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the attack of the dragons(pt1)

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the attack of the dragons(pt1)snail_po
well, this lv is part of a 2 pt series
it took quite long and some parts are umm wonkey..
I started this lv ahwile back sometime last month but scince the summer term was comming it meant ALOT more homework for me to do so i eventualy ended up forgetting about it. it was only intill my freind came over my house to play on lbp with me that wee notaced the lvl.
my freind was very enthusiastic about me finishing that lv and we quickly came up with a story for it.

the orriganal story was actualy meant to be that you were on a different planet and the sun was dieing and you had to reingite it.
it was a good story and we went with it intill i made a dragon in create mode, i thought, , ooohhh lets chang the story from reignighting the sun to fighting dragons and saving fairys(sisters input).

The lv still needs fixing in a few parts and i may get round to fixing them.

pt2 is going to feature you being in a space ship, thats realy all i can tell you about pt2 with out spioling it...

the only problem with pt2 is im going to france some time in the holiday and would have my ps3 with me as im not shure you can use a ps3 in a tent!

anywhay enjoy my lv and dont forget to rate it!
2010-07-21 19:48:00

Author:
snail_po01
Posts: 85


I'll try playing it tonight and I'll tell you what I think.2010-07-21 19:59:00

Author:
Dragonvarsity
Posts: 5208


thanks your names 'dragonvarsity' so it fits with the theam of dragons!2010-07-21 20:03:00

Author:
snail_po01
Posts: 85


Lol, yeah I love me some dragons.

Edit: I played the level and here's what I thought.

First of all, I think the scenery's great especially in the beginning. But when you have to swing to the next platform in the beginning, I think you should remove the giant decoration because it blocks it a little. Also, when your in the little shaft that starts going down and then it falls in the water, I got stuck in there for a little bit so if I were you then I'd make it dissolve when it hits the water. When I used the key to keep the switch in the other direction, I accidentally got squished and I ended at the earlier checkpoint but since they key was in there, I couldn't get in since the door closed again. So unfortunately, I'll have to restart. If I were you, I'd either have an emitter emit that key whenever you pull one so a new one appears or at least put a checkpoint past the door you open with the key. Anyway, so far I think it deserves 3 stars. Good job and I'll see if I can tell you what I thought after that by playing it again.

Could you give feedback on my level Platformia? The link to the thread is located in my sig.
2010-07-21 20:09:00

Author:
Dragonvarsity
Posts: 5208


Lol, yeah I love me some dragons.

Edit: I played the level and here's what I thought.

First of all, I think the scenery's great especially in the beginning. But when you have to swing to the next platform in the beginning, I think you should remove the giant decoration because it blocks it a little. Also, when your in the little shaft that starts going down and then it falls in the water, I got stuck in there for a little bit so if I were you then I'd make it dissolve when it hits the water. When I used the key to keep the switch in the other direction, I accidentally got squished and I ended at the earlier checkpoint but since they key was in there, I couldn't get in since the door closed again. So unfortunately, I'll have to restart. If I were you, I'd either have an emitter emit that key whenever you pull one so a new one appears or at least put a checkpoint past the door you open with the key. Anyway, so far I think it deserves 3 stars. Good job and I'll see if I can tell you what I thought after that by playing it again.

Could you give feedback on my level Platformia? The link to the thread is located in my sig.

thank you for the feedback, im going to work on the lv today and fix some of the parts, and shure, i will play your lv!

ps. i sent you a freind request on lbpc, hope we can be freinds
2010-07-22 08:48:00

Author:
snail_po01
Posts: 85


Hey you had a trippy little environment built there in the opening. Felt like a very foreign world. Gameplay was alright and your dialouge was funny (esp. part about girly fairies, etc) However I got stuck in the water puzzle where you have to place the colored keys. I got the black one in place but cannot tell where to go from there. I probably am just overlooking something. Perhaps a little hint-hint-wink could be of use to help the player here. Let me know what I'm doing wrong and I'll give it another run through.


Check out my level "A Realm Forgotten" if you get a chance, and leave a comment on my page, Thanks!
2010-07-24 03:01:00

Author:
Lockstitch
Posts: 415


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