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Tribute race to my son Jakob
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| Tribute race to my son JakobDorsk-81 I have decided to design my first level (a race) out of my new son Jakob's name - start at J and race through to the end of B. Sounds simple enough but I've added a few switches and obstacles in the way to make it trickier  http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4120/4793711177_138c170ac4.jpg I have partially created this level for the Create trophy however I also wanted to give level design a go and found it great fun! As my description says, this is a race through my first child's name whilst avoiding the obstacles etc. I appreciate that first attempts are not perfect to would welcome any feedback here or in game. A little hint for you is that the A is not as tricky as it first seems... http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4082/4794344454_883cf0f1ba.jpg I'm also currently in the process of designing a series of quiz-based levels and would appreciate any ideas for topics. I'll try to play as many levels here as my son/wife allows however by all means let me know if you want me to play yours in return and I'll prioritise it | 2010-07-29 13:36:00 Author: Dorsk-81  Posts: 7 |
| Hey, I'd say not bad for a first go at a level. It was a fun little race. The only big problem I would point out is your lack of checkpoints. Its very frustration for the player to have to start all over when they die, and this will result in people just quitting your levels and rating it poorly. Maybe place one in each letter? | 2010-07-29 15:19:00 Author: Lockstitch  Posts: 415 |
| A valid point. I placed one in the K (upper limb) as like a marker of progress however if you reckon 1 per letter may be better then I'll modify it slightly. Maybe at jetpack of A and beginning of B? | 2010-07-29 19:17:00 Author: Dorsk-81 Posts: 7 |
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