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Fantasy Adventure - Chapter I : The Beginning
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Fantasy Adventure - Chapter I : The BeginningALPHA-OMEGA81 Prologue of new series Hi all, I just published my latest level; Fantasy Adventure - Chapter I : The Beginning You will begin this tale in Faunath Kingdom, the city of Nature. You have to take care of chores in your village today. This will be the start of your adventure. This prologue is short, but I hope it's long enough to be interesting for you guys. Let me know what you think of it. | 2010-07-13 16:35:00 Author: AlPhAoMeGa81 Posts: 73 |
I'll give it a shot | 2010-07-13 16:42:00 Author: Meta-Armor Posts: 80 |
Very beautiful level! The amount of effort put into the level is obvious within the first few seconds of playing. The story line is great too. I can honestly say i'm looking forward to the next level! My only complaint is that i wish there were bubbles or alternative paths, but I'm sure that they were not there because this is simply a prologue and I hope to see them in the following levels. Also I feel that the title is a little week, maybe once you have decided on exactly how you're story is going to be, then you will make a title that fits this series more than the general title of Fantasy Adventure. None the less, 5Star and a Heart | 2010-07-13 17:01:00 Author: Meta-Armor Posts: 80 |
Thanks And yes, the bubbles and alternate paths are for future levels. It's indeed like this, because it's the prologue level ( I only used a few score bubbles to let you know what to do at a certain spot). As for the title, this is it I'm afraid...heheheh... You will get the idea when all the levels of this series are released and completed ( at least, that's what I hope). The story from this series will be connected to the story of my previous series, called Little Big Pilgrimage. Thanks for the comment, rating and heart! | 2010-07-13 17:45:00 Author: AlPhAoMeGa81 Posts: 73 |
Alright, I've made a few adjustments; - removed some " thermo-fiend-decorations" and replaced them with decorations that don't take up too much space. - added score bubbles throughout the stage ( also a few hidden ones). - overhauled the simple dynamite switch trigger; dynamight looks better now. - minor dialogue changes. Strangely enough, you only read ******** where it should say "what was that?". I've had to update this level a few times because it still was unreadable after changing it into something else. Weird... - added introduction and title near completion of prologue Have fun! | 2010-07-14 14:45:00 Author: AlPhAoMeGa81 Posts: 73 |
This level was pretty smooth I liked the way you designed things in the beginning & forrest liked that alot and the bird.. Positives: - Platforming - Well designed - houses - Garden was pretty smooth Overall Nice Job:star::star::star::star: | 2010-07-15 08:16:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653 |
Thanks for the comment and 4 stars! I'm glad that you like how I designed the level. I always put alot of effort in those things and other small details. | 2010-07-15 08:47:00 Author: AlPhAoMeGa81 Posts: 73 |
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