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Oh Snap! I forgot you guys! I can make it up to you, I swear! (Types up first 10 chapters) Okay, I forgot you guys! Here is my apology... Chapters 2-4 ----------------------------------------------------- Chapter Two: President Chickin -Rekon?s Point of View- I laughed. ?Well Rekon,? Daddio grinned, ?It's been ages! You seen a doctor yet?? ?No,? I frowned, as we leaped on a bounce pad in synchronization, ?I can?t even afford one.? ?Yeah, well maybe you?ll get lucky,? He replied, ?And get ported to one of the treasure levels, and make it to the end.? ?Yeah,? I replied sarcastically, ?And LittleBigFoot is real.? ?You gotta take a chance and believe,? He said very seriously. That was rare for him. Seriousness was his worst enemy. ?You don't seriously believe in LittleBigFoot?? I asked in suprise. The answer never came. Daddio was glaring at me, and focusing on nothing else. Not even avoiding the hazards below him. LittleBigFoot Believers never got anywhere, and this was proof. -Itastelikechikin?s Point of View- I walked into the office, threw off the suit and jumped into the president?s chair. Well, now that the election was over, it was my chair. That?s right, I had set my roots as a simple LittleBigWorkshop Contributor. This was easy at first. I shared important information with LBP. Soon, the numbers started going up rapidly. Eventually, I started setting records. Everyone I knew kudoed me. I became the first contributor with 10,000 posts, with the other two most popular authors following closely behind. Eventually, LittleBigWorkshop decided LittleBigPlanet needed a leader. So they held the first official election of LBW. It was everything I needed to get a boost into leadership. I made speeches, led a rocking campain, and worked hard. Soon, even Team EPIC was on my side. And for once in the politics world, someone told the truth. Now, after being picked in the election, I was president. ?Hey, Miffy?, I shouted, ?Bring me the Book of Education Law? My new assistant dropped all my luggage. ?The Book of Education Law hasn?t been touched in forever!? She exclaimed, ?Not since SBGRS was developed!? ?Well,? I said with a smile, ?A change or two couldn?t hurt. After, all, I was elected president. What good would I be if all I did was keep things the way they were?? "Well...? Miffy said nervously, ?I guess I have to bring it to you. But I do not support the idea of a new education system.? ?Neither did Rekkanoryujji or Joshua_is_wicked.?, I said, ? And yet I was the one elected president of LittleBigPlanet.? Miffy sighed.?Wery well then. Here?s the book,? she said as she walked over to the vault, twisted the knob, and opened it up. She pulled out a blue book, and gave it to me. ?Would you like your red pen,? Miffy asked, ?Or your laptop, President Chickin?? ?Get them both,? I said, ?I might need to make a few changes? -The Destroyer?s Point of View- I checked on the percentage again. 67% complete. Bored, I dragged in a few more files to the program. It was nearly ready, as it leaped up to 75%. The Virus was so close to done. Soon, LittleBigPlanet would be in ashes. And it would be all my ?fault?. ?Destroyer Sir,? The LittleBigAuthority said, running up to me, ? What do you want me to do with the level I just finished?? ?Leave it on the ?My Moon?,? I said, ?And report back to your leader.? ?You mean...?, He began. ?Yes,? I replied, ? Him.? ?Yes sir!?, He replied,? I?ll get right on it!? ?Wait up!? I said, getting up from the computer, ?Have you inserted the scoreboard?? ?Exactly where you said!? He replied. ?Excellent...? I said mysteriously, ?The world will soon be mine, sea, to shining sea.? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Chapter 3: I Forgot the Name of This Chapter -Rekon's Point of View- I scoffed. Who need a LittleBigFoot Believer anyway? Angrily, I leaped over another platform. LittleBigFoot was so fake! I would sooner eat my yellow shoes than believe in LittleBigFoot! ?Enough cursing under your breath,? I mumbled, ?Just finish the dang level.? - The Destroyer?s Point of View - 50% complete. The computer dinged to 100%. In satisfaction, I insterted the USB port. The Virus would then load onto the Port, and I would carry out the next part of the plan. And then, things would get interesting. -CALLmeFORduty?s Point of View- The soldier in front of me looked innocent. ?Sir, The Destroyer wanted me to tell you that the scoreboard was in place,? He mumbled quietly, ?And that your part was nearly ready to be carried out.? ?What was that about a part??, I said angrily, ?I didn?t quite hear, or understand exactly what you made the mistake of telling me.? ?It's ready.?, He said, louder, but obviously trying to be quiet. ?Very well then,? I replied, glaring at him, ?Now, do you know what that part... the job I've been assigned... is?? ?N-N-N-No s-s-sir.? He replied, shaking with fear. ?Look in the top drawer?, I said, with a smile creeping up my face. ?But... Sir...?, He chattered. ?No buts,? I interupted, ?Just look." He walked cautiously toward the drawer. I got up out of my seat, and walked away from my desk with my phone and paperwork. With a shaking hand, he grasped the handle. Slowly, he pulled on the drawer, and it creaked as it slid on the track. I heard a satisfying click, as it was pulled to it's full extent. ?Go on,? I grinned, ?Reach in there.? ?Goodbye, sir...? He said as he reached in. Then, there was a flash, as the desk jolted, and the sound of an explosive went off, then the satisfying fizz of a sackboy disinegrating. ?Another perfect death, Police Chief Duty,? I mumbled to myself, ?Anther great death.? Now, it was time to gather the rest of them. I would need a big army for this job. So I walked out, ignoring the fact that someone had blown up in my office. After all, I was working for The Destroyer. I had to focus on tolerating the terrible jobs he gave me. There was no time for mercy. -Rekon?s Point of View- I ran for my life. When I died this time, I was ported to The Mines, in ?The Canyons? section of story mode. Of course, I got stuck with a level acer. Yep. That meant while I was peeing my pants, I was being pulled further into a death trap. Then there was the freaking burning golf ball. I nearly cr@pped my pants. Then the moron took me to The Bunker. *Shivers* Never again. Have you tried the flippin wheel of pain? I was nearly killed so many times? Yeah, SBGRS was the most worthless, terrible... I scaled a platform on the Gardens level, ?Get A Grip?. ...pain-inducing, rag-headed, memory-loss causing... I approached the scoreboard. ...horrible, terrible, and the saddest excuse for an educational system, ever to be run by eggheads. I finished the level. The PSN User broke the mood I was in by hitting up on the D-Pad. Great. Now I was smiling. Totally the exact OPPOSITE of what I intended to be. I ported to the pod, and was brought to a level so impossible to ace, it would leave Adolf Sackler, Leader of the LittleBigNazi?s, scared for his life. That?s right. Boom Town. I mentally flipped off story mode. Then, I prayed to the LittleBigGod, Spaff_Molecule. Later... ?The explosives did it?, I said to myself, as I ported through the inside of the checkpoint system. Only Lord Spaff knew where the heck it would take me. But the second section of explosives took me down. Hard. Now, I was traveling through clear tubes for the first time in hours. But that was earlier. That was... Earlier... That... What was Earlier? I didn?t even remember. As a matter of fact, why was I moving, and... why in tubes? Where was I headed? Where did I come from? Then, everything went black. Wait, if it's just really dark, with no light, and there are no signs of color, that?s black, right? I didn?t even remember. Chapter 4: SBGRS -Itastelikechickin?s Point of View- I turned the page. It made sense now! This education system was... EPIC. ?Well, Miffy,? I said, ?I admit, this education system is practically perfet!? ?Practically??, she replied, ?What about the slit of it that isn?t perfect?? ?Well, it makes sense so far,? I said, ?And nearly genius!? ?This program, SBGRS, Or SackBoy/Girl Regeneration System sends Sackpeople to other regeneration points. When the sackperson passes through the system, their clothes are removed, and a code is left directly before the entrance.? ?They are sent halfway across the sackglobe, to a random player. They pass through a code that gives them the clothes of the sackboy/girl that just ported out. When they die, the are ported to another location. This is repeated until they reach their 1,000,000th Port, in which they are assigned to a PSN user. This is their primary education, used to give PSN-User experience. This both gives experience, and fufills the PSN-Users? need to enjoy themselves during the primary education? ?Yes,? Miffy replied, ?Now the flaw?? ?Patience Miffy,? I replied, ?I just need to confirm I understand the rest FULLY.? ?In addition, a Sackboy can request an untaken user, in order to meet up with already assigned sackboys met during SBGRS.? ?Finally, only four sackboys can be supported in a level, because during beta testing, Spaff_Molecule noticed part of a level malfunctioning when five sackboys were in a level. Spaff_Molecule only wanted the best for the community, so he made it so a level would only support a maximum capacity of four, no matter what.? ?Exactly,? Miffy replied, ?Now the FLAW?? ?I read of a disorder, in which a sackboy would lose partial memory when using this system.? I said, "How will we educate them?" ?Ha!? Miffy said, ?When this was parliamentary democracy, our leaders tried to fix this for ages! No matter what, these people couldn?t possibly be educated! What makes one man think he can fix what two centuries worth of people couldn?t?? ?SRL, Miffy.?, I replied. ?Huh?? she asked. ?SRL. Sackboy Regeneration Link. During SBGRS, A sackboy can be linked to another, so that until they both die of the same thing, they remain in a level. And when they do die, they are hyperlinked to multiplayer PSN User Groups. In the normal process, up to four individual sackboys are ported to an area. Instead, an ?SRL group? is ported to a PSN Group of players, and any of the linked players can pick up any of the the clothes code behind the checkpoint. This way, the disorder people can remember things easily when their linked partner tells them what they forgot!? ?Why, sir,? Miffy replied, speechless, ?That?s... That?s genius!? ?Well, what are you waiting for??, I said, ?Get our programmers on it instantly! Have the SackChristians prey to Spaff_Molecule for maintenance so we can launch it without disrupting PSN User fun! Get the Sackpeople of the LittleBigUSA to support this! Think of the community! The President of LittleBigUSA will complete what was he was elected for! I will get everything running right!? ?Haha?, Miffy said, ?You do that.? -The Destroyer?s Point of View- -The Detroyer's Point of View- My plan was officially 75% complete. The USB shot out of the computer. It was ready. I rang the bell. CALLmeFORduty came in. ?Police Chief Duty??, I asked, ?Is the level running correctly?? ?Yes sir, just some bugs that are being fixed.? He said, ?and the troops have been alerted.? ?The blackmail??, I asked. ?Oh, It got across to all of them what would happen if they didn?t comply.?, he chuckled. "Besides, it's not like they can CALL THE COPS!" ?Excellent,? I replied, ?Make sure that level is flawless. One flaw could ruin the entire plan.? ?Sir, what IS the plan??, Chief Duty asked, ?I only know my part.? ?Oh, it will all be revealed in due time,? I asked, ?All in due time...? -Popsiclegod123?s Point of View- I looked over the charts. My company was the bomb. We were the base of the entire education system. The Soviet Union was forgiven, and now, our second chance was running the education of every being on LittleBigPlanet. All the charts were green. A straight line to the top. Not a flaw. Except... what was this? I hit the button. The servants came in immediately. ?My dear servants,? I said, ?As the leader of the Soviet Union, my leadership has been flawless. Not one bad thing has ever happened.? ?Indeed, Master Popsicle? The main butler replied. ?Yes. Well, explain this!? I said, yelling and pointing at the charts. ?It is a red mark.? He said back. ?And define ?red mark?.? ?It is a flaw in your education management.? He replied. ?Who is the flaw?? I demanded. ?His name is Rekon. He is caught in the tubes with amnesia.? ?Port him to the hospital!? I shouted. ?Yes sir. Just press the white button on the dashboard. The one with a red plus sign.? I did. The red mark went back. The charts were no longer focused on the red mark in midst of the green. But the number stayed there. Number of Red Marks: 1. This sucked. I pulled out the paintinator, and shot the main butler into the Pit of Punishment. ?Get me some LittleBigAspirin,? I demanded, ?I?m ticked off right now. I need some time to think.? "Yes sir,? the next best butler replied, as all my butlers left. My system had never had even one flaw. No one could find out about this... this mistake. This blemish. I should?ve had Rekon killed. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Good? Oh thank goodness I remembered. Okay, so chapter 5 will be posted in two days. Look for Chapter 5: 5...4...3...2...1... Educate!

2010-07-26 19:25:00 Author: Joshua_is_wicked Posts: 79

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LUVVVVVVVVVVVVV <3 <3 <3 IT!!!!!!!! more more more more!! ugh its soooo intense! the suspense is intense (hey that rymes!) coolio keep up the good work and next time dont forget about ur fans!!!

2010-07-26 19:33:00 Author: lightningbug1 Posts: 515

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