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Forgotten Factory by Coxy224 ***SPOTLIGHTE*******

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Forgotten FactoryCoxy224
When a factory mysteriously loses all power, Sackboy is sent to investigate. But can he restore power in a variety of puzzling challenges and find out who is behind the lockdowns?
The basic premise of my level this time around is to carry a battery through a factory, activating various bits of machinery that will help you get to the next section. There's quite a bit of depth, with two different battery symbols that mean different things, as well as a lose, simple story to follow.

A lot of work went into getting all of this right, so hopefully you all enjoy playing it and leave some feedback

Also - MULTIPLE ENDINGSSSS!!!!

<3

Oh and F4F for everybody!!
<3
2010-08-08 19:20:00

Author:
Coxy224
Posts: 2645


I will play this very soon...Most, if not all, of your levels are really good and I'm sure this one won't disappoint! 2010-08-08 19:45:00

Author:
Night Angel
Posts: 1214


Hey Coxy
I really entertaining level, with great visuals and gameplay. I had a few hiccups along the way though. One was 5 seconds into the level, lol. I grabbed the 1st battery from the pedalstal from the left, and pulled it down. I was then stuck, and could not move on. I restarted. You may want to make the bottom half of the pedalstal thin layer, so as to avoid that issue. I then went on and had no problems till the "boss battle" or The robot who was causing the problems area. I went up, saw a checkpoint gate and jumped down in front of it to activate it, and then I was stuck in the little area below which is covered with gas. Did I do something wrong? Was I suppose to walk pass the gate or what? I couldn't figure it out, so I left the level. DARN, so close to the end too. I really liked it all the way to that point though, awesome!
2010-08-08 20:23:00

Author:
kaiju_kid
Posts: 329


Yay a new coxy level! im going to play this now!2010-08-08 21:47:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


Hey Coxy
I really entertaining level, with great visuals and gameplay. I had a few hiccups along the way though. One was 5 seconds into the level, lol. I grabbed the 1st battery from the pedalstal from the left, and pulled it down. I was then stuck, and could not move on. I restarted. You may want to make the bottom half of the pedalstal thin layer, so as to avoid that issue. I then went on and had no problems till the "boss battle" or The robot who was causing the problems area. I went up, saw a checkpoint gate and jumped down in front of it to activate it, and then I was stuck in the little area below which is covered with gas. Did I do something wrong? Was I suppose to walk pass the gate or what? I couldn't figure it out, so I left the level. DARN, so close to the end too. I really liked it all the way to that point though, awesome!

Same thing with me
2010-08-08 21:53:00

Author:
blueyu2
Posts: 62


Well Coxy, you did it again! While I would love to give you some feedback, I think I rather tell you of a more major problem: the checkpoint after the Finish Gate doesn't do anything!

I finished a majority of the level, but in that last section alone I got stuck, so I couldn't pass the level.

Overall, I rated it :star::star::star::star: and a <3. Great job, but please fix this problem.
2010-08-08 22:39:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


Great level all the way through but when you jump down that part at the end you die and then get stuck i didn't rate because i didn't finish the level.

oh and you might want to add some glass or thin layers over the place's you dont want people to go like the part where the bridge moves across i got stuck in where it was before it moved across, if that makes any sence
2010-08-09 02:00:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


Yeah, awesome level, but I got stuck near where you meet the baddy.

I'm assuming you're meant to hold onto the battery and fall down there, but I hit some gas and died and I couldn't get back down.

What I suggest is putting a thin layer of glass infront of the checkpoint bit so if you die, you can still get back down there
2010-08-09 16:43:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hi. Coxy! Very cool level, but I also stucked near final generator. What is wrong?2010-08-10 12:11:00

Author:
Domik12
Posts: 838


I don't think I'm going to play this until the problems are fixed. I'm hoping the level will be good once fixed though.2010-08-11 00:11:00

Author:
Nuffles
Posts: 132


Okay guys, thanks for pointing out what problems you were having - they are now (hopefully) fixed

I hope you enjoy re-playing the level if you get a chance, because there is just a small bit at the end that you missed
2010-08-11 11:41:00

Author:
Coxy224
Posts: 2645


Cool thanks coxy ill be sure to check it out soon!2010-08-12 00:13:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


Yeah, I was coming to say that I very much enjoyed your level. Also, I have gotten stuck a few different ways, I've restarted and played quite a few times. The best I've done is to make it to the end genrator and die. Even through all of this I had fun and I plan on playing a million more times to finally beat it fully. Though I need to get on and download the updated version (sadly can't do it for a couple of days). Will download when I can and provide better feedback.2010-08-12 01:00:00

Author:
Captain Rule
Posts: 360


Wow thanks for continuing to play it throughout all the problems. I've fixed most of them (hopefully) now so I'd love if people could give it another play-through and finish it. Although you only get one life in the final generator fight 2010-08-14 10:37:00

Author:
Coxy224
Posts: 2645


I've loved all your levels so far, so I assume this one will be awesome. (And speaking of factories, your a level making machine!)2010-08-14 10:55:00

Author:
Fastbro
Posts: 1277


Thanks Fastbro, I had a few days holida ywith nothing else but create time, so this one came out quite quickly with few troubles. It may be a while before my next one though, I'm getting busier! 2010-08-14 13:03:00

Author:
Coxy224
Posts: 2645


Other than a few bugs it was a good level

The one that annoyed me was that I moved the battery to the left accidently so I had to restart the level

I gave it 4 stars
2010-08-14 15:17:00

Author:
Jovuto
Posts: 2345


Hey Coxy! Just thought you'd like a few pictures...



http://i900.photobucket.com/albums/ac207/tross13/Levels/Forgotten%20Factory/2010-08-21-153.png

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2010-08-22 15:01:00

Author:
Taffey
Posts: 3187


Thanks a lot Taffey, those are some awesome pictures! 2010-08-22 15:09:00

Author:
Coxy224
Posts: 2645


Anytime! I loved this level so much I figured I owed you. 2010-08-22 15:10:00

Author:
Taffey
Posts: 3187


Unable to get second ending. Reached highscore. Memorized level layout. Lost all hope.

Kitcheninja
2010-08-22 19:32:00

Author:
kitcheninja
Posts: 211


Okay, I'm finally here to give you F4F.

Forgotten Factory
Score: 8.7/10
By: Coxy224

This was a well executed factory level.

Story: 9/10
Just trying to get the forgotten factory to have power again. Simple, but well executed.

Music/SFX Choice: 8.5/10
The music was chosen very well for this factory at first, when the race started you played that oriental sounding song, and it didn't seem to fit in. You used quite a lot of SFX which added a lot.

Appearance: 9/10
Corner editing is good, materials look great together making that "factory feeling." Sticker work was well done.

Creatures/Objects: 7/10
This was sort of an issue. The main character at the beginning was poorly made. It just didn't seem to look good. Other than that, they were okay, the battery was vague but not much could be added to it. I liked all the machines and the gears look great.

Gameplay: 7.7/10
Hmmm. Don't get me wrong with that rating. This was an all-original idea and I like how I had to keep the battery with me. But after the race started, I got stuck. The piston below didn't push the battery and I had to restart the level. Second time through, it worked, so not really sure what got messed up there. Other than that, Platforming/Puzzles are great, and fun.

Overall: 8.7/10 (not an average)
This level was fun. I'm not really sure why it is only :star::star::star: on the community moon. I really enjoyed how you created this idea and executed it very well. I think you said there are two endings to this, but I only found one. Anyways, I gave you :star::star::star::star::star:.

F4F: Go read the Hunger Games
2010-08-22 22:15:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


Hey Coxy,

Congratulations on the Community Spotlight! I really liked the fresh concept, and recharging the battery was ace. Please forget making levels on the PS3 make more levels on the PSP.

Here's a video of your fantastic level:



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jiZskWocDAs



Going and going and going,
jeffcu28
2010-08-23 16:43:00

Author:
jeffcu28
Posts: 648


Hey Coxy!!

Way to go on another spotlight, you have made some awesome levels over the last couple months, and I have had a blast playing them all.

-VJ
2010-08-23 20:16:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


Congrats on another Spotlight Coxy! This level had me scratching my head more than once, but it was always a blast working out the solution. I love the battery recharging mechanic! Really cool stuff, and please do keep the levels coming. 2010-08-29 06:18:00

Author:
Taffey
Posts: 3187


The level was just AMAZING and fun! I liked the level a lot, becouse it was fun to move the battery around the place and there were good puzles whith it. I gave it :star::star::star::star::star: and <3. GOOD WORK2010-08-30 18:19:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


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