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I just wanna know whether its actually a good idea or no. So all I am gonna do is explain plot, so yah. The story begins with the player in his/her room waking up from a dream. The player decides to get a snack but when the door to get into the hallway, instead of a hallway, its a whole new world. The world has a dark atmosphere ((yay for something that has been done so many friggen times)) and the plains are black with the mountains and cliffs grey, BUT this world isn't really all depressing and what not, the world grows stars. The player decides to explore the world ((mainly cause the way back to the room disappeared)) . Soon the player will come across a building, And for some reason the player can enter in with no alarm, and it seems like no one is in the building. After venturing through the building and a star mine that the building was connected to, the player finally meets up with a person. The player asks who is he and what is the building. The person answers that he is a worker of the building known as The Star Factory. The worker also explains what the factory does which is putting stars into the sky, and also tells the player the unfortunate news that the 5 workers that used to be in the building split up. All the worker in the building was is a janitor who was still around and cleans up the place because he loved the place, he didn't want the place to get all dirty and abandoned. Now of course due to plot, the player wants to bring back the workers so they can put stars into the sky once again. GAWSH, there is the plot, probably didn't have to explain so much, but meh.

2010-08-08 04:48:00 Author: EvilMuffinz Posts: 33

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Well it's definitely an interesting idea, odd since it starts off so cliched I can't say whether it is a good or bad idea though, that all depends on how you build it.

2010-08-08 08:36:00 Author: SR20DETDOG Posts: 2431

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Lol, the thing is that I don't really know if I am a really good builder, I could say I am, but I need people to tell me I am so it can actually be true lol.

2010-08-08 19:16:00 Author: EvilMuffinz Posts: 33

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Lol, the thing is that I don't really know if I am a really good builder, I could say I am, but I need people to tell me I am so it can actually be true lol. It's how good you build it, although that does help, but just simply how.

2010-08-09 07:02:00 Author: SR20DETDOG Posts: 2431

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Oh, I get what you mean, thanks for the advice

2010-08-09 08:31:00 Author: EvilMuffinz Posts: 33

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Nice idea and preview man! This can shape up to be a really neat level. So Just a few points: - you may want to make it so that the stars in the intro don't bang off the ground. the sound detracts from the visual experience in my opinion -Lower the lazery sound on the light thingy over the block emitter. it can be annoying if one stays too long in that area -I would stiffen the lift on the right hand side of the building so it doesn't sway. You have skills. For a preview of your first level its pretty **** good. keep up the good work

2010-08-09 23:34:00 Author: MegaBlob Posts: 291

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This idea is very good but if your not a confident creator then you should try to get a little help if you want the idea to turn into a masterpeice

2010-08-09 23:58:00 Author: The master mind Posts: 37

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Yah, it would help to build with others, I am no good with making puzzles lol I don't know what kinds to put y'know?

2010-08-10 02:11:00 Author: EvilMuffinz Posts: 33

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