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fade to blacknosemomkey hey! yes my friends... i've made another emo level Now, i have a bunch of stuff i want to talk about in this thread, and i will try to say (or type) 'em all... first, i want to apologize you all: i've spend like 1 month withouth replying, posting or comenting to create this level and... well... i think in 1 month i should have done a smashing level with the biggest creations ever and those kinds of stuff, and well, although this level is twice the side of fear of the dark (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=29422-fear-of-the-dark) it is as good, and i was supposed to make a better level... then, i want to thank lots of people becouse i've "borrowed" some ideas from other levels, so, here are the people (i'll edit if i remember more): -velcrojonze (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/member.php?8887-VelcroJonze) -thisisinsane (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/member.php?9345-ThisIsInsane) -sha-ja (no LBPC account) -amazingflyingpoo (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/member.php?3639-amazingflyingpoo) -alismuffin (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/member.php?9339-ali985) -bluebulletbill (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/member.php?8280-BlueBulletBill) -thenerd (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/member.php?8628-TheNerd) -etc... and now the level itself... another simple story: the objects in LBP are fading out and, when the fading ends, they just become static, you, as a brave sack will end this illness before the whole LBPlanet fades to black! hope you like it, and if you do... then rate :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: and <3

2010-07-29 21:38:00 Author: nosemomkey Posts: 414

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This level was good! You really have potential! Story: 9/10 Story was great! I liked how it was a disease that made objects static, clever and original for all I know, I'm pretty sure you're the first to use it. I knocked you down a point because there were many and I mean many misspelled words, also pretty much no capitalization. Music/SFX Choice: 7/10 Music was an okay choice, I'm not sure the oriental flavor music went with the volcano, and Glokenpop at the end...? Really? lol, just advice: don't use that song. I would of really liked to have some SFX throughout there. Corner Editing/Material Use: 8/10 I loved the material use how everything was black, the volcano material was good, and I really liked how everything became colorful at the end. Corner editing was okay, but nothing special. Creatures/Objects: 9/10 The "people" or whatever they were, were really cool. I liked the one with the glasses locked up, being a person that wears glasses I also really liked the scattered butterflies flying around at the end. Gameplay: 8/10 It was good. Bring food to people, pull levers, grab objects, the usual. I didn't really understand the paste white stickers on walls at first, I'm not sure if posting more than one on each wall would get me more bubbles or not, a clarification on that would be nice. Also, another big problem I had was not knowing what levers did sometimes. I'd use a magic mouth triggered by the lever so the player knows what the lever did. Overall: 7.9/10 (not an average) I liked this level, I really did. The black everything was cool, and the level was a great length, it took me around 5 minutes or so. I'm not sure what you mean by "this was an emo level.... But anyways, I gave you :star::star::star::star::star: cause I'm nice . Keep up the good work! F4F: It'd be great if you'd check out my Patapon level, it's in my sig.

2010-07-30 02:53:00 Author: anoken Posts: 1654

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Music/SFX Choice: 7/10 Music was an okay choice, I'm not sure the oriental flavor music went with the volcano, and Glokenpop at the end...? Really? lol, just advice: don't use that song. I would of really liked to have some SFX throughout there. Creatures/Objects: 9/10 The "people" or whatever they were, were really cool. I liked the one with the glasses locked up, being a person that wears glasses I also really liked the scattered butterflies flying around at the end. Gameplay: 8/10 It was good. Bring food to people, pull levers, grab objects, the usual. I didn't really understand the paste white stickers on walls at first, I'm not sure if posting more than one on each wall would get me more bubbles or not, a clarification on that would be nice. Also, another big problem I had was not knowing what levers did sometimes. I'd use a magic mouth triggered by the lever so the player knows what the lever did. Overall: 7.9/10 (not an average) I liked this level, I really did. The black everything was cool, and the level was a great length, it took me around 5 minutes or so. I'm not sure what you mean by "this was an emo level.... But anyways, I gave you :star::star::star::star::star: cause I'm nice . Keep up the good work! F4F: It'd be great if you'd check out my Patapon level, it's in my sig. Ok, first let me explain the glokenpop: no actual reason, really! i think glokenpop is a good song to every happy ending, cuz... it is a happy song the creatures: the only thing i have to say is that i had the idea of the glasses is from playthenerd (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/member.php?8628-TheNerd) (remind me to put his name on the helpers list ) and the butterflies... well that was without a doupt my favourite part of the whole level, i just love the way they fly back and forth ok, sorry if the level got confusing at some parts, if i see too much people complainting about it i'll do ver. 1.1 and well, i consider this an emo level becouse, like fear of the dark (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=29422-fear-of-the-dark)... it involves darkness and black and those kinds of stuff... oh, and im going to check your level right now

2010-07-30 11:41:00 Author: nosemomkey Posts: 414

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Hi, nosemomkey! Very nice level! Interesting story, cool level mechanics. Some obstacles a little bit difficult, but all can be solved. I gave you five stars and heart for this level! Well done! And I will look for new levels from you!

2010-07-30 12:38:00 Author: Domik12 Posts: 838

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...Some obstacles a little bit difficult, but all can be solved. I gave you five stars and heart for this level! Well done! And I will look for new levels from you! hey domik, thanks for the feedback, you know, i've made the obstacles a little dificult becouse i wanted this to be a great level that made you spend lots of time and work on it, happy you enjoyed it

2010-07-31 17:00:00 Author: nosemomkey Posts: 414

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Ok, here's my feedback as I play through... I like the idea of the material disease, it's unique! Nice platforming so far... The character is cool, though he'll probably end up giving me nightmares.... GRAAAAH! That grabby bit is annoying me! *Tries for the 50th time* Ok, I got up..... Wait? I have to go down again GRRRRRR! The outside section is a little confusing, I don't what I'm supposed to be doing... Ok, the volcano area has a lovely effect. Nice work! That scientist guy'll definitely give me nightmares! Houses are very poo style! Ok, level done! Fun Factor: 6 (Quite fun, but frustrating at times...) Design: 7 (There were some lovely sections here. Especially the characters!) Originality: 9 (Very original though I think it could've been implimented better...) Totalm Score: 7 (Nice work! 4 stars!)

2010-09-16 20:30:00 Author: Fastbro Posts: 1277

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Ok, here's my feedback as I play through... I like the idea of the material disease, it's unique! Nice platforming so far... The character is cool, though he'll probably end up giving me nightmares.... GRAAAAH! That grabby bit is annoying me! *Tries for the 50th time* Ok, I got up..... Wait? I have to go down again GRRRRRR! The outside section is a little confusing, I don't what I'm supposed to be doing... Ok, the volcano area has a lovely effect. Nice work! That scientist guy'll definitely give me nightmares! Houses are very poo style! Ok, level done! Fun Factor: 6 (Quite fun, but frustrating at times...) Design: 7 (There were some lovely sections here. Especially the characters!) Originality: 9 (Very original though I think it could've been implimented better...) Totalm Score: 7 (Nice work! 4 stars!) ok, thanks a lot for the feedback fastbro! thanks for all the good stuff up there and now... why do these monks or whatever they are scare you so much, i find them funny/cute and then, sorry about the boring part in the monk palace, but the level isnt actually long, so i had to find a way to brun time oh, and sorry about the confusing parts too, but what could i do? i even letted an arrow in there so people dont get lost in their way to the vulcano, but, well, sorry overall thanks for the 4 :star: and for the play(s) !!!

2010-09-16 21:16:00 Author: nosemomkey Posts: 414

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Man, I am so sorry I haven't checked this out yet! You posted this on the day that I flew back to America after being in China for 9 months, so it couldn't have been at a worse time for me, so I'll use that as my excuse I currently cannot access the internet with my PSP. I had a chance this last weekend but I was busy enough that I didn't get to grab any levels. I will hopefully have access very soon because we are moving again and we will be somewhere that has wireless that PSP likes. I'm sorry it has taken me this long and I hope that I can get you some feedback soon! Thanks so much for the feedback on Greenie Go Home

2010-09-16 23:18:00 Author: amazingflyingpoo Posts: 1515

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