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Arctic CavernsPerfectBlaze001
Arctic Level with caves and Fun little hidden things. It's my first level Ever!
This is my first post here well Second post here but This post is about my FIRST LEVEL! I'm ever excited about it and I hope you all will play it and tell me what you think! I've put loads of hours into this level so I hope who ever gets a chance to play it Enjoys it!

About the Level:
It's and Arctic level with about 3 caves. I would post a Picture but I'm about to go join my girl in bed. It's 5:00 am lol. Play and enjoy. Feed back is more than welcome.

Thank you,
PerfectBlaze 		2010-07-11 09:58:00

Author:
Perfectblaze
Posts: 22

I want to update my level with out overwriting it where do i go to do it? Do I just go to (Publish) then go to "my level" and overwrite it?2010-07-11 19:10:00

Author:
Perfectblaze
Posts: 22

it's not to late to get

(FIRST!) BRONZE TROPHY Be among the first 10 people to complete a community level

I've updated the level 3 times now so it's much smother. Thanks for playing and commenting 		2010-07-13 20:56:00

Author:
Perfectblaze
Posts: 22

For your 1st time wasnt to bad, better then wat i did first playing ok umm..

Negatives:
- The falling ice in the beginning is kinda off specially how big they are just look like there appearin n mid air...
-Starting level on ground
- Needs just lil more work

Positives:
- For 1st timer you got the rock falling and stuff lookin realistic but need to make ice n beginning fall from something
- i've completed it lol most peoples 1st time levels has no end or didnt make 1 so good job with the building

Sugguestions:
- Fix Ice in beginning (shrink some )
- build away from ground a little

Other then that good job for 1st time more you practice better you'll get just takes time 		2010-07-14 09:20:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653

Hey man,

I just played your level and I am impressed at your skill with visuals considering this is your first level. The first room looked great and climbing the rocks looked pretty nice as well. As I played through I kept thinking how good the mountain looked. Anyways here is what I noticed:

Likes:

Looks of the mountains and caves is a good combo of materials and stickers, nice views.
Rolling lava rocks with paintinater.
Part with broken lift and falling rocks looked awesome and i liked the use of the yellow and black sticker to designate the correct path.


Suggestions:

Lose the falling ice in the beginning, it looks thrown together and it falls from nowhere.
What was the deal with the mine cart with the LOLZ sticker in it? Was it there just to blast me off the mountain and make me climb back up?
The first elevator is way off target from the ledge at the top and that makes it look out of place.
The first mine cart ride needs to be disguised a little more and you should change the music. It was distracting and it made me think of the Mines from the story levels.
Hide the paint switch on the rolling lava, people will know to shoot them.


Keep up the good work that was a fun level and I had no trouble finishing it. It was challenging and looked great.
:star::star::star:<3

-DT		2010-07-14 10:14:00

Author:
dTOtheTEE
Posts: 183

WoW Thanks a lot for the feed back! Those are good points and I will go back in tonight and fix what has been said.
Thank you both for playing & taking time to give feed back. Also thanks for the complements on the level. I tried my hardest and It took me weeks to build.		2010-07-14 13:34:00

Author:
Perfectblaze
Posts: 22

WoW Thanks a lot for the feed back! Those are good points and I will go back in tonight and fix what has been said.
Thank you both for playing & taking time to give feed back. Also thanks for the complements on the level. I tried my hardest and It took me weeks to build.

No problem man yea nice job for your first time if you want you can add me I've sent you a friend request on here
and if you would also wanna add me on psn its Sabre_ I could help you with any problems you might have in future or
test your levels before you publish it so I can give you some feedback that will help 		2010-07-14 13:39:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653

Sounds good Thank you.2010-07-14 16:43:00

Author:
Perfectblaze
Posts: 22

Hey man I just played your level and let me tell you if was nice but it needs some work. The visualization was good but I think you should make it look like a caver, The gameplay was a little off you need to make it better create a puzzle it wound be really cool if you can do that. Also only put around 2 music track in the level because you were changing them no many times.

Extra: Use the grid more

overall Score.

Visualization: :star::star::star:
Gameplay/Puzzle: :star::star::star:
Originality: :star::star::star:
Music/Sound Affects: :star::star::star:
Theme: :star::star::star::star:

I gave this level a :star::star::star: it was a really nice level impressive that it was your first you should have seen my first level lol

Also can you F4F my level please here is the link to my level thread: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=29356-Sackboy-And-The-Demantoid-Crystal-%28part1-2%29

Thanks 		2010-07-16 22:14:00

Author:
Arnald23
Posts: 1843

@Arnaldo17
Hey man Thank you for rating and playing and everything. My second level will be much better and thanks for the compliment on the first level thing. I was hoping someone would say hey good stuff for a first level. My heat is pretty high in that one so I don't think I'm going to add to it. I would love to get 50 plays and get that trophy though. It's tough to get people to try it though.

Again, Thanks for all the support and be on the look out for my second level.

OH and I've republished this level about 10 times for anyone that want to try it.
On to the next one. 		2010-07-22 22:57:00

Author:
Perfectblaze
Posts: 22


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