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Fun Run!ChristianReid09
Some of my fond lbp memories, some recreated story ideas and some original, Medium difficluty
I am willing to do 50 F4F with this level xD and would very much apreciate if u tell me good points and bad points and how much :star: (BY THE WAY if you have seen it is cus my bad freind no onger freinds stole it some how and gave it to cmh95 was on plage 1 for 1 day today but off now thankfully)
2010-08-05 22:47:00

Author:
Unknown User


I will try it out it sounds "fun"
See what i did Thar :kz:
2010-08-06 00:07:00

Author:
Snrm
Posts: 6419


Yes :o lol2010-08-06 00:31:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hey this was a fun race level however I felt it used stuff thats been done before. Many races use primary colors and at one point it simply felt like i was playing the wilderness level. Still, polished and fun, 4/5!

Review my "Granite Gardens" if you get the chance! Thanks!
2010-08-06 01:52:00

Author:
Lockstitch
Posts: 415


wow everything was original or i havnt seen lol, and the only bad part is it ended i wanted it to never stop 5 star and heart2010-08-06 12:59:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hey ChristianReid09, I went through your level and I enjoyed it. Here are my notes:

Overall a good race level. Not too much outstanding about it, but then not bad either.

The major thing I ran into was during the "conveyor belt" with the electric purple things that smash you... the emitted platforms got messed up and were only emitted when I stood near the beginning of the conveyor belt. I just ran past it and onto the wheels that moved them. I'm not sure if that's what you wanted.

The other major thing is, and this was in your description, but I felt as though I was just playing the original LBP levels and therefore none of the obstacles were difficult. I like that you put your own "prime colors" spin on it, and that it's not just ripped straight from the original levels, but it all felt much too familiar to me. I know that was the point, though, so I can't take off too much for that.

I enjoyed some of the puzzles that you created, and finding the secret Afro Boys was pretty cool too.

Anyway, good level. Four stars!

Please review my level, Commander Keen: Goodbye Galaxy - Part I (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=32124-Commander-Keen-Goodbye-Galaxy-Part-I)

All the best,

Ryhas
2010-08-06 16:25:00

Author:
Ryhas
Posts: 179


The rocket ship ride at the start was awesome, i thought most of the gameplay was good but i got lost a couple times lol, so for me it was a 4 star level2010-08-06 17:29:00

Author:
Unknown User


Try leaving other people's feedback on THEIR threads, not your own

2010-08-06 17:30:00

Author:
standby250
Posts: 1113


Try leaving other people's feedback on THEIR threads, not your own



Will do next time, sorry im new
2010-08-06 18:19:00

Author:
Unknown User


Try leaving other people's feedback on THEIR threads, not your own




Will do next time, sorry im new

That would be great if you could still do so! The link is in my last post or in my signature. Thanks for playing, and I'm glad you thought it was four stars. I appreciate it!
2010-08-06 18:24:00

Author:
Ryhas
Posts: 179


no probs dude 2010-08-06 19:19:00

Author:
Unknown User


Tried this level out... cute. I understand this is basically an homage to MM's story levels. I like the little spins you put on things here and there, and that was enough to make it worthwhile. Visually speaking, the simple color scheme works enough, but I really like the style you went for in the construction area. The way you designed the bricks was very clever and worked great.

Few problem areas: The part with the little ball that rolls down after you press a button - you know, you press the button and a bumper hits the ball and then as it rolls down other bumpers hit it? Sometimes the ball loses momentum and can't make it to end, breaking the level completely.

As mentioned, the conveyor belt has some issues with the emissions. They get funny and / or stop.

The jump platform after the little rotary puzzle doesn't work so well... At least have some kind of indication of when it's supposed to go off. It's in such wide intervals and happens so abrubtly it took me a bit to realize there was no sensor switch setting it off.

All in all, good level but a little unpolished.
2010-08-06 19:50:00

Author:
Foofles
Posts: 2278


Out of all the colored levels that uses White as a outline yours was by far the best because most people use that style in R1 Races (Boring) & you took that style to more of a fun way to play it with platforming you did amazing job:

Positives:
+ Platforming
+ Timer at the end of the level
+ level Design
+ Gameplay

Overall Awesome Job::star::star::star::star::star:
Play & F4F my level Comix Zone
2010-08-07 03:45:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


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