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4th doctors tardiscyberleaderlewis
Please play this level if you like doctor who, I think that it is my finest work yet, it took me a long while making it but I think it was worth it. if you liked tom baker (4th Doctor) your going to love this.
This TARDIS has a fully functioning time rotor and a tardis like noise , you also have the options of going to two different places (the Garden of Eden and Pluto's Moon), you can go back and forth to these places as many times as you like just hop back into the tardis. This tardis comes with K-9 who follows you and comes to explore one of the places with you, he can be annoying at time so sorry in advance there is also a garden in the tardis which is quite fun it also has a pool . So please heart and rate. I am looking forward to your feedback.
:star: :star: I Also Forgot to mention the TARDIS has a changeable TV screen for what place you go to :star: :star:

Screenshots :

http://i557.photobucket.com/albums/ss13/theamilien_photo/APhoto_16.jpg
http://i557.photobucket.com/albums/ss13/theamilien_photo/APhoto_18.jpg
http://i557.photobucket.com/albums/ss13/theamilien_photo/APhoto_19.jpg
http://i557.photobucket.com/albums/ss13/theamilien_photo/APhoto_20.jpg
http://i557.photobucket.com/albums/ss13/theamilien_photo/APhoto_22.jpg
http://i557.photobucket.com/albums/ss13/theamilien_photo/APhoto_23.jpg
http://i557.photobucket.com/albums/ss13/theamilien_photo/APhoto_24.jpg

UPDATE
I have recently updated my tardis to make it better for everyone
•K-9 is now in the middle layer so he won't be bothering you anymore.
•Point Bubbles are added to make it more fun!
•You can now see the scoreboard on plutos moon
•A few minor tweaks were adjusted aswell.
•When i finish my 11th doctors TARDIS i will add a short story to my work to make it that little bit more interesting.
•Unfortunatley i cannot add anymore worlds as my temperature has overloaded ... but give me suggestions on which planet to delete and if you suggest a new one to take its place i will make it your name will also be added to the description for suggesting it. 		2010-07-20 17:31:00

Author:
J05thompso
Posts: 16

Sounds good! I'll take a look!
I'm a big fan of Dr. Who and I've almost finished making the 11th doctor's TARDIS!!		2010-07-20 17:39:00

Author:
Weretigr
Posts: 2105

Can you post some screen shots when you get a chance?2010-07-20 17:48:00

Author:
RoharDragontamer
Posts: 397

Nice job, I have been working with Dayne on the 11th TARDIS

Not sure if we are going to show pics before we release the level, as it is still a work in progress. I guess that is up to the group to decide. I don't see any reason to avoid a little hype

I'm definitely going to have to try this one		2010-07-20 23:30:00

Author:
Strangepom
Posts: 445

Nice job, I have been working with Dayne on the 11th TARDIS

Not sure if we are going to show pics before we release the level, as it is still a work in progress. I guess that is up to the group to decide. I don't see any reason to avoid a little hype

I'm definitely going to have to try this one

Yeah, No Images to the public! I don't think we should before or after Photos of the level and exterior, yes. Interior can be left a surprise! =D

Anyway, @J05thompso That console is really detailed! Well done!!		2010-07-20 23:38:00

Author:
Weretigr
Posts: 2105

thanks guys 2010-07-20 23:49:00

Author:
J05thompso
Posts: 16

Positives:
You definitely have some nice ideas in building. You also did a nice job of creating K-9 and detailing the TARDIS.

Suggestions:
You should spend a little time doing spelling and grammar checking. Your first dialog has a space in the middle of the word time, and relative is spelled incorrectly. I would hide the speech bubble on the moon. I would not have hid the score window. The level is very short, and I'm not really sure what the point of the level was other than to demonstrate your ability to create a TARDIS and set up teleporters. I think you could have really expanded the level by creating a story that would give a reason to go to the garden, then go to the moon, for instance. I would also like to see you spend a lot of time with the corner editor to spruce up the overall terrain. 2 and 3 layer deep rooms with no detail are not very appealing to play in.

3 stars.		2010-07-20 23:53:00

Author:
RoharDragontamer
Posts: 397

Thanks for the comment, I have only really make my TARDIS levels for amusement though, I don't make them for a story. 2010-07-21 00:10:00

Author:
J05thompso
Posts: 16

yeah I played the level but couldn't really change the areas
Good Job tho:star::star::star:

Edit:
When you try to change to a different place wouldn't let me just kept me at the garden place		2010-07-21 10:24:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653

what do you mean you couldn't change areas? thanks for the comment i appreciate it i will play your level in a bit

EDIT: you may not have pressed the other button correcly becuase i have tried it many times and it always works for me 		2010-07-21 13:01:00

Author:
J05thompso
Posts: 16

Here is you feedback as promised in the Pirates of the Caribbean thread.

Positives:

+ I've never seen Dr. Who (live in the states) but that TARDIS thing looks pretty cool.
+ The machine in the lab area was well designed.
+ The space background was nice.

Improvements:

- Other than transporting to 2 places (the lab/garden and the space area) there was nothing to do.
- I wanna choke that K9 . He was in the way when I was trying to press the buttons. Maybe move him to the back layer?
- No replayability what-so-ever. No point bubbles?
- You should make the meteor shower dissolve.

I think you can improve this level alot. Just put more time into it. I rated it 3 stars because i know you have the skill to improve this level.

For the F4F you could try my level Kinetic Crisis. The link is in my signature.		2010-07-22 06:50:00

Author:
L1GhTmArE
Posts: 519

I thought it was a decent concept. You could have implemented it a lot better, possibly made it less complicated, 3 stars for me!2010-07-28 22:52:00

Author:
Melted_Gummybear
Posts: 162

What do you think should be less complicated??
Thanks for the rating! What did you tag it?		2010-07-28 22:58:00

Author:
J05thompso
Posts: 16


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