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Tasty Pastry? Or Just Desserts?

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A level recipe. Or a recipe level? Either way, it's something new I thought I'd try2010-07-10 08:21:00

Author:
Alismuffin
Posts: 1328


My taste buds are tingling already... I'll give it a go later.2010-07-10 10:45:00

Author:
Fastbro
Posts: 1277


I just played your level and its AWSOME the only problem was that i had controle problems with the balloon it was hard.

i loved chef in the box he was and awsome character!

Good luck in the contest! i gave it 5 stars and a heart!
2010-07-10 11:20:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


Sounds tasty! I might have to give it a taste sooner or later!

Edit:

Hey man! I just played your level, and it was pretty awesome! I'm sure that this level is going to get spotlighted just like all your other levels. The only real trouble I had was with the marshmallow balloon thing. I kept having to go back and press the button to get the balloon to be upright again. And the fact that everything else in the marshmallow land was grabbable didn't really seem to help. Because when ever I would jump up and grab the top marshmallow I would accidentally grab part of the environment.

Other than that, it was an awesome level! I gave you five stars :star::star::star::star::star: and hearted you as a creator <3.

Great job man!
2010-07-10 17:53:00

Author:
eagerneph
Posts: 1536


Curse You World! You made a good creator create awesome a bit to fast!
Anyways, I haven't tried it out, but I'm sure I would love it.
2010-07-10 23:30:00

Author:
Spark151
Posts: 801


Hey Ali,

This level was awesome! You have a pretty good chance of winning the contest.

Race 1: This race was the hardest It was good that you used a proximity switch to dissolve the marshmallows, because it would have been time consuming to grab them instead. The balloon carriage was difficult to control, because if I wanted to go left or right, the whole thing would just kind of start spinning in that direction. I wanted to get the bubbles that were scattered in this race, but it was tough. Although this race was hard, it was just as fun

Race 2: This was easy as pie or I mean onions This race was pretty much step on the gas and go. Sometimes I thought I was going to flip over, but lucky I didn't. So, there was a sense of balancing in there as well.

Race 3: This one was my favorite. I loved the challenge on this one. There was problem in this race though. You had to make sure the bucket was directly in the middle of the chocolate ponds to actually make progress. But, I think you did that on purpose to make the race more challenging? Anyways, it was fun.

Overall, your vehicles were nicely made and designed, you races were fun and well thought out, and...well, I just had a blast playing! :star::star::star::star::star: and a <3

Good luck in the contest man!
2010-07-11 00:48:00

Author:
TheNerd
Posts: 840


thanks guys! i was thinking of a way to fix the first race issue and i came up w/ a solution!
ill implement it soon i hope and it should fix the issue

thanks for playing! its not the best as it is rushed but i appreciate the kind words
2010-07-11 12:27:00

Author:
Alismuffin
Posts: 1328


Sorry if i'm harsh but during the whole balloon ride i had no complete idea what to do so i gave your level 3 stars and a Heart... didn't finish the level tho2010-07-12 00:32:00

Author:
Ragefulnoobs
Posts: 76


lol you still rated it and you did not finish? i dont rate if i didint finish because its most likly my fault if i dont finish because others managed

so your rating is ok but you should try again and read the magic mouth that say colect the marsh mellows
2010-07-12 01:29:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


Ok guys, I added a pinch of sugar and a cup of flour and it's baked up to be a bit easier to chew. Download the new version ples!2010-07-12 04:56:00

Author:
Alismuffin
Posts: 1328


Oh cool i will donload it right away2010-07-12 06:36:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


I just replayed your newer ver of the level and its awsome the baloon works better now2010-07-12 07:42:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


Thanks alot famouscustard

alot of inspiration came from salieri's brillian hot air balloon he made a while ago

anyways thanks so much for the kind words

@sketchnz: thats good to hear
2010-07-12 07:48:00

Author:
Alismuffin
Posts: 1328


Time for ze oh-so supah feedback!!

I liked the game play elements. Everything was based in a kitchen and little based food worlds. The corner editing was very sharp and good. The character were very cartoonish and nice. Have you used any references for the character? Anyways, I liked the whole theme based in a kitchen. The kitchen looks big. It's good to see a level that makes Sackboy look tiny.

When I first saw this level, I didn't realize it was a contest entry until I played the seacond race. I didn't like the first race. The area looked awesome, but I was glad I was done with the race. Then, in the third race, I had a problem and had to restart the level. I'll mention the problem later.

The second race was very short, but not only short; The race happened to be designed nice and fun to playthrough. I wanted to play the level again for this race, but I didn't want to play the first race again.

The third race. The one I had the problem with.
You know how you dip that thing in the three chocolates, I realized I only dip the thing in one chocolate total. Therefore, I went back, but the hill near the first chocolate caused me to fall over. I thought I can re-emit it, but no sadly. I had to restart because of this race. Did I mention how much I didn't like the first race? Oh, I forgot to mention, I hate Glokenpop. Now, I took a day break to play this again. I finally realized I had to dip the thing in the center chocolate. Good level, and cool pastry. Anyways, I'll go off and rate you.

Length: 5/5 (Length was varied and it was fun lasting)
Material Usage: 5/5 (Those colors were colorful and bright)
Sticker Work: 5/5 (Very nice, but you stuck mostly to materials and corner editing)
Corner Editing: 5/5 (Best edges I've seen. Very awesome!!)
Terrain/Mechanics: 5/5 (Land was very themeful and mechanics were well implemented)
Story: 5/5 (Like helping make food? And velhicles? This is the level!)

Total: 30/30 Perfect Score!!
This level is well deserving. It needs all the attention it deserves.
Anyways, 5 stars :star::star::star::star::star: and a heart. <3

Until we cross each other again,
-Spark
2010-07-12 18:36:00

Author:
Spark151
Posts: 801


Lemma grab my PSP and play the junk out of it ... ill be back... and btw i bet you hate me SketchNZ lol2010-07-13 01:44:00

Author:
Ragefulnoobs
Posts: 76


I am currently playing this level and honestly I have no idea what to do. How do you get the marshmallow blocking the way on the far right island thing?2010-07-13 03:33:00

Author:
Nuffles
Posts: 132


u have to fly around all the islands to collect all the marshmallows which are dissolvable. Just fly past ill u get them then u can go back up to the kitchen2010-07-13 03:38:00

Author:
Alismuffin
Posts: 1328


One of the speech bubbles stops at "only pick the ones caked in a" you might want to republish.

Ok, finished the level and I have to say, It wasn't my kind of level. The whole first race kind of ruined it for me. Collecting the marshmallows was tedious and annoying. The flying machine was kind of hard to use, but manageable.
I admit that some of my confusion was my own stupidity, but I think some of it has to do with the lack of speech bubbles directing the player. At first, I didn't even know that I could fly to the left of where the machine spawns. This made me confused as to why there weren't 8 marshmallows.

Sorry If I came off a bit harsh, and don't get me wrong, this is a well designed, good looking level, but it just isn't very user friendly.

Or it may just be me...

Haha, I gave it :star::star::star::star: anyway, but if you add some more directions that rating could change.
F4F is in my sig if you want.
2010-07-13 03:46:00

Author:
Nuffles
Posts: 132


yea u should be able to fly by and collect them w/out getting out

oh noes! thanks for pointing that out
2010-07-13 03:49:00

Author:
Alismuffin
Posts: 1328


The level was AWSOME and really fun. Everything was nicely done like the chef. I gave it 5 stars and heart.
GOOD JOB
2010-07-14 18:43:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


Congratulations of winning the Vehicle Triathlon Competition! Your level was both awesome to play and to look at. Great work meshing a fun scenario with awesome racing and art work!

BTW: Make sure to check your PMs over at LittleBigLand :-D
2010-07-17 16:51:00

Author:
amazingflyingpoo
Posts: 1515


Hi Ali! I wasn't expecting much from the description but the level is beautifully drawn. The opening area blew me away... The chef, the doors and all the kitchen stuff were so well done. So much so, I was comparing it to some of the PS3 levels.

The first race was hard as others said. I played around with it a bit and got the hang of it. I think it was just too big and awkward to control.

Hi Ali! I wasn't expecting much from the description but the level is beautifully drawn. The opening area blew me away... The chef, the doors and all the kitchen stuff were so well done. So much so, I was comparing it to some of the PS3 levels.

The first race was hard as others said. I played around with it a bit and got the hang of it. I think it was just too big and awkward to control.

The second race was great but short. It had a turbo pack feel to it. For some reason I can never make it on the first run though. =P

The third was an interesting twist on the usual race. Trying to time the dip as you sped by was fun.


I really enjoyed the theme of this level. I think it would work better as a platformer because you rush through it so fast you don’t get to enjoy all the lovely scenery.


Xenon
2010-07-21 06:54:00

Author:
Xenon
Posts: 306


Hey Ali
If I didn't mention before, I enjoyed this level alot. You always come up with such creative themes, and this was no exception. Everything was made nicely with great detail, and the races were creative. The only one I took issue with was the air balloon, because I didn't know the marshmallows disppeared within proximity, and I kept jumping out and cursing, lol. I just found out reading the feedback here, so it might have been a good idea to have put that info in the level. Congrats on winning a sticker too!
2010-07-21 20:13:00

Author:
kaiju_kid
Posts: 329


This level is phenomenal and one of my all time favorites!

Story: 10/10
Gathering ingredients to make food, original and interesting.

Music Choice: 7/10
Ummm, Glokenpop...? lol I had to turn the volume down then.

Corner Editing/Material Use: 10/10
Everything looks great together!

Creatures/Objects: 10/10
The main "chef" guy looked awesome as well as every other object in the level.

Gameplay: 10/10
Not like anything I've played before, really interesting. I mean there's nothing else I'd add to it, everything was great. However the only tough part was controlling that balloon, I'm sure others have mentioned it, but it was still possible.

Overall: 10/10 (not an average)
Great level. This was an easy to rate :star::star::star::star::star: and a <3
2010-07-22 15:56:00

Author:
anoken
Posts: 1654


apart from the irritating balloon and the well hidden items there is only one word i can use to describe this and it is...

FUN funfunfunfun,fun fun fun oh and fun! or to put another way
2010-07-22 19:46:00

Author:
unXpectiD
Posts: 1132


Congratulations on another spotlight my friend!!!2010-07-25 19:32:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


Hey ali,

Congratulations on yet another Community Spotlight! I love the concept, and the execution was immaculate. The chef was ace, but my favorite was scooping the chocolate with that big candy vehicle. Mmm. If only that was a real job...

Well, I would tell you to keep making levels, but I already know you will!
Can't wait for your next masterpiece!



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QnPVjlOFjB8



A sweet tooth,
jeffcu28
2010-07-25 21:09:00

Author:
jeffcu28
Posts: 648


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