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The Pride Land

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The Pride LandSuper_Clone
My first published level is obviously Savanna themed and also based off Mm's create mode demonstration played when your controller remains inactive. I obviously took a few creative licences with this level, but other than that I studied the video many times in an attempt to remain true to the original design. Although this level may be short, please keep in mind that it is my first and I was only trying to practice by recreating a demonstration. EDIT: I duplicated my older thread due to the following reasons: F4F, and I republished my level to include better lighting and material choices.
Comments? Suggestions?
http://lbp.me/v/sgkvf-
2010-07-19 18:09:00

Author:
Super_Clone
Posts: 849


I would suggest you add some photos so that it can be previewed here! 2010-07-20 19:07:00

Author:
javi haguse
Posts: 744


Sounds great! I'll play soon!2010-07-20 22:00:00

Author:
Unknown User


This level was worth playing....

Positives:
- Gameplay

Sugguestions:
- You should post pics of your level up

Overall it was worth playing...:star::star::star:
2010-07-21 10:33:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


I would say first, interesting idea with recreating the tutorial video. It seems as that was your goal that should somehow be worked into your title. But about the actual level, from what i remember it looks pretty dang close to the preview one. enemies are perfect. I think the car could you a little work to make it more exact. Overall, interesting idea and worth playing.

Please play my "A Realm Forgotten" and leave some feedback on my thread if you get some time, Thanks!
2010-07-23 00:59:00

Author:
Lockstitch
Posts: 415


Ha! Played your level! This is what I thought:

-We had a great time! Fishrock123 and I laughed the whole way through!
-The car ride was fun, But the car can flip easily off of the first ramp.
Almsot perfectly replicated! I was able to recognise everything from the demo in the level well! Great work!

I gave it 3 stars, and a heart because it was so fun!
2010-09-11 17:33:00

Author:
grayspence
Posts: 1990


As I was with grey as he did your F4F:

-Neat idea replicating the video.
-the 2nd checkpoint in the spinning tube is Very badly placed. It can span you right into the gas.
-the car can flip.

3x :star:
2010-09-11 18:02:00

Author:
Fishrock123
Posts: 1578


Thanks guys! I'll try and see what I can do with the Checkpoint, I think I have some ideas As for the car flipping, I think I can fix it, if not, I'll hae to wait 'till LBP2 and just use a gyroscope... Thanks again everyone for the feedback!2010-09-11 18:45:00

Author:
Super_Clone
Posts: 849


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