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Tomb of Doomchimpskylark
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv342/chimpskylark/APhoto_1.jpgSurvive the tomb of doom for as long as possible to gain a big 'ole high score by switching layers and avoiding the oncoming spiky rams. (Its a survival challenge)
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv342/chimpskylark/ICON0.png

Hello everyone! I've totally revamped an old level of mine, and now I'd like to share it with al you lovely folk. Its only a short survival challenge so it shouldn't take up too much of your time.

If you could play it and give some feeback I'd happily return the favour. Cheers! Here's some screenshots...

http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv342/chimpskylark/APhoto_2-1.jpg
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv342/chimpskylark/APhoto_1.jpg
http://i698.photobucket.com/albums/vv342/chimpskylark/APhoto_3-2.jpg
2010-08-09 11:51:00

Author:
chimpskylark
Posts: 335


Very nice looking remake. I checked out this one and the original one for comparison and I have to say its a solid revamp!
The camera angle is the most noticeable improvement followed by the spike timing has been synced a lot better and faster.
The graphic upgrade gives it a much more cinematic feel.

If i was to say anything needs improvement the "start" button still feels kinda tacked on and lacking texture wise compared to the rest, but that's more of a minor detail.
All in all nicely done and a great improvement <3 4/5 stars from me!

If you get the chance please F4F my level : steampunk caverns platformer
2010-08-09 16:58:00

Author:
Unknown User


I don't play a lot of survivals, so my feedback might be useful.
Aw dang I died.

+ Visuals (apart from "start" sign) are awesome. I even dressed accordingly in my aztec tribal guy.
+ Nice magic mouth text and character.

The thing I don't like about survivals is the repetitiveness. Yours kind of has this, but it a play doesn't last long enough for the player to notice, so that's good.
I would have liked to see some more variation in the obstacles maybe?
Wow I am bad at reviewing survivals. haha, sorry. I feel bad asking for a whole level play in return. You could post something in my sig link if you don't have the time for my level.

I played your original too, the revamp is light years ahead of it, it could be mistaken for a MM story survival level.

F4F link (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=12795-F4F-quot-sound-n-space!-quot-An-experiment-in-navigating-via-sound-%28with-pictures!%29)
2010-08-11 14:16:00

Author:
midnight_heist
Posts: 2513


It seems to me like a very pretty level I'll will be sure to play this definantly. By the way, how did you get the level badge photo? lol2010-08-11 18:04:00

Author:
XXGrEEn0Xx
Posts: 75


@Midnight_Heist

I agree with him im not really the survival type because people overdo it but yours had a endin even though i just used front & middle layer but overall it was fun & i got #1..:star::star::star::star:

F4F My level Comix Zone:Night of The Mutants
2010-08-11 22:03:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


Thanks for playing my Pollen Maiden.

I played your level and I like how it looks really like a tomb. Good job.
Simple yet fun!!

5 Starred because mini-games are meant to be bite sized fun!
Hearted also - Good luck
2010-08-12 04:14:00

Author:
Count
Posts: 315


I like the simple premise, and it looks really great! I think at the moment there's not a whole lot to do on it... just jump up, down, up, down. Perhaps include some variety (something flying through the air, maybe even a "powerup"?

I give it :star::star::star:!

If you like, please leave feedback on my level: Commander Keen: Goodbye Galaxy - Part I (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=32124-Commander-Keen-Goodbye-Galaxy-Part-I)
2010-08-12 04:40:00

Author:
Ryhas
Posts: 179


The visuals looked great, and the idea is simple but good, but there is a very recognizable pattern that detracts from the fun. May I suggest implementing a random switch. LBPC's logic pack has a premade one that will probably work.2010-08-13 00:36:00

Author:
RagTagPwner
Posts: 344


Oh, by the way I played your Dr. Strangelove (or how I learned to stop worrying and... LOVE THE BOMB<3) level. I love that movie... The level is flippin' sweet, my favorite survival challenge ever. Mostly because of the movie, but it still played well.2010-08-13 00:40:00

Author:
RagTagPwner
Posts: 344


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