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New level by CrazeAlec! BETA!

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Hey everyone!

Yes I am making a new level, it's about 50% done. And believe it or not I started it 5 days ago
(creating Non-stop=WIN! ).


About the level

It's an original platforming level and it's my second level. I've focused more on gameplay than visuals. Why did I start creating this level? I thought "Imma begin a new level and not finish it", but I'm actually finish this one cause I got so many ideas for it. It got no plot or something. The level have no name at the moment..


BETA test info!

So your up for testing the level, eh?
Here's some things you need to know;

If you play it please give feedback in this thread in a spoiler (Click me for me to learn how to make a spoiler! (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=30566-Guide-To-BBCode-Tags))

You need to type in this code in my lock-room to get the key for the level: 5252Goblin5

And give informative feedback, not something that's one sentence thanks

Thanks in advance, Alec
2010-07-22 19:20:00

Author:
Alec
Posts: 3871


No need to test it...

He still won't finish it!
2010-07-22 19:22:00

Author:
Rhys125
Posts: 841


No need to test it...

He still won't finish it!

I will finish it!

Back into to the cage with the rest!
2010-07-22 19:24:00

Author:
Alec
Posts: 3871


(Learn to make spoiler tags here:Click me! (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=30566-Guide-To-BBCode-Tags))

Thanks for linking to my thread...bu...but I haven't done the spoiler tag tutorial yet.

I'll get it done now.
2010-07-22 19:30:00

Author:
Doopz
Posts: 5592


Thanks for linking to my thread...bu...but I haven't done the spoiler tag tutorial yet.

I'll get it done now.
Whaa, I thought I saw it in your thread *removes your link, until you finish the tutorial* :kz:
2010-07-22 19:31:00

Author:
Alec
Posts: 3871


Whaa, I thought I saw it in your thread *removes your link, until you finish the tutorial* :kz:

I finished it.

Put the link back up.

Now I shall go play test your level, if you heart me and all my levels.

KTHXBAI.
2010-07-22 19:49:00

Author:
Doopz
Posts: 5592


I finished it.

Put the link back up.

Now I shall go play test your level, if you heart me and all my levels.

KTHXBAI.
Ok the link is up!
2010-07-22 19:50:00

Author:
Alec
Posts: 3871


I would rather wait until its finished But i might test it if i get enough time bud 2010-07-22 19:54:00

Author:
fruitmanlolli
Posts: 151


I would rather wait until its finished But i might test it if i get enough time bud

It's your choice
2010-07-22 20:11:00

Author:
Alec
Posts: 3871


I'll test very soon.

2010-07-22 20:34:00

Author:
X-FROGBOY-X
Posts: 1800


Okay it may not be 50% done, maybe 45% :blush:2010-07-22 20:52:00

Author:
Alec
Posts: 3871


First off, I like how you put a tiny but visible cutout of your goblin-sackperson. Your visuals were simple, but they were clean and looked nice. In the very first area, right after you move the block of sponge, you should put a cutscene that shows the platform in the bottom-left corner moving, because through my playthrough I didn't notice it at all for around a minute or two. You can see out of the level on the first springy platform in the race , it's in the bottom left corner, you'll see what I mean next time you play. Also, you can see wayyyy out of the level at the checkpoint before the wheel thingy. But other than those few things, great job!

2010-07-22 21:12:00

Author:
X-FROGBOY-X
Posts: 1800


thanks Frogboy, I'll fix the camera and thanks for the cut scene idea 2010-07-22 21:19:00

Author:
Alec
Posts: 3871


At the start when you grab the spongy thing I didn't notice it opened up a door, I suggest making a cut scene and adding a sound

Also, checkpoints should not be something you have to jump to get to, but something you just walk past and activate IMO. I found that with every single checkpoint I ended up walking past without activating so the next time I died, I went waaaaaay back.

While I'm on the subject of checkpoints, I found the level too hard, double life or infinite life checkpoints PL0X! Or make the level easier.

And finally, I hope the ending was just a temporary ending, LOL.

While that seems like all negative things, I very much enjoyed the level, can't wait to see the full thing.
2010-07-22 21:34:00

Author:
Doopz
Posts: 5592


I will test later 2010-07-22 21:41:00

Author:
AbstractFlesh
Posts: 837


@Doopz, I'll fix the checkpoint problem, but no infinite! I hate those, but I'll have infinite on the race though. lol.
Thanks for the feedback though!
2010-07-22 21:48:00

Author:
Alec
Posts: 3871


Nice and sweet
Pro- I really liked the obstacles in the level. Everything is great so far and i'm eager to play through the whole thing!

Con- I never seem to find faults in levels or maybe because i'm to nice

Overall- It was worth playing! :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: and a <3 .

You're welcome!
2010-07-23 00:24:00

Author:
AbstractFlesh
Posts: 837


Haha, thanks Evane for the nice feedback 2010-07-23 11:15:00

Author:
Alec
Posts: 3871


Gief beta testing rights NAOW.
*points gun*
2010-07-23 11:38:00

Author:
Gavin
Posts: 338


I'm going to test it when I get home, which will be in a 5 days...2010-07-23 16:44:00

Author:
ExplosiveCheddar
Posts: 978


Now Published. 2010-07-31 23:20:00

Author:
Alec
Posts: 3871


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