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The Colour Factoryjezza123 A problem occurs during a tour of the colour factory. Hi, im looking for some feedback as this is a style of level i wouldn't normally make. It starts off with you taking a tour of the colour factory, When suddenly the colour generator(a machine that sends colour throughout the level) breaks down and you are asked to go fix it. i wanted to add a diffent elament into this level so I put in 3 mini games witch are hidden and can only be reached through 3 hidden teleports. So tbh in all im asking for some feedback on the level and the mini games inside. Looking foward to seeing what you all think and thanks for reading P.S. Sorry about the low res but here some pics.

2010-07-22 15:34:00 Author: Unknown User

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It would be nice if you could post some screen shots!

2010-07-22 15:53:00 Author: RoharDragontamer Posts: 397

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Il get some screen shots next time im at my ps3, they will be low res exported photos from the game, as my capture card dont work no more

2010-07-22 16:00:00 Author: Unknown User

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While I've seen levels that exploit the color filter before, I think you made this one stand out with some very nice original platforming. I was pleasantly suprised at you innovative spring contraptions, such as the series of flipping springs and the spring on rollers that followed the player. Your visuals were fine too and the level most definitely looked polished. However it was your platforming that garnered my rating of 5/5. Check out my level "A Realm Forgotten" if you have the time, and comment on my thread, Thanks!

2010-07-23 00:11:00 Author: Lockstitch Posts: 415

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Wow really a 5/5, thankx lockstitch,It took me 2 weeks to come up with the platforming ideas, and a few more week to come up with a theme and story and put it all together(il admit im not good at writing a story as you probberly saw xD).Oh and il be sure to check out A Realm Forgoton next time im at my ps3

2010-07-23 08:56:00 Author: Unknown User

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I'll be on this soon!

2010-07-23 16:21:00 Author: talbot-trembler Posts: 1114

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the colour factory by jessa 123 http://i612.photobucket.com/albums/tt210/swanbrown/utility/swanbullets.jpgFirstly, the title may have to compete with "the factory of colour", "Colour Factory" (1 & 2), and "The Great Colour factory" A slightly different title might be in order. http://i612.photobucket.com/albums/tt210/swanbrown/utility/swanbullets.jpg in the generator room, it would be nice if there were a stable place to read The first prompt. as it is, it flys in your face in the middle of a jump. also, to keep the mood of the previous prompts, it should read "This is the generator room. Someone turned on the deffence defense shields for them those two bouncebots. don't worry, you can shut them off by shooting the kill switches. http://i612.photobucket.com/albums/tt210/swanbrown/utility/swanbullets.jpg the credits were a nice classy touch, personally, though, if I hadn't been reviewing this, I would have just skipped the finish and gone on to something else, not liking to be forced to wait around for the level to catch up. On the other hand, it's over pretty quickly. http://i612.photobucket.com/albums/tt210/swanbrown/utility/swanbullets.jpgall, in all, I enjoyed it! When you get a chance have a look at COPYABLE: Gradient Work Shop 2.2 (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=t=14333).

2010-07-23 16:28:00 Author: swanbrown Posts: 898

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Thanks for the review Swanbrown, ive made some changes to the level including adding a platform to read the speach bubble at the start of the bouncebots's section. If anyone else finds any bugs or ways to improve the level please let me know, thanks.

2010-07-27 21:32:00 Author: Unknown User

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