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kings of argno 2

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kings of argno 2beasty23jk
when the explosion of the spacestation happened you landed on an unknown planet to your sackboy the you meet the second king and do his obsticle course if you ace the course you get a rebel spy award that you can put in your levels and get 20 xp for a pic then try to meet the king of sky in a duel. if you don't ace the course you get no object cause of logic that i made called the ace lock.
play and rate please post video if you can thanks
2010-08-04 16:20:00

Author:
lbp is awespme
Posts: 657


I'm not gonna play this. :I
Its only been a few days since you released kings of argno 1!!!
You really need to put time into your levels and not rush them!!!
Hope that helps!
2010-08-04 18:20:00

Author:
Jovuto
Posts: 2345


accutuly about two weeks2010-08-04 18:32:00

Author:
lbp is awespme
Posts: 657


hey i played your level and i still dont get the story its a tiny bit better than the other one because you dragged a few corners on some shapes but its a bit all over the place and looked like you tryed to copy other peoples levels in some place's.

better but still not that good sorry. try to corner edit so some shapes so they are rounder not blocky.
2010-08-05 00:59:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


i like blockey shapes. ya i plan the third one next month after the rftc and ywmtmw cause i kinda want to include the whelly good sticker in the begining as a kind of showey offey look wut i caqn do stage. lol no but really oh and argno three has another name : kings of argno 3: the war of the kings2010-08-05 02:29:00

Author:
lbp is awespme
Posts: 657


Yes well dont expect a wheelie good sticker just because you entered the comp. And it dosn't seem like your taking in anything i say, next time stick with three main materials you are going to use in the level make sure they look good together and dont just use basic wood platforms, not many people like blocky materials when they are ment to be grass, dirt or rock. next time dont just spend a little while on your creation unless it looks like a good level. well i have givin you alot of advice i just hope you take it in this time, dont get me wrong im glad you did some corner editing on this level but it wasn't enough.2010-08-05 03:10:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


You really should listen to Sketch. He knows what he's talking about. One thing that could help is to play some really good levels, and make sure your levels look at least almost as good. Don't assume people will be satisfied with your level when there are too so many awesome ones out there. Seriously, use correct grammar, AT LEAST in your levels. It's not that bad if you use bad grammar elsewhere, but it makes your level look super trashy if you don't take the time to use correct grammar. I hope you take my advice and it helps you in some way.2010-08-05 03:32:00

Author:
Nuffles
Posts: 132


well i will work on that with the third one you guys are lucky i didn't torture you with glokenpop.2010-08-05 03:55:00

Author:
lbp is awespme
Posts: 657


Seriously, use correct grammar, AT LEAST in your levels.

ROFL.

Anyways, lbpisawespme I have nothing against you even though you think I do, but honestly you gotta put more effort into your levels. Nobody likes seeing blocky stuff or bad grammar. I played this level and did not understand any of the story. You just threw stuff out there, I think you mentioned poo's destiny, but why would you mention someone else's creation? It didn't fit in and I'd make something more original. Still to this day, I believe everybody has potential in creating but it just takes effort!
2010-08-05 04:15:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


Hi, lbp is awespme. I tried your level. Very blocky, some strange story line, nice characters (how made them???) and not very interesting gameplay. I think you must spend more time on story line and environments of your levels.2010-08-05 08:28:00

Author:
Domik12
Posts: 838


the characters are by ali2010-08-05 08:38:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


well the good charectors are but all the kings are by me. anyway third one being started now. i tried updating the first one in create mode but it got glitched . no update boo ho. anyway i mentiond the ship to teleport you to the third moon.2010-08-05 22:28:00

Author:
lbp is awespme
Posts: 657


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