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Two days ago, I posted the introduction to this amazing story. Now, here is the First chapter. --------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter One: Revealing Names -???’s Point of View- I sighed, as the readings went down. Phase 1 was 27.5% complete. At least the percentage rate was going up. The plan would be carried out soon. This creation proess was dastardly. I didn’t see how my brother possibly could’ve endured this. Oh. My brother. Why such a loss. The Collector, or more commonly known as the Creator, had been lost to the entire family. If only he hadn’t published that first level. His... episode... Never would’ve happened. And he never would’ve... No. The word couldn’t finish itself. It just couldn’t. Then the pain would come back. The anger would return with even more control of me than before. I would lose sight of this long-term plan. I took a deep breath, forgot the consequences of sharing, and dragged a few files into the program. I would not be like my brother. I wouldn’t... The word failed to create itself. Create. What memories that word brought up. I dropped the thought, and returned to my work, more focused and determined than I was when I woke up. After all, I was The Destroyer. What good would I be without the “destroy” part of my name? -Daddio’s Point of View- I ran to the platform. With a bounding leap, I nailed myself over the spikes, and onto the suspended piece of wood. I didn’t need to ask how it worked. I knew the creatoor had suspended it with Anti-gravity matter. Again I leaped. This time, I hit a big block of wood, and activated a checkpoint. This was hilarious. I had been summoned over here mere minutes ago. And I was apparently a girl now. A girl stuck with a creator who had aced every level in story mode. I wouldn’t be ported for days. But that wasn’t too much of a focus. The real focus was my sudden pause. What the heck! Right in the middle of a jump, I paused. Ridiculous. What has this LittleBig-Freakin’-World come to? I would remain thinking that until I discovered why the pause happened. Another player jumped into the game, coming through the checkpoint I activated. Cheater, stealing my hard work. Of course the player I was mentally flipping off happened to be my best friend. Rekon. -Rekon’s Point of View- I came out the other side. It was amazing. I hadn’t forgotten a single thing. I still knew the LittleBigCurrency, and of Fire, Gas, and Electricity. My disorder usually made me forget everything. However, forgetting would seem better as soon as my eyes wandered down to the dress code I picked up. What mental person would dress their sackperson like this? Imagine a pirate costume. Good, now imagine the hat covered in pink. With yellow shoes, and holding a white sackboy doll. Then, imagine that with a green dress. *Sigh*, sometime the system really sucked. I was millimeters from suicide. Then I saw something familiar. A face... in a female suit... but a recognizable fate. "Hey!", he shouted out," Rekon, over here!" Rekon? Who was Rekon? Me? "Who's Rekon?" I shouted back. He laughed, and walked over to me. "My Gosh, Rekon," he said with a laugh," Your disorder is getting worse!" Rekon? Was that my name? He was right. My disorder was getting worse. I was completely lost. I didn't remember my own name! This was more terrible than a Family Guy reference! "Remember me?", he said with a grin, "Rekon?" I strained, and tried to focus. Who was he. Then, it clicked. "Daddio?", I said," Well what are the odds?" "Not very big," he laughed. -The Destroyer's Point of View- I flew five feet back. It went from 29% to 45% in three seconds. This was a huge breakthrough! Phase 1 was nearly 50% complete! My brother would soon be avenged! And there would be nothing ANYONE could do about it! ---------------------------------------- Give me feedback, comment, reply, etc. Chapter 2 coming Friday. It is titled "President Chickin". Peace Be With You!

2010-07-21 17:05:00 Author: Joshua_is_wicked Posts: 79

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whoa!!!!! coolio!!! exciting!!

2010-07-22 15:17:00 Author: lightningbug1 Posts: 515

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This is really well written, nice one.

2010-07-22 21:27:00 Author: resistance1 Posts: 812

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more more more!!!!! lol

2010-07-23 17:17:00 Author: lightningbug1 Posts: 515

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Check back later today, around 5

2010-07-23 19:23:00 Author: Joshua_is_wicked Posts: 79

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