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Nuclear Fallout

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Nuclear Falloutlegory
You have grown up in one of the SINCLAIR VAULTS nuclear bunkers. Suddenly, a strange dream gives you a clue as to why you might be in it. Your exit seems to have been taken before... but by whom? You'll soon find out the world isn't all its chalked up to be.
(F4F Limit: 5)

So yeah, been working on this one for about two weeks, after I started playing Fallout 3 again. It's a fairly short level, based partly on FALLOUT. The events that happen in the level, though is a lot different.

I'm hoping to make this into a series of levels, and I hope to get feedback. So yeah. Go out there in the radiation and live a little! (bit less)
2010-07-15 07:18:00

Author:
legory
Posts: 39


I just published my second level in the series, which is a lot better. I know my first one didn't get... well any responses.

But I really want to go on with this and just finished level 2, which I feel is a lot better.

It takes place in my version of Megaton, Omegasun. Instead of a town of airplanes, it's a town of boats!

This is still F4F, and I hope it gets more responses.

FALLOUT #2 OMEGASUN search it!
2010-07-22 23:45:00

Author:
legory
Posts: 39


Hey I'll give you my thoughts on both your levels:

For the first: Not bad for a first level, but as you probably know, it really shows that it was your first level. Don't sweat it though, no one makes a master piece on their first go at it. It takes a while. I would say my biggest piece of advise would be to focus on making some obstacles or moving platforms for your players to have to traverse. You know how to make a theme, but your level lacks some gameplay.

For the second: Nice idea with the choice of who to shoot up, shows you moving in right direction with gameplay. Also, I liked your setting more in this one, felt a little fuller. Again, I'd say for your next one focus on more obstacles/moving parts for players to get over.

Hope this helps you.

Try my level "A Realm Forgotten" if you have time and leave me a comment on my thread, Thanks!
2010-07-23 00:29:00

Author:
Lockstitch
Posts: 415


@Lockstitch,
Thanks for the advice! I'll make sure to put in some platforming sections in the next level, I did think i was missing out on the gameplay aspect.

I'll make sure to try your level once I get on LBP!
2010-07-23 00:46:00

Author:
legory
Posts: 39


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