Archive: 19 posts

---

Kings of Argnobeasty23jk break ionto the emporers ( king of clouds/sky) sky fly a massive ship that is bigger than most moons.go to planet argno and try to find the king of stars not out yet two days at exactly 2:00 pm central oh and it is pronounced ar-egg-no as in is that our egg? no.

2010-07-20 21:50:00 Author: lbp is awespme Posts: 657

---

ok let me know when its out lol I'll try this great sounding level!

2010-07-20 22:08:00 Author: Unknown User

---

You've put out a lot of levels in a really short period of time... Are you just making threads for them now, or are you actually making the level that fast? I'm assuming the first answer? Cause it kind of looks like spamming when you see a lot of threads by the same guy. Not saying you're spamming though.

2010-07-21 03:01:00 Author: Nuffles Posts: 132

---

You've put out a lot of levels in a really short period of time... Are you just making threads for them now, or are you actually making the level that fast? I'm assuming the first answer? Cause it kind of looks like spamming when you see a lot of threads by the same guy. Not saying you're spamming though. well i have been mworking on this one for a month . the era of now series was accutuly a really short level. in the creaation but not in the create mode i know it needs to seem like that just adding some finishing touches heck if the moons are aligned just right it could be out tonight in like two hours but if my wifi don't work it might be tomorow for a kind of demo but real version comes out in two days central

2010-07-21 03:01:00 Author: lbp is awespme Posts: 657

---

its out yay!

2010-07-22 17:34:00 Author: lbp is awespme Posts: 657

---

Hey i played your level but i didint realy get the story and you need to start corner editing everything to make a good level you should just practis making small platformers with no story and do more corner editing and play around with emiters and pistins and all the tools. i gave your level 3 stars.

2010-07-30 03:34:00 Author: SketchNZ Posts: 1668

---

Hi, beasty23jk! I tried your level and found it interesting. As Sketch said maybe better will be to do more job with corner tool, but anyway - level looks fine for beginner. I had only one issue - I fall in some hole on the floor and found score bar under it. Is it right and of your level?

2010-07-30 12:03:00 Author: Domik12 Posts: 838

---

hole in the floor?

2010-07-30 17:45:00 Author: lbp is awespme Posts: 657

---

I'm sorry but I cant put this nicely... D: It... was... terrible -_- I'm sorry but it was -_- I didn't get the story and there was no music also it was very boring... Oh yeah there was a hole in the floor as well and under it was a scoreboard soooo 1 Star? D: Sorry :I

2010-07-30 18:15:00 Author: Jovuto Posts: 2345

---

Hey Awesome!! I gave your level a go. First of all I think you need music, this is not even an option to me, a level without music has no soul, so add music to all your levels. Even Glokenpop is better than nothing. I can tell you are trying to be a good creator, you have made a few levels over the last week or so, and I have played most of them. I think you need to take your time more, and make an effort to make you levels look better. Corner editing is something you need to do more of. To me, nothing make a level look more bland than just straight lines. Corner editing is a great way to liven things up and make things look more dynamic. Take a look at Sketch's new level, Rocks and Gems for a perfect example of how corner editing can make things look incredible with a little time and effort. I liked the room with all the planets through the window. That part looked great!! Then you switch to plain wood, which kind of seemed inappropriate for this level. Also you can just go right in that spot and you are out of the level. I would block that part off for sure. There are a few ways to break your level. Your lift, you should set the grab switch to direction, because if you don't make the checkpoint before the bottom piece comes in, the level is broke, and you must restart. If you set it to direction, it will automatically reset to the bottom, then the player can come back to it if need be.I like the change of scenery when you get to the top. Your character designs could use improvement. The king is basically a stick figure. You should set the grab switch to your space ship to direction too, to avoid the same problem I mentioned before. Also, if you fall off the ship, you just land on the bottom, out of the level again, put some horrible gas there to make the player able to go back to the checkpoint, and if the ships switch is set to direction, it will be right there waiting for the player, to make the trip again. I'll be honest buddy, if I grabbed this level of new releases, and I did not know you, I would give this one star, but I know you, and I think you want to be a good creator, you just need to take your time, so I gave you five stars. I hope I did not seem too harsh, but this is what being a part of the community is about, getting honest feedback, so you can improve on your next level. Later Buddy!! -VJ

2010-07-30 18:24:00 Author: VelcroJonze Posts: 1305

---

whoa the best feedback i have gotten iscence the releace i will update on the 13th hopefully

2010-07-30 18:31:00 Author: lbp is awespme Posts: 657

---

Hey awespme! I played your level (again), and I still don't see any improvement. Sorry, but it's the truth. There was no corner editing, and further more you just rushed this project without having any idea how the players would interpret the plot. Overall, I gave it :star::star::star:. Maybe an update on this level would help? Peace

2010-07-30 19:01:00 Author: CyberSora Posts: 5551

---

I have to admit I didn't get the story either its due my or your english, I can't tell There is a spot in your level, ( I think you called it computer room or something like that) where I could leave the level by just going straight forward but I couldn't return to the right path. And somehow I saw a soreboard which I couldn't reach So the end of your Level for me was that lonely scoreboad on the ground after that slippery yellow glas and white styrofoam part. You're Stickerwork is quite good it really looks like windows with space beyond If you take the time to practise cornerediting your level will improve a lot! I'm sure you will improve your level so let me just give you 5 Stars from the start

2010-07-30 19:06:00 Author: Dhana777 Posts: 122

---

Yea as everyone has said you need to corner edit maybe i could make a level template for you to make a level on? just an idea, My first level wasn't too shaby when i first stated because i have played games like this on the internet like Incredibots.com i got some pretty cool levels on that site if you want to have a look but when i first started incredibots i was useless at it anyway i could help you with your next level a bit maybe do some finishing touch's to give you an idea what to do with your levels.

2010-07-30 21:35:00 Author: SketchNZ Posts: 1668

---

bad news guys update canceled the logic just isn't working in it i added a few pieces of logic epic fail. but good news is the second one was almost finished but then i added one more little hill and corupt thank god for backups. so on my first back up i added another thing corupt so i had to end the level no turbo materials mostly basic materials. so the good news is that instead of a trilogy it is going to have four parts. look for kings of argno two sometime soon.

2010-07-31 20:58:00 Author: lbp is awespme Posts: 657

---

Hey awespme, here's those pictures you wanted. I'll post your feedback soon. http://i900.photobucket.com/albums/ac207/tross13/Levels/Kings%20of%20Argno/8-1-2010-0134.png http://i900.photobucket.com/albums/ac207/tross13/Levels/Kings%20of%20Argno/8-1-2010-0135.png http://i900.photobucket.com/albums/ac207/tross13/Levels/Kings%20of%20Argno/8-1-2010-0136.png http://i900.photobucket.com/albums/ac207/tross13/Levels/Kings%20of%20Argno/8-1-2010-0137.png http://i900.photobucket.com/albums/ac207/tross13/Levels/Kings%20of%20Argno/8-1-2010-0138.png http://i900.photobucket.com/albums/ac207/tross13/Levels/Kings%20of%20Argno/8-1-2010-0139.png http://i900.photobucket.com/albums/ac207/tross13/Levels/Kings%20of%20Argno/8-1-2010-0140.png http://i900.photobucket.com/albums/ac207/tross13/Levels/Kings%20of%20Argno/8-1-2010-0141.png http://i900.photobucket.com/albums/ac207/tross13/Levels/Kings%20of%20Argno/8-1-2010-0142.png http://i900.photobucket.com/albums/ac207/tross13/Levels/Kings%20of%20Argno/8-1-2010-0143.png http://i900.photobucket.com/albums/ac207/tross13/Levels/Kings%20of%20Argno/8-1-2010-0144.png

2010-08-02 08:31:00 Author: Taffey Posts: 3187

---

love those pics man in a word no puns intended beasty23jk

2010-08-02 20:05:00 Author: lbp is awespme Posts: 657

---

i was working on the second one and i refrenced afp and it put poo in *** lol poo a bad word

2010-08-04 16:12:00 Author: lbp is awespme Posts: 657

---

Hey i played your level but i didint realy get the story and you need to start corner editing everything to make a good level you should just practis making small platformers with no story and do more corner editing and play around with emiters and pistins and all the tools. i gave your level 3 stars. Sorry I replied soo late! My Bad!! I do have to agree with sketch here. Corner Editing is CRUCIAL to a good level. Big mistake I made on my first (and only) published level. So I've only got like 6 hearts and a 3 star rating on it. But I'm looking forward to my huge come back with my new level to be released!! I'll have to go and play Kings of Argno II now!!

2010-08-05 09:14:00 Author: Unknown User

Posts: 1077139    Threads: 69970    Members: 9661    Archive-Date: 2019-01-19

Aus dem Archiv wurden alle persönlichen Daten wie Name, Anschrift, Email etc. - aber auch sämtliche Inhalte wie z.B. persönliche Nachrichten - entfernt.
Die Nutzung dieser Webseite erfolgt ohne Speicherung personenbezogener Daten. Es werden keinerlei Cookies, Logs, 3rd-Party-Plugins etc. verwendet.