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The Cursed Jungle

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The Cursed JungleBart0502
As the titel sais, this level is about a cursed jungle. An ancient civilisation, hidden deep in this jungle, is being attacked by evil demons. The people have already lost their hope. Untill... a little sackperson appears. Maybe he/she can offer help.
Hi people,

Finaly... my first level! And also my first post at LBP Central.

This post is about is a jungle-themed level, as you can read in the description above. Please tell me what you think about it. Is it maybe too easy? I am afraid it is, but what do you think. And are there maybe some grammer mistakes in the descriptions? Writing is English is still quite difficult for me, I prefer dutch. Or is there perhaps something else you want to tell about "The Cursed Jungle"? Feel yourself free to tell it!

Here, in the attachment, are some screenshots. My apologies for the bad quality, but I think they give a good impression of the level.

Thank you all for reading this,

Bart (Bart0502)
2010-07-20 12:39:00

Author:
Unknown User


Welkom heten op de site! Die schermen kijken groot-en ik zullen proberen te controleren of uw niveau erop vroeg! (I "met behulp van een vertaler.)

Welcome to the site! Those screens look great - I'll try to check your level out soon! (I'm using a translator.)
2010-07-20 12:40:00

Author:
Voltergeist
Posts: 1702


Thank you for your reply! (You don't have to use a translator. I'm afraid the translation is less easier to understand than normal English. )2010-07-20 19:56:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hahaha! Sorry, my bad.2010-07-20 20:54:00

Author:
Voltergeist
Posts: 1702


Wow this is your first level??? I'm pretty impressed! Now time to review.

Story: 9/10
Good story, interesting, and wanted to keep me playing!

Music Choice: 10/10
I couldn't of picked better music for this level

Corner Editing: 10/10
You've proven to be a great creator considering this is your first, the trees looked great as well as everything else.

Creatures/Objects: 8/10
All custom, except that turtle from down under. The "demon" after the mountain you go into I couldn't kill.

Gameplay: 8/10
Solid. One problem I had was at the beginning of the race, you have to press R to get rid of a blockage, but the level doesn't explain that. Also near the end of the race, I found it tough to pass the part where you fall into the spikes, but the parrot explained it so I guess that's alright. Loved the zipline. One part there's a mountain in the back and a tree blocking the way, I found out that you walk into the mountain, that was a little tough.

Overall: 9/10 (not an average)
I gave you :star::star::star::star::star: this really was great for your first! Can't wait to see your future levels!
2010-07-21 18:07:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


Thank you for your review!2010-07-22 11:38:00

Author:
Unknown User


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