark D. Stroyer

Posts: 632

I second the rp combat rule, player vs player combat must be decided by both not just 1...in text aswell for more epicness

A quiet sunrise in Britain. As a small passenger ship docks on the port. The passengers go off with their baggage in hand and cargo being dropped off. Commodore Kyashu being helped by Seaman Ezekiel make their way down the cobblestone port.

"The Navy Dismissal Form right?
I'll get it, I have some things to take care off in the department anyway, enjoy your day off..." Kyashu said, walking off towards the Navy station

"right sir..." Resh replied.

As he puts his blue navy jacket over his shoulders, without it, his white collared-shirt and black pants and lazy posture blends him right into the crowd of people.

"What to do... what to do..."

Any introductees? This is also good introduction fodder... P.S. Bob, the admiral never setted sail...I went for britain, stopped in some town and found out Kyashu was alive, Admiral sent Christian down to his old contact to pick up something....

2008-10-24 05:20:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

The Admiral, having had too much rest, could not even bare lying down. His mind was roaring with the many different thoughts about the past, present and even what is to come. Yet, the only worry he had, was for his men.

"Here ya go lad! It's what you wanted, innit?" The memories of his father sped by like a fish in the vast ocean.
"Never let anyone put you down, lad. Keep your chin up, carry on your duties, and pray for a better tomorrow." His father's words weighed more than pure gold.

"Admiral! Admiral! Sir! We have news of Raidonbeck!" The explosive shout penetrated his deep thoughts and left him emotionless once more.

"Raidonbeck? Why, I haven't heard that name in years." The Admiral, in awe at what the man had said.

"Aye, sir! Raidonbeck is back in motion! This ship is back, Admiral!" His father's ship, vanished for over a decade. Can it be true?

"Would you like me to lead you to where it is ported, sir?" The young man said firmly. Eyes wide open, expecting an obvious answer.

The Admiral sighed, turned his head back to the ocean view. "No, I'm afraid it would bring back too many memories, and that's the last thing I want to happen." The Admiral took a long pause. "Were there any personal possessions?"

The young man, his eyes back into their normal size. "There was some gold left, sir. Piles and piles of ash and hay. A few books and a rusted necklace, sir. Nothing that is worth your while, Admiral."

"You mentioned a necklace..." The Admiral's face lit up all of a sudden. "Tell me, man, what did it look like?" The Admiral had turned completely around by now.

The young man stuttered. "I-I-I didn't get to examine it too closely, sir. But by what I remember, it was made out of white gold, with an encrusted silver outline...Oh, and it had writings engraved on the back. Some sort of foreign language."

The Admiral shook his head, obviously disappointed. "I see." He paused. "I assume it was Commander Geoffrey Gibbs who sent you?"

"That is correct, sir." The boy had a dumbfounded look on his face. "It was indeed Commander Gibbs."

"You may leave, man. Tell Gibbs to send three of his finest scouts. I have something special planned." The Admiral adjusted his golden medal on his uniform.

"Aye aye, sir. Will do." Said the young man, as he ran off. It wasn't long before he disappeared out of The Admiral's sight, and his light footsteps could not be heard any longer.

2008-10-24 06:45:00

Author:
Stix489

Posts: 2080

Suddenly, A Storm Appears, The Sea Starts To Get More Agressive.
Bob with all of his efforts, try to resist. But One Of The Waves push him back, and he hits his head on the ship's floor and lie unconscious, One More Wave takes him out of the ship, Now, Bob Is floating His Way to Britain, Without Knowing.

2008-10-24 23:52:00

Author:
Bob Tampinha

Posts: 82

Resh walked along down the British town, once again tossing and catching an apple, everything seems to be ok.

what to do, what to do.... Its already noon and all I've done is walk around this place...

As he takes a bite...

"Help!!!" a female voice cries out from an alley

Resh stopped dead in his tracks as he turns towards the source. Their he saw a lady struggling against 2 guys. A bald muscular man was restraining her as skinnier one harasses the young woman.

"You owe us quite a lot of money, you know..." One of the thin said.
"Please, just another week or so, I'll pay you back with interest..."
"Oh their is no need, you'll earn every pretty penny back" The one restraining her said playfully.

"Excuse me..." Resh said as he walks in the alley,
"What do you want!" both of the guys yelled
"Well you see, I was walking down this road and..."
"It wasn't a real question moron! We coudn't careless what you want, Scram!!" said the skinnier guy

The girl tried to say something but the bald guy's hand was blocking her mouth so she coudn't speak.

"We are wanted men,you don't know what your getting into" the bald man said. Resh still having a lazy tone in his voice,

"*yawn*, your wanted men? Then shoudn't you be a little more discrete instead of harassing this fair lady..."
"Hey moron! your really annoying you know that! why don't you just mind your own business..." the skinny man said again, getting angry.
"Well, helping a woman in distress is my business..." Resh said still in a calm tone.

The skinny man charged and tried to punch the navy officer, but Resh simply side stepped away. The two troublemakers and the lady shocked at his speed

"Now now, no need to be violent, I'm simply asking whats going on..."before Resh could finish the man that just charged him pulled out a knife and aimed for his shoulder. Resh ducked really fast and evaded safely but the navy jacket he had on his shoulder fell to the ground.

"Aww did the poor man get his jacket dirty! Gonna cry to mommy now?" The man went for another swing with his knife but Resh simply punched the skinny man in the face, which knocked him out cold. Resh looked at the bald man holding the lady now. His eyes were filled with killing intent that it sent shivers down the muscular man.

Resh started to approach the shivering man, which was all the guy could take before panicking.

"You think your tough!!!" The large man ran for him, forgetting all about the girl. He swung for his head, Resh didn't even try to dodge, as he grabs the man's head and swung it to one end of the narrow alleyway. The bald man fell, knocked out to the ground. Resh stared at the lady

"what is your story?" Resh asked in a harsh tone.

------
Resh sat down in a wooden table in the womans house. The woman was preparing some tea. It was quite a small house, but it has a certain feel of home.

"My husband has gone missing for some time now, we have 2 kids you see...I coudn't find work and I needed money for bread. One by one I sold our things, but it wasn't enough. Thats when Wayne and his thugs come in. They offered me a hundred gold pieces, so long as I pay them back 150 by the end of next month..."

The girl gave Resh his cup and some bread. and sat down.

"Please its the least I can do...heaven knows what would of happend if you havn't shown..."
"Your problems havn't ended yet, this Wayne guy will find out and come back ten fold..."
"Wayne is off on a trip you see...you bought me a little more time to get the money..."
"Any plans?"
"No...but really, I'll be fine...I got a job on the bakery yesterday..."
Resh finished his morsel of bread and stood up and walked for the door

"Thanks for the food..." Then something catches his eye...It was a hilted sword. A little longer than an average sword, and its a little curved in the middle...

"Is that falchion for sale?"
"Oh that....my husband came home with it one day, saying it was an antique...I still say it is junk...we had quite a fight about it..." The women sighed those last words being reminded about her husband...

Resh drew the sword, it was stainless, and it looked brand new. He knew a good smithed sword when he saw one...
"I'll give you 500 gold pieces for it..."

----
Resh walked down the cobblestone path,near the shoreline, it was now sunset, the entire ordeal of meeting the lady and then trying to prove he was an ezekiel to the bank ate the entire day...surprisingly his white button-down shirt wasn't even smudged throughout the whole ordeal.

proving I'm from the Ezekiel family, fun fun...not to mention that I forgot to pick up my jacket too... how am I going to explain that to the admiral...

suddenly a dark blue trenchcoat fell from above landing in his head...

"Hey whats the big idea" Resh said as he looks up to see who dropped it, it was Commadore Kyashu standing at the edge of a Gigantic frigate.

"Congratulations Ezekiel! You've got promoted to Midshipman!!!"

"Sir..."

"The ship?" Kyashu smiled "We thought it would of been best to go in stealthy on Portsmith to get Marino and what was left of his crew before he can start again!"

The Commodore continued to yell down at Resh "So we took a small ship instead of this...that plan failed and Marino is now setting sail with a new crew....now this here is Admiral Stixx's flagship! Marino is almost back to his old threatning self, so we are bringing this out!!!!! This here won't be blown away by some mesely ex-navy demolitionist"

"This???!!" Resh yelled back at the Commadore who was at the top edge of the ship..

"The Harbinger!!!! Now come on let me show you around!!!!"

2008-10-25 01:35:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

Some hours after reaching Britain, Bob woke up because his lute was hitting his face.
So he left the shore and started to look for a market, so he can get some food and change his clothes.

"****, my rifle is wet, i will have to dry it and get some gunpowder" said Bob.

But before going to shop, he heard someone Say "Admiral", And That Guy Was Next to A Ship.

Bob, full of Hope, ran to the ship and say: " Greetings, i'm Bob, can i join your crew?"

Then Bob thinks: Bob, you're such a idiot, what was that?

2008-10-27 21:41:00

Author:
Bob Tampinha

Posts: 82

@ Bob, I would suggest going over when to capatalize words and when to use certain tenses, because you capatalized nearly every word when you shouldn't have and you should also looke at tenses because it is "ran" not "run". Sorry if i seem really strict right now but this thread should be in good writing

you can edit and change that

Cheers!

2008-10-28 01:10:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

Cheers!

Sorry, I fixed it.

Sorry for My Bad English

2008-10-28 02:32:00

Author:
Bob Tampinha

Posts: 82

oh no do not worry about it, all that is wrong is the wrong captalization, that is the only major thing about it but really, other than that it is fine.

Ok Marino i know you are out there come and respond to my post please or else this thread will die and no one wants that

2008-10-29 02:53:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

I'm waiting for Kyashu so you'll have to wait Bob, the Britain chapter is on hold for now...

2008-10-29 02:55:00

Author:
Reshin

Posts: 1081

I'm waiting for Kyashu so you'll have to wait Bob, the Britain chapter is on hold for now...

I am on that sorry for delay just been off net I shall post tonight.and nce again sowie

2008-10-30 02:54:00

Author:
Kyashu

Posts: 447

since where all doing it

2008-10-30 03:13:00

Author:
Thee-Flash

Posts: 3154

Got to join my partner with this- Flash. To the batmobile!

2008-10-30 10:42:00

Author:
TheArmedReaper

Posts: 1543

Noticing that the rest of the crew is sleeping and will not wake to even the greatest noise Rain decided to take care of this by himself, or well at least start. He hoped on to the main deck and took the wheel and turned the slightly starboard. He was aiming for the back of the ship so he could swivel around it to the starboard side of the ship and get some really good shots on the ship. As the ship drifted closer Rain loaded one of his highley experimental explosive rounds in his rifle and waited for the right moment to fire. The ship was nearing the back and just as it did Rain turned the wheel hard port and while doing this shot his round strait throught the back off this ship, through the hull and hit one of the metal supports of the hull beneath and just outside of the water causing the round to make a large explosion and put a giant hole in the bottom of the ship. It started to sink. That was good but there still would be the entire crew to wipe out because it was doubtful that anyone was in the hull when the explosion went off. so that none of them could alert to our presence. This he would need to the rest of the crew to help him with and hopefully they heard to explosion and if so then they should be up on deck in a few moments...

2008-11-01 17:51:00

Author:
RAINFIRE

Posts: 1101

LBPCentral Archive Statistics

Posts: 1077139 Threads: 69970 Members: 9661 Archive-Date: 2019-01-19

Datenschutz

Aus dem Archiv wurden alle persönlichen Daten wie Name, Anschrift, Email etc. - aber auch sämtliche Inhalte wie z.B. persönliche Nachrichten - entfernt.
Die Nutzung dieser Webseite erfolgt ohne Speicherung personenbezogener Daten. Es werden keinerlei Cookies, Logs, 3rd-Party-Plugins etc. verwendet.