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The Mysterious Swamp Part 1: A Snowy Good Daypsman012 Part 1 in my miniseries! GASP a girl goes missing, and it is your job to find her! Not the best level at all, but I am expecting some pretty positive reviews Thanks for checking it out, I will check out yours too!

2010-08-07 02:50:00 Author: psman012 Posts: 106

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I'd like to see a bit of story at the beginning so we know we're actually looking for a girl. It's in your description, but I'd like to see something within the level. Make sure you hide your logic and underworkings (magic mouths, global lighting setting, etc.) The boss still emitted electric spheres after I killed him (not to mention, I can go around them) We shot the girl on accident and beheaded her... O.O Details and scenery needs work. Use stickers and multiple types of materials in one place. Not to mention, the corner editor is your friend. Nothing's terribly wrong with the level, and I didn't run into any glitches. I can see this has potential. For now it's :star::star:. Keep making levels! If you would kindly give feedback on my level: Commander Keen: Goodbye Galaxy - Part I (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=32124-Commander-Keen-Goodbye-Galaxy-Part-I)

2010-08-08 23:22:00 Author: Ryhas Posts: 179

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I'd like to see a bit of story at the beginning so we know we're actually looking for a girl. It's in your description, but I'd like to see something within the level. Make sure you hide your logic and underworkings (magic mouths, global lighting setting, etc.) The boss still emitted electric spheres after I killed him (not to mention, I can go around them) We shot the girl on accident and beheaded her... O.O Details and scenery needs work. Use stickers and multiple types of materials in one place. Not to mention, the corner editor is your friend. Nothing's terribly wrong with the level, and I didn't run into any glitches. I can see this has potential. For now it's :star::star:. Keep making levels! If you would kindly give feedback on my level: Commander Keen: Goodbye Galaxy - Part I (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=32124-Commander-Keen-Goodbye-Galaxy-Part-I) Thanks for the honest review! I will go back and fix these things over the next couple of days I will check out your level too!

2010-08-09 14:09:00 Author: psman012 Posts: 106

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Thanks for the honest review! I will go back and fix these things over the next couple of days I will check out your level too! And thanks for taking it so well! Criticism isn't always easy to take (especially from me, if you ask my friends). That fact alone makes you a better creator than someone who creates a four-star level and won't listen to anyone. The_Adipose and Luos_Desruc really helped me with their videos here (http://www.youtube.com/user/MrMorris1980). Be sure you look through the incredibly useful tutorials! I look forward to your feedback on my level. Thanks!

2010-08-09 15:50:00 Author: Ryhas Posts: 179

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