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Sackboy and the evil H4Hers LBW7WESFUN
I just published this level. I have been working on this for a good 3 weeks. This is my 2nd contest I have entered. the main story of this levels is the evil H4Hers have been destroying a city. It is your job to stop them. And find out whats driving them to strike. special thanks goes to Morgana for letting me take a picture of her.
2010-07-23 21:25:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


ill check it out, btw if by second entry you mean you have 2 LBW7 entries then you may wanna delete one before the deadline, otherwise your disqualified2010-07-23 22:30:00

Author:
Littlebigdude805
Posts: 1924


no man i mean this is my secound contest i entered2010-07-23 22:36:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


I'll try this now, sound cool but you might want to put some pics.2010-07-23 23:11:00

Author:
ferrrch
Posts: 429


Nice little level. The story was both funny and interesting (those H4Hers are the bane of LBP) and teh platforming was decent, I liked the subway chase tho I felt it would have been better if it was a bit longer and you actually had to get onto the train to stop it. The end boss / machine was also fun but again a bit on the easy side as it was easy to find ares to stand so you could shoot the targets where the machine couldn't kill you.

Still all in all a fun little level

4 stars
2010-07-23 23:18:00

Author:
cthulhu82
Posts: 211


thanks both of you for your feed back ill make the train chase longer and make the end boss just a little bit harder.
also I need a memory card to get the pics on here.
2010-07-23 23:37:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


Ok the level was nice, it has awesome visuals, you made a good use of 3D glitch, the story was entertaining but my complaint is the game-play which is not good, first is too repetitive jump, jump, jump and some grabbing, and second you use only switches so that made the level very boring overall i would rate the level 3.5 stars but as i cant i rated 4 stars and tagged boring.

Good luck on the competition.
2010-07-23 23:38:00

Author:
ferrrch
Posts: 429


Ok the level was nice, it has awesome visuals, you made a good use of 3D glitch, the story was entertaining but my complaint is the game-play which is not good, first is too repetitive jump, jump, jump and some grabbing, and second you use only switches so that made the level very boring overall i would rate the level 3.5 stars but as i cant i rated 4 stars and tagged boring.

Good luck on the competition.

Thank you for your feed back I will improve the game play and inform you when its done upgrading
2010-07-23 23:45:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


Haha, a cute little level hating on hearters. It seemed polished and complete and I only have one large nit-pic and that was when you first approach the flooded area the camera flies underwater making it hard to see that there are stairs you are supposed to go up. I got stuck for a bit. Otherwise a smooth level. Nice use of 3d glitch to make city background.

Check out my level "A Realm Forgotten" if you get a chance, and leave a comment on my page, Thanks!
2010-07-24 00:10:00

Author:
Lockstitch
Posts: 415


Haha, a cute little level hating on hearters. It seemed polished and complete and I only have one large nit-pic and that was when you first approach the flooded area the camera flies underwater making it hard to see that there are stairs you are supposed to go up. I got stuck for a bit. Otherwise a smooth level. Nice use of 3d glitch to make city background.

Check out my level "A Realm Forgotten" if you get a chance, and leave a comment on my page, Thanks!

Sure man and thanks for your feedback when I get a chance I will look at your level for you. Also I will fix that camera angle now and publish it right away. Im also making the tunnel longer and improving the game play atm. but that will be done first.
2010-07-24 00:16:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


Fun level, nothing was too bad, the train scene felt kinda lame, ide suggest putting a race gate at the kaboos and a finish at the engine, this way instead of just swinging across a few lights you can have some gameplay like in the tunnel scene in the marvel pack, but on top of the train. Other than that it was a pretty fun level, boss could use work like others said. Overall ide give it 4 stars2010-07-24 01:26:00

Author:
Littlebigdude805
Posts: 1924


Fun level, nothing was too bad, the train scene felt kinda lame, ide suggest putting a race gate at the kaboos and a finish at the engine, this way instead of just swinging across a few lights you can have some gameplay like in the tunnel scene in the marvel pack, but on top of the train. Other than that it was a pretty fun level, boss could use work like others said. Overall ide give it 4 stars

Thanks you man. The level is now updated with a bit harder boss, longer tunnel witch includes a race, and more game play.
2010-07-24 14:50:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


Hi, i will play this at some point. What has to be in lbw7 and what details, some info please.
thanks in advance
2010-07-24 16:50:00

Author:
Unknown User


ok the train section is improved, tho I think you should add a few more seconds onto the race time because that part with the platforms that drop while rocks fall had mme trapped for a while past the end of the race. Also I got to the end boss and destroyed the first part of the machine (teh rotating part with multiple targets) but then nothing happened, the other targets remained shielded so I was unable to continue and had to quit the game.

This is a shame because it was better than the first time I played it
2010-07-24 17:30:00

Author:
cthulhu82
Posts: 211


ok the train section is improved, tho I think you should add a few more seconds onto the race time because that part with the platforms that drop while rocks fall had mme trapped for a while past the end of the race. Also I got to the end boss and destroyed the first part of the machine (teh rotating part with multiple targets) but then nothing happened, the other targets remained shielded so I was unable to continue and had to quit the game.

This is a shame because it was better than the first time I played it

I took a look at the boss it works perfectly fine now. I also added more time to the race gate and added some more visuals.
2010-07-24 21:05:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


I will try this out and let you know m82010-07-24 22:24:00

Author:
brucethejam
Posts: 105


Great level, i played it earlier.
Ps:wesfun how come you deleted me and blocked me i tried joninig with boyskinn byt u dint reply, answers please
2010-07-24 22:37:00

Author:
Unknown User


What is LBW?2010-07-24 23:33:00

Author:
Unknown User


Great level, i played it earlier.
Ps:wesfun how come you deleted me and blocked me i tried joninig with boyskinn byt u dint reply, answers please
I deleted you and blocked you because the way you were acting towards me and clown.

What is LBW?

LBW is a site called little big workshop and they do monthly contests
2010-07-24 23:40:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


played your level m8 and overall it was an enjoyable experience, especially liked the end of level boss. had to laugh at the comments as someone asked for h4h lol. good work, 4 stars2010-07-24 23:47:00

Author:
brucethejam
Posts: 105


played your level m8 and overall it was an enjoyable experience, especially liked the end of level boss. had to laugh at the comments as someone asked for h4h lol. good work, 4 stars

Thank you. btw do you have any ideas to make your rating better
2010-07-25 00:25:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


I really liked your level. I played it with my friend and we found no glitches. Pretty fun, 4/5 + heart.

Good job.

--edit--
And we got the high score for 2 player!
2010-07-25 21:14:00

Author:
GreatWhite000
Posts: 673


thank you for your feedback dr2010-07-27 03:34:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


How did I act to you2010-07-27 19:06:00

Author:
Unknown User


How did I act to you

I suggest taking this conversation somewhere else. Wes doesn't need a ruckus to begin in his level thread.

@WES, I'll be sure to play the final product sometime tonight hopefully
2010-07-27 21:16:00

Author:
iGotFancyPants
Posts: 1355


I suggest taking this conversation somewhere else. Wes doesn't need a ruckus to begin in his level thread.

@WES, I'll be sure to play the final product sometime tonight hopefully

yes please. and thanks fancy i cant wait for your feed back
2010-07-27 21:37:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


Played it, it was very good. I dont sugest taken this conversation somewhere else, cos all I want to know is how did i treat you, cos 1 day i was playing with clown and we were realy getting along, the next, poooof. Gone2010-07-29 15:05:00

Author:
Unknown User


Blue monkey you dont understand what you did I have now blocked you from LBPC please stop posting crap in my level thread. just stop2010-08-01 02:40:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


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