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Haunted Wilderness

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Haunted Wildernessgewoonmaurice
The Wilderness is haunted with darkness and mist. There are no animals to see and metal and stone turned the area in a sad place. You are the one to safe the wilderness from evil. The obstacles you will find make it a good challenge.
This is my first level. I hope I can get some good feedback, so I can work even harder on my new level.
2010-07-31 14:44:00

Author:
gewoonmaurice
Posts: 10


Sounds awesome! Im adding this to my play list, and ill give you some feed back when I play it2010-07-31 16:36:00

Author:
grayspence
Posts: 1990


Thank you! 2010-07-31 19:07:00

Author:
gewoonmaurice
Posts: 10


Oh okay its understandable its your first level & I would like to say good job for 1st time did better then I did when I first made mine XD....

Positives:
- probably the bike ride even though the loop wasnt smooth

Negatives:
-Short
-Built to close 2 ground
-Didn't understand the tanks being in the wilderness??

Sugguestions:
- Always build your level off the ground because alot of time is looks better..
- Also before you publish a level have a friend test it for you & give you feedback if you need someone to do that for you add me Sabre_ ill come test it anytime.
- last thing make sure you level at least make since like when you said animals were gone wat happened to them for them to disappear? tanks kinda threw it off but good job for 1st time

Overall I gave you:star::star::star: keep up the work
2010-07-31 19:27:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


What do you mean with the bike ride? Thanks for your feedback and time! This should help a lot already. I will add you in my friend list.2010-07-31 20:38:00

Author:
gewoonmaurice
Posts: 10


What do you mean with the bike ride? Thanks for your feedback and time! This should help a lot already. I will add you in my friend list.

ohhh sorry lol the bike thing was someone elses level sorry
2010-07-31 21:34:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


There goes my +

Can I still change the topic to a F4F topic?
2010-07-31 21:47:00

Author:
gewoonmaurice
Posts: 10


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